This was one of the finest piece of true Western story telling I have read in a long time! You will enjoy it immensely! Then go read the rest of his stories as well. You won't be disappointed!
Yes, tissues at the end when Leon said, he is the best brother a guy could hope for. I lost it there!
Sorry for not commenting on some chapters but this story brings back too many memories of a couple of instances that was in my life! Not sharing though since it is too painful.
Glad their plan went the way they wanted it too and I hated that Pamela went out that way, but it was for the best cause of the way she was. Good job, Wayne!
Well, it looks like Stephen has found his feeling of belonging finally!
I can see the hearing of Gavin's now! But don't want to be wrong so will just stay quiet! Wait, did I say that? Women are not quiet! Hmmmmmmmmm....................... trying to be quiet...................
Well it looks like Jeff can't go by the rules. Let's find out just how much trouble he gets in. Bring it on, @Lee Wilson! Give us your expertise of story telling!
Poor Leon to have to go through that at a young age. Mark is a piece of shit and should have the same treatment but worse. Hope he doesn't show up though cause he should just try to be a better man.
@Myr, you did a outstanding job on this story! Can't say that about my spelling today because I have had to correct it a lot for some reason! I even have new reading glasses but keep hitting the wrong letters lol I may need a teacher! 🙃
OMG, this was a tissue reading story and yes, Comicality would have loved it! Great job, @empath! Now, to get more tissues! Where is my other box of tissues at? Oh, there they are! Thank goodness! 😭
Great prologue! I too have moved a few times but 99% of those were in the same general area of my hometown which I still reside in. I did go to a school that was in the area close to where I lived when I first started school but they made us change when that school closed down. which was when I was fixing to go in the 5th grade then went to the school we changed to till the 10th and then because of my parents separating I decided to live with her and went to another school but the following year decided to go back to the other school I use to go too until I graduated. Yes, it does seem strange that I am a high school graduate and also to your surprise I did go to college and got my license in cosmetology even though I did not keep my license after 11 years. lol thought I would make a funny joke out of me being a high school graduate. Glad it didn't take me until I am 70 to do it but it did take me till I was 20! I was a lazy student in high school! hehehe