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The chickens come home to roost in this chapter... Arthur is learning that hard way that grace is not infinite . Sophia....she is one character I feel deserves all that is coming her way . Ambition is alright....but having too much of it is detrimental to society as she is made to learn the hard way ..

Blimey!..the Lord of emotional chaos is back..you were missed @CasualWanderer82 That being said Sprite is scary as hell...He is yet another one of those scary yet cannot do without characters .. Thank you!

All is well that ends well...the lads did finally communicate as I had hoping they would . It was such a whimsical read . I thoroughly enjoyed the angst ..thank you!

There is some calm for a while ...in Lilan sui's universe that means that calm will not hold for much longer... That being said...the scenes with the sisters was so heart warming..

So basically all these lads were children of destiny. Am starting to think Zal was wrong to 'dismiss' them.. All the five lads seem to somehow be linked to the Red comet . That being said this chapter reminded me of something I once read , sometimes we find ourselves on journeys we never intended and yet are meant to be on. Thank you!

Now this is turning into a comedy of errors..these lads are just too hot headed ..eh

Sophia...is seriously demented....now Artie...has really gone and lost it...that old geezer is such a hot mess at the moment

Good...finally we can have some sort of communication going on...Some much can be achieved if only people really talk to each other ..

What is that expression...oh yeah. confession is the balm of the soul. ..Now if only he could say it aloud

We should come up with a name for the sleuthing duo of Lawrence and Ali..hehe..

Whoa...my favourite mismatched couple ...it's been a while since we met Danae and Darren

Finally...my favourite dwarf Plink is free..she can go wreck her brand of mayhem in Dimalos .. Franz can be a twat sometimes ..and no where is it more evident than in this chapter Now the arcs seem to be headed to convergence .All parties ,at least the ones that matter, now know seem to be on the same trajectory .

Suburbia ,anywhere, is full of trauma How Christian has survived the jungle that is High school upto this point in the story without friends ought to be studied ..eh.

Being a teenager is hard enough..Being a teenager wrestling with your sexuality makes it even harder .. Humans are inherently social so we make all efforts to ensure we 'fit' in ,sometimes to our own detriment. The Mark situation validates that.. He subconsciously knows he is different but the price of acknowledging so is something he fears .

I believe that is a default setting for every youth who suddenly realizes they are queer. The journey is always the same ,it's the speed at which the realization comes that differs. That being said ...Mark is in a really dark place at this point in the story .

Oh my!..here we go

Only you can drop such a bomb at the tail end of a chapter @Laura S. Fox..hehe That being said .. that mini-revelation cooked

And so marks the beginning of the downfall of a one Elyssa Monteilon. This woman has the terrible combo .Ambition and Lust/desire making her lose her wits . Why does Tac all of a sudden seem worse than the other villains ?..At least thee others don't pretend to be something they are not. Tac Temogam is a whole different beast . A kindly facade hides a ruthless and ambitious power hungry 'tyrant' This series reminds of Game of Thrones ...folks quibbling over a throne yet there was an apocalyptic threat looming over them ...It's the same here ..all these folks fighting for power, territories yet there is a supernatural threat headed towards them.. Makes me feel some bit of empathy for Isendar Vargan at this point .. at least he knows they are gnats in the general scheme of play unfolding in their universe Thank you!

What a triple whammy on Nos's hands...Mate angst .Toxic parents. orion and his acolytes..That's too much for anyone to handle

Vampires invented familial dysfunction in Fiction..haha

Oh dear ..Poor Ade..there seems no way to escape Lurk's clutches .. Am I the only one who has noticed the characters are dropping off one by one😉

Teenage foibles I guess

Thank you for offering us a seat on this ride @mastershakeme..it was splendid !

I have never wanted to see a character brought down to earth so badly like have wished for Sophia since her introduction .. That woman has a warped mind...her delusion of grandeur ought to be studied..eh

Now that is how you channel Elsa and literally Let it go.. This chapter I was expecting like crazy. .and it lived up to it. That coming out scene is just so.. beautifully cathartic!...Am still thinking about it even when I write this.. You outdid yourself with this one @mastershakeme