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Steve's family moved before his 9th grade year, and it was to a town that didn't seem to accept outsiders. He eventually met Daniel, whose family had moved to the same town shortly before his family did. Unfortunately, both boys came from dysfunctional families and were now in a town where they were harassed on a daily basis, but at least they had each other.
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It wasn't just the dysfunctional families, they lived in a dysfunctional town. Not everyone in the world is dysfunctional, but there are a fair share of dysfunctional people breathing the air - possibly even more than 50%. It was truly a sad story, but at least the boys got their wish and got away from it all. Maybe now they'll be able to enjoy themselves and each other. By the way, I think having the school built before WW II would have been more appropriate, because the school that you described would fit better into that period. The schools built in post WW II no longer had hardwood floors and high ceilings, if judged by the high school I attended, which was built in 1960. My Junior High (the old Jr/Sr High) was more like the one in your story and it was built in 1939.
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reassurance - Word of the Day - Sun Aug 16, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Reassurance in storytelling provides emotional safety and reduces anxiety, helping audiences process complex realities and feel less alone. Why Reassurance Matters: Reduces Anxiety: Stories that offer comfort or a predictable structure help lower stress and calm the nervous system (insights via Headspace). Validates Emotions: Reassurance through narrative lets readers know their struggles are shared and normal. -
reassurance - Word of the Day - Sun Aug 16, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
The word reassurance comes from the verb reassure with the noun suffix -ance that describes an action, state, or conditio. Reassurance was initially used to mean a repeated confirmation, a renewed pledge, or a financial term for a second insurance policy against a risk. In 18/5 the emotional meaning of restoring someone's courage, certainty, or confidence became widespread. The noun "reassurance" was first used in English in 1611 in the writings of John Florio, a linguist and author, according to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED). The verb reassure appeared slightly earlier in 1592, while the adjective reassuring emerged later in 1753. -
"My little chickadee" was W.C. Fields' trademark catchphrase. He also starred in the 1940 file "My Little Chickadee" alongside Mae West. The Forbidden Author contests have been difficult, but fun, although I wish more people had voted for the best story. Maybe you still have time, if you hurry, so see what you can do.
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assurance - Word of the Day - Sat Aug 15, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Assurance in storytelling builds trust and give the audience emotional safety, helping them engage with complex or risky ideas. Why Assurance Matters: Reduces Fear: When a narrator provides psychological or structural safety, the audience feels secure enough to explore difficult themes. Builds Trust: Clear promises and reliable narrative stakes make listeners or readers confident in the storyteller's direction (learn more about building trust via Insurance Journal). Anchors Emotion: Knowing a safe resolution or a grounded truth exists allows the audience to process heavy emotional weight without feeling overwhelmed. Guides Understanding: Clear boundaries—much like a fence around a garden—ensure abstract concepts remain easy to digest without feeling overly restrictive. -
assurance - Word of the Day - Sat Aug 15, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
The word assurance comes from late 14th-century Middle English (assuraunce), derived from Old French asseurance, which means a promise, truce, or certainty, based on the verb asseurer (to assure or make sure to the root verb. The noun form was created by adding the Old French suffix -ance (denoting an action or state). The Old French traces back to Latin roots, ad- (to) and securus (meaning safe, secure, carefree, or free from worry). According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED) the noun "assurance" was first used in English around 1374 in the writings of the poet and administrator Geoffrey Chaucer to mean a solemn pledge or full confidence. The word later acquired a sense of self-confidence in the late 1500s, and sometimes carried a negative tint of impudence or presumption by the 1700s. The verb "assure" was first used in English around 1370 in the Lay-Folks Mass-book. The noun form of "assure" appeared around 1374 in the writings of Geoffrey Chaucer. -
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This is definitely a Halloween tale that will send shivers up and down your spine, so if you like a spooky and unpredictable Halloween short story, then read this little gem.
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This Time Will Be Different
Bill W commented on Bardeara's story chapter in This Time Will Be Different
When Brent mentioned the accident for the first time, I thought it might have left Lucas disfigured and that's why he was always so reticent to say much or allow Brent to drive him home. I thought Lucas might have felt that Brent was only doing it because he felt sorry for him. This put an entirely different twist on what I was expecting. Good job! -
This is a cute and imaginative fairy tale using anthropomorphism to show a group of pumpkins getting ready for a Halloween contest. There are two primary groups. First, three large pumpkins that were bullies and often threatened the other pumpkins to get out of the contest so they could win. The other group consisted of three smaller pumpkins that ignored the threats from the bullies. It's a charming story that is a little predictable, but you should still check it out to discover the details of what happens.
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The Little Pumpkin Who Could
Bill W commented on Anna's story chapter in The Little Pumpkin Who Could
A cute fairy tale and pumkins getting ready for a Halloween contest. It was unique and imaginative and fit the anthology theme. -
The MC is a high school student and attends a party given by his friend, Chloe. While there, the MC meets another student that he's never seen before named Brad and they immediately hit it off. The boys spend the night together, but mostly talking, cuddling, and getting to know one another. The next day Brad informs the MC that he will be going abroad with his aunt for a week, but will see him again when he returns. Although the MC is afraid that Brad will change his mind about him before he gets back, but that doesn't happen. However, when he returns, Brad tells the MC a few details about his life that may change the situation. This short story is filled with teen angst, a lot of emotion, and plenty of tenderness. It is a good read, although sad, but give it a read and see what you think.
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That happens when you get old, your cock-a-leekie!
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Tad is gay and has a crush on Marco, but Tad's too shy to start a conversation with him. His best friend, Joyce, tries to encourage him to talk to Marco and start a normal conversation, but Tad's just too nervous to do it. This story is filled with plenty of teen angst, a lot of drama, and some unexpected twists and turns, but it could have used a few more paragraphs to tie things together at the end.
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You can't bring me this far and then not tell me what happened on the cruise!
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Finding My Summer Adventure
Bill W reviewed nicks_a_writer's story in 2006 - Summer - Going on Vacation
Eric thinks his summer vacation is ruined because he has to spend the first two weeks with his grandparents at the retirement center where they live. Luckily for him, fate had a different plan in mind, so it didn't work out as badly as he feared. If you want to discover what improved for him, then read this cute short story to find out. -
Finding My Summer Adventure
Bill W commented on nicks_a_writer's story chapter in Finding My Summer Adventure
You managed to work out the lousy first two weeks of summer vacation for Eric, and then Eric and Jackson seemed to work out nearly everything out so they could stay together after the summer ended. Cute story with a romantic ending. -
The traditional dictionary spelling for the noun (plural: posies). It matches standard English rules for nouns ending in a "y" sound. (This is not just me saying it)
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That's why most people spell the word for flower as posy or posey, not posie.
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Poise in storytelling is the calm control and balance a speaker shows. It builds trust, helps the audience focus on the message, and turns a nervous delivery into a smooth, powerful experience. Why Poise Matters: Builds Trust: A calm speaker makes listeners feel safe and sure. Controls the Pace: Slow, steady movements and pauses give heavy moments room to breathe. Reduces Noise: It stops nervous habits so the core message shines. Shows Confidence: Standing tall and steady proves you know your value and your story. How to Practice Poise: Breathe Deeply: Calm breaths keep your body steady and your voice clear. Use Clean Gestures: Make intentional movements that match your words, then rest your hands. Embrace Pauses: Do not rush through quiet or scary parts of the tale. Focus on the Listeners: Think about helping the audience rather than how you look.
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The word poise comes from the Old French word pois ("to weigh on a scale" or "heaviness"), which traces back to the Latin word pensum ("a weighed portion" or "something withed") and the verb pendere ("hang", "cause to hang" or "weigh"). Over time, the meaning shifted from literal physical weight to a balanced state, and by the 1640s, to emotional and mental balance. It was borrowed into Middle English as poisem / pois in the 14th and 15th centuries to mean physical weight, heaviness, or equilibrium. In the 16th century the meaning evolved to describe a state of being equally weighted on both sides (equilibrium). In the 1640s it shifted metaphorically to mean mental steadiness, calmness, and composure. In the 1770s it expanded to describe physical carriage, or the way a person carries their body. According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest recorded use of "poise" depends on the part of speech. The verb appears first in 1389, while the primary noun form (weight / balance dates back to 1421 in the Rolls of Parliament. The secondary noun form (unit of viscosity) appears much later in 1913.
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determined - Word of the Day - Thu Aug 13, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
The concept of being "determined" serves as the vital engine of narrative momentum, transforming passive characters into active agents. A character's firm resolution gives the plot a clear trajectory, converts abstract stakes into visceral conflict, and grounds emotional resonance so audiences care whether they succeed or fail. Core Functions of Determination: Drives the Plot: Moves the story forward from the inciting incident to the climax through purposeful action. Generates Conflict: Pits an unwavering goal against escalating obstacles, forcing meaningful choices. Builds Empathy: Proves character values through sacrifice, making struggle meaningful rather than arbitrary. Proves Theme: Demonstrates the ultimate cost or truth of the narrative through persistent effort. Impact on Audience Engagement: Raises the Stakes: Makes every setback feel heavy because the character refuses to quit. Creates Catharsis: Delivers a satisfying payoff when resolution matches earned effort. Prevents Stagnation: Stops narratives from stalling when external circumstances overwhelm the protagonist. -
determined - Word of the Day - Thu Aug 13, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
The word determined comes from Latin via Old French, tracing back to roots meaning "to mark out boundaries" or "to lmit". It derives from the Latin verb determinare (to enclose or set limits), combining de- (off, out) and terminare (to bound or finish, from terminus, meaning end or limit) and the Old French déterminer ("to settle, decide, or define"). It was introduces into Middle English as determinen in the late 14th century meaning to settle, limit, or decide), According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of the adjective determined dates back to 1546, appearing in the text Wycklyffes Wycket. In the late 14th century the root verb determine and related forms like determinate were already active in Middle English via Geoffrey Chaucer and other writers, paving the way for the later adjective. In the 1510s the verbal phrase to be determined (meaning to have resolved or made a decision) emerged. It was finally "characterized by a firm resolution or fixity of purpose" by around 1600 for actions and 1772 for people. -
reconciliation - Word of the Day - Wed Aug 12, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Reconciliation in storytelling is vital because it brings emotional closure, builds deep empathy, and heals broken relationships. It turns raw conflict into meaningful growth and shows how characters can move forward together. Healing and Closure: Resolves inner pain: Characters let go of old anger and find peace inside. Repairs bonds: Broken trust between friends, families, or groups gets fixed. Provides meaning: It gives a proper finish to a hard journey instead of leaving loose ends. Empathy and Growth: Shows shared humanity: Readers see that opposing sides share the same basic hopes and fears. Breaks down hate: It helps characters and audiences drop old stereotypes. Teaches maturity: Characters learn to accept the past and choose a better future.
