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Mattyboy

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  1. Mattyboy

    Disobedience

    Wynderful! Well done about the sensory overload on Wyn's hearing yes, Wren will not be happy with this. A nasty end for Helva, but she had it coming.
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    Chapter 14

    I know, but poor Sedwick!
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    Chapter 14

    It's been a while since the team has thought of poor Raimey and the short short prince. The prince is doing without, and so Raimey and Morty and Miles are doing without. It's all very well for Jamie and Snave to be founding entire new schools of magickal knowledge, but we must think of poor Sedwick, who seems many chapters away from a climactic resolution to his problem.
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    Chapter 14

    "To know that the great rockets soared into the sky four times each day on some mission he could not understand, and had likely been doing so for millennia of time, was nearly overpowering to contemplate. The machines of the ancients displayed a devotion to duty and a resistance to failure that simply could not miss to instill wonder. " well, wonder indeed, and excellent that the plumbing is also operational and presumably self-repairing. But that the rockets are now (probably) purposeless is not yet quite in Jamie's grasp. So, did the shop in town get locked into time-stasis? Are the unwatered plants and the untended willowisps getting out of hand? The exchanges of knowledge with Irik do seem to have reached the status of quite a fine payment to it (him?).
  5. @Laura S. Fox has a story you'll be interested in, then, I expect
  6. Good, good, good. But Zoey might like a little companionship. Didn't Dex come up as a maybe about 30 chapters ago?
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    Chapter 4

    A short story from the first Thieves' World book was about a mage whose power came from a secret nobody knew. A bit obscure by now, but it let me guess without it being a spoiler if I was right.
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    Chapter 6

    And excellent that Snave doesn't detect anything bad about Flitch or the dark lens. And the boys certainly have a card to play if they have to answer later about neglecting the shop and their instruction to not get up to too much trouble.
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    Chapter 4

    I'm kinda guessing it's like the Secret of the Blue Star, but I guess we'll see.
  10. "full of echoes," indeed May 3 : a tiny perfect sentence.
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    Conversations

    Very nice and quite hopeful that this moth, at least, will have some further adventures. Poignant and funny with Dad I know you're not writing this as a comedy, and it's been plotted out for a years, but Jason finding out sounds like it would be very fun.
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    Chapter 14

    Thanks for the note, @Summerabbacat. Honoured to be allies in angry with you.
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    Chapter 14

    Yes indeed. And I agree that it's good parenting for Diego to be making sure Bryan knew the history. But the exchange left me curious in how Diego handled it, maybe he'll say more later.
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    Chapter 14

    Bryan might not be sure how to express himself about Kenny, but he sure knows what he thinks about Calvin. Calvin may well have lawyered up (with what money, we might ask, but maybe a crazy church is helping him or something). Diego knows who Bryan is, but I feel his soul would love to see this exchange, even though he'll also feel the need to parent it back down to sanity. I'm not sure that history lesson was exactly what Bryan was looking for with "how did you handle it?,"
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    War

    Well, that's a cliffhanger for sure I'm caught up now, if you were waiting for me.
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    Lull

    If the edit button is still live you can reduce it to a "." Of flag a mod with the report button and ask them to delete it.
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    Little Queen

    Granny Alauis could be pretty useful around the house if she can step out from being awful Yay for Wyn's story
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    Change of Plans

    Mom not being terrible was a surprise twist. Although if Dad "had a deal that went wrong" I guess he'll have to be dealt with.
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    Secrets

    Surely the House of Waves could have room for a nanny? So has anyone told Wyn that Wren is back? I like Meryck.
  20. Well, @Dan South was right about Wren's attitude about Lyme. Hope Wren gets some stage time soon, he's got a lot of experience that'll likely help. but looking forward to him angrily dealing with not being a monster anymore. Maybe Wyn can get him interested in gardening?
  21. I'm sure Wren needs some time with Eon, but maybe somebody should tell Loren? I feel he'd like to know. And Wyn would definitely like to know Uncle Wren is back!
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    Preparations

    I think Wren might understand Lyme's interest. And Wren seems to be something for Eon that no one else can offer. I'd been wondering if EonWren was partly powered by Eon liking it wild, but he's so huge and powerful that that's not necessarily safe for most people, but Wren is up to him and more.
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    Consequences

    Quote: Who's y'all's favorite? Kalian's still my favorite. Ordinary-nice-boy goes sun-mage-duke is great. Wren and Wyn are wonderfully original characters. As Talon and a lot of the cast are. Tyren. Wyn needs more stage time. Wren-Eon is fucking wonderful but needs some unpacking . . . Eon went for someone who wanted him for his beefy body rather than his lineage or his magik? I feel there's a sense to be made of that relationship but you've never really unpacked it for us. You showed us that Wren craved some warm humanity, but it was Eon's jam because . . . ?
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    Stuck

    On another note, kudos to you @Demiurge for your accounts of disability - Wyn spending years deaf and Lyrah spending years blind, and despite healing and adaptive devices it still matters for them. And Wren's . . . um, . . . "diversity in metabolic status" I guess I'll call it.
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    Stuck

    Dlethian law might not recognize it, but by ordinary standards Wyn is Talon's foster-son. Marital status isn't really at play there. Wyn has been introduced at the Dlethian court, but I presume Sumerion was rude about it? Talon and Suman share a grandfather, so they're cousins. So Wyn is Suman's first-cousin-once-removed (ignoring the foster-status thing). He'd be second cousins with Suman's kids, marriage isn't relevant for that (it could be if Kalian had kids from a previous relationship). He'd be first cousins with Lyrah's kids. Sumerion's aggressive over-pruning of his family tree puts Wyn plausibly 4th in line for the Dlethian throne. No sign Kalian has thought that through, but if he does it might keep Sumerion from being chopped into 143 medium-rare chunks.
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