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The glowing structure looks like the old Soviet Union sickle, if you were standing on the other side of it, but it would still need a hammer. ☭
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authority - Word of the Day - Thu May 14, 2026
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Authority in storytelling characters acts as a crucial narrative anchor, establishing believable power dynamics that drive plots, define society norms, and foster audience engagement. These figures, ranging from mentors to antagonists, guide protagonist growth, create core conflicts, and reflect the author's thematic vision. Authority figures provide necessary structure to the fictional world. Key aspects of authority in character development include: | Driving Plot and Conflict: Authority figures, such as antagonists or oppressive systems, force characters into action and establish high-stakes drama, propelling the narrative forward. Mentorship and Growth: Wise or experienced characters (mentors) help guide protagonists through their transformation, shaping their development. Defining the World's Norms: They demonstrate the rules, values, and power structures of the story's world, creating realism. Internal Authority (VOA): The "Voice of Authority" is an internal, influential voice developed from a character's past (parents, teachers), acting as a powerful influence on their choices. Creating Relatability and Tension: Effective characters, whether heroes or villains, possess clear, justifiable motivations that allow audiences to engage deeply, enhancing suspense. How to Establish Authority in Storytelling: Leverage Experience: Share personal stories and lived experiences to build rapport and passion. Focus on the Audience: Position yourself as a guide by focusing on the audience’s aspirations, rather than just your own achievements. Utilize Proper Structure: Use clear, consistent storytelling. Listen and Learn: Actively learn from those with more knowledge to strengthen your own message. -
authority - Word of the Day - Thu May 14, 2026
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"Authority" stems from the Lain auctōritās (influence, command, or opinion), derived from auctor ("master, leader, author"). Entering English around 1200 as autorite or auctorite, it originally meant a convincing passage, a scholarly source, or legal validity before evolving into the power to command. In ancient Rome, it referred to a person’s prestige, reputation, and influence, rather than just official legal power. The term shifted from meaning "a source of knowledge" (an authoritative text) to "a person in power" (a holder of authority) in the 14th century. The "th" was introduced later (16th century), likely influenced by the word "authentic". According to the Oxford English Dictiionary (OED), the earliest known use of the noun authority in English is from around 1225 . The word appears in the Ancrene Riwle (or Ancrene Wisse), a guide for anchoresses written in the early 13th century. The noun author first documented usage dating back to the late 14th century. The earliest known use of the verb authorize (or authorise) in English is from before 1393. The noun authorization first evidence is from around 1472–3 in the Rolls of Parliament. The noun authorizing first appeared before 1425 in the Lanterne of Liȝt. The noun authorizement first appeared around 1475. -
Thanks, db. I appreciate your confidence in my work.
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influence - Word of the Day - Wed May 13, 2026
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A character using influence—whether to persuade, change, or challenge others—is crucial for driving the plot, exploring themes, and fostering character development. Known as an "Influence Character", they often force the protagonist to confront flaws, alter their perspective, and grow, adding necessary dramatic tension and depth to the narrative. Key aspects of the importance of influence in storytelling include: Catalyzing Character Growth: The influence character pushes the protagonist out of their comfort zone or challenges their flawed worldview, directly causing them to change, grow, and complete their character arc. Driving the Plot and Themes: Influence characters often represent an opposing viewpoint or a different path, which allows the story’s core themes to be explored in depth. Creating Dramatic Tension: The interaction between a protagonist and an influential character creates conflict and tension, preventing the story from becoming stagnant. Structuring the Narrative: This character often anchors the "B story" or is a primary figure in a relationship that helps the protagonist achieve or fail their goals. Examples of Influence Characters: Charity Barnum in The Greatest Showman: She encourages P.T. Barnum to embrace what he has rather than chasing more, directly impacting his emotional journey. Obi-Wan Kenobi in Star Wars: A New Hope: He introduces Luke to the Force and influences him to trust it rather than technology. Characters with influence can also serve as powerful role models, enabling readers to empathize with their challenges and moral choices. -
influence - Word of the Day - Wed May 13, 2026
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"Influence" originates from the Latin influere, meaning "to flow into", which evolved from in- ("into") and fluere ("to flow"). It was also influenced by the Medieval Latin word influentia ("a flowing in") and the Old French influence (13th century) "emanation from the stars". Dating to the late 14th century, the word originally referred to an "ethereal fluid" from the stars that flowed down to affect human destiny and character. In the mid-1600s the meaning shifted to the power an individual or group has over another (social/political). According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the noun influence was first used in English during the Middle English period (1150-1500), with the earliest evidence appearing around 1374 in the writings of Geoffrey Chaucer. The verb influence appeared much later, with the earliest evidence in 1658, in the writings of Oliver Cromwell. The earliest known use of the adjective influential is in 1570, appearing in a translation by John Dee, the noted mathematician, astrologer, and antiquary. The earliest know use of the noun influencer is from 1664, appearing in the writing of English philosopher and theologian Henry More in A Modest Enquiry into the Mystery of Iniquity, referring to a person who exerts influence. -
It's something I wouldn't be familiar with, since I don't need hair spray for my chrome dome. 🤪
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And it doesn't even include any anthropomorphic objects.
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Thanks, Lee. And that was a sad parting for Clint and Daniel, but they'll all be together again at the wedding. I keep listening to those great songs. Maybe they'll give you inspiration for some new great stories.
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Me? Do something like that? I'm crushed by your lack of trust, but I won't make any promises. You'll have to keep reading upcoming chapters to find out for sure.
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The things I've posted here have been news articles about spiders that I've gotten from different sources and includes topics such as the invasive Joro spiders. When getting information about specific species of spiders I have taken information and photos from Wikipedia. I've also searched for photos using search terms like "free photos of (specific species of spider)" or relied on "stock photos or images" of spiders, but as far as I know, they are not copyrighted. Are any of these things what you are referring to? Just curious if I'm part of the problem.
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Yes, the did select a little more of a challenge on the rapids this year, since they were more experienced than on the previous vacation, and Clint and Daniel are more than sad that they won't be seeing or being around Michael and Devin in the future. You're also correct that Michael is very focused on getting things done, and it's that drive that will serve him well in whatever job he gets. Devin may be more mechanically talented and his his dreams of making serious contributions to space exploration, but Michael's focus, drive, and mathematical background will serve him well as a software engineer or statistical analysis. And since it seems that the auctions won't be happening soon, all of his attention will shift to the wedding.
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Yes, the future is speeding toward them like a runaway train, so hopefully it will get off to a good start with the wedding and then securing the jobs they really want. There will definitely be some interesting times ahead.
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Yes, the vacation is over and everyone had a good time, including making new friends. Next up is the wedding and then the boys will have to get jobs and start their lives together. It will be interesting to see what types of jobs they get and where they end up.
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Thank you, @wenmale64, The vacation ended with them making three new friends, nothing disastrous happening, and everyone having a good time. There are also several things on the horizon, such as the wedding, the job search, and having to relocate, as well as making a decision about how soon they want to start a family. I'm glad you're enjoying this story and looking forward to what happens next.
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Contrasting command styles is a powerful storytelling technique that defines leadership by highlighting the difference between authoritarian control and collaborative empowerment. By placing different leadership approaches in direct opposition, stories reveal the core values, effectiveness, and character of leaders. This contrast creates dramatic tension, drives character development, and helps the audience understand the "why" behind a character's actions. Key Aspects of Contrasting Command Styles in Storytelling: Command-and-Control vs. Empowered Participation: Authoritarian Leaders: These characters (e.g., dictators, micromanagers) prioritize speed, clear hierarchy, and strict compliance, which can limit creativity and lower morale. Democratic Leaders: These characters foster collaboration, open communication, and shared decision-making, which encourages innovation and commitment. The Contrast: The story often pits the efficient-but-cold authoritarian against the slow-but-loyal collaborative leader, demonstrating that while authoritarianism provides quick, visible results, collaboration builds sustainable, invested teams. Defining Character through Action: | * Leadership is not just declared; it is shown through the narrative arc of how leaders handle conflict. * A character who listens and leverages diverse opinions stands in sharp contrast to one who relies on fear or manipulation to maintain control. * Contrasting these styles enables the audience to see the "hidden" side of leadership, such as how a character’s personal journey shapes their decision-making process. Driving Conflict and Tension: * Contrasting command styles acts as a catalyst for dramatic conflict. A story might feature a "strategic" leader (who plans and acts cautiously) versus a "disruptive" leader (who breaks rules and challenges status quo). * This contrast highlights the tension between stability and change. Character Arcs and Redemption: * Characters often start as authoritarian and, through the challenges of the story, learn the value of trust and empowerment. * Alternatively, a leader may fail when they abandon a collaborative, human-centered style for a harsh, impersonal approach, demonstrating the importance of "character" in effective leaders. Themes of Authenticity and Value: * Contrasting styles allow authors to explore the difference between true, authentic leadership and superficial, "spin" leadership (e.g., in a political or dystopian context). * It defines a leader's "why"—whether they are leading to serve their own interests or for a greater good, encouraging audience connection, trust, and emotional investment. By contrasting these styles, writers make their themes explicit, creating memorable characters whose leadership approaches are central to the story’s ultimate message.
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The word "command" originates from the Latin root commendāre (to entrust, commit, or recommend), which evolved through Old French (comander (to order, command)) and Middle English (commanden or commaunden) to represent authority and orders. In the 17th century they adopted the meaning of "mastery of a situation or language" (e.g., "command of the situation"). According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of the verb command in English is from around 1330, found in the literature Guy of Warwick. The first recorded used of the noun command was in 1552, first recorded in the writing of John Hamilton, Roman Catholic archbishop of St Andrews. The noun commandment was first recorded in 1250, first recorded in the Old English Miscellany. The verb commend first appeared before 1340, often found in early Middle English manuscripts indicating the act of entrusting, committing, or praising. The present-participle adjective commanding (meaning ruling, controlling, or of great importance) is cited from 1483 in the Catholicon Anglicum, an English-Latin wordbook. The derived adjective commanded is cited from the late 1500s, with the earliest evidence before 1586. While the specific adjectival use of the word "command" (e.g., "command car," "command position") is mostly a 19th or 20th-century development, the participial adjective form commanding is the oldest recorded adjective derived from the verb.
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Chapter 44 – The End of Our Vacation When we arrived where the caterers were setting up for lunch, we discovered it was basically the same as what we had the previous day. That was fine though, because we knew it would be tasty and filling. After we loaded our paper plates with what we wanted and grabbed a drink, the four of us, along with Lonny, Jack, Brian, and Wes, went over to one of the tables and sat down together. “We’re really glad that we asked if you had anything planned f
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A decree in storytelling acts as a powerful narrative device that establishes authority, drives plot, defines character relationships, and imposes structural order on a narrative world. It is a formal, authoritative command or decision—often issued by a king, deity, or governing power—that serves as an inescapable law within the context of the story. Key Functions of Decrees in Storytelling: Driving Conflict and Action: Royal or divine decrees often catalyze the narrative by forcing characters to take action. For instance, a decree might initiate a search, establish rules for a quest, or require a character to overcome obstacles. Creating High-Stakes Situations: Decrees frequently carry severe consequences, such as punishment, exile, or death if disobeyed, which immediately raises the stakes of the story. Establishing World-Building and Power Dynamics: The ability to issue a decree highlights the power structure of a world. It distinguishes between those who have authority (kings, gods) and those subject to it, clarifying the social and political hierarchy. Explaining Misfortune and Theme: In many narratives, the "Decree of God" or a divine decree serves as a thematic device to account for misfortunes or unexpected twists in the plot, suggesting that events are part of a larger, predetermined plan. Signaling Legitimacy and Truth: In literature, a decree can indicate a moment of absolute, binding truth or final judgment, such as the "righteous judgement" of a character in power. Examples in Literature and Narrative: Epic Narratives (e.g., Ramayana): A decree by a ruler (such as Ravana) can dictate the fate of a messenger or character, showcasing how authority influences the narrative's trajectory. Biblical Narratives: Decrees often represent the sovereign will and unchanging purpose of God, serving as foundational elements in the story of redemption and creation. Historical Fiction/Historiography: A decree, like those found in the Book of Luke, can structure a narrative, setting up a "contract" that influences the narrative’s focus and superior authority. Dramatic Narratives (e.g., Daniel 2): A king’s decree can set up an impossible demand (telling the king his dream), creating intense pressure on the protagonists and driving them to find a solution. By introducing a decree, a storyteller introduces an element of irrevocable change, instantly shifting the narrative landscape and forcing characters to react to a rigid new reality.
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The word "decree" originates in the early 14th century from Old French decre (or decret), dēc stemming from the Latin dēcrētum ("ordinance, decision"), which is the neuter past participle of dēcernere, meaning to decide determine, or separate. It entered Middle English to describe official authority-based orders and originally meant sifting through evidence to make a decision. It was initially used in ecclesiastical (church) contexts, "decree" evolved into secular usage for legal orders and authoritative announcements by the late 14th century. According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of the noun decree in English is from 1303, found in the writings of the poet and historian Robert Mannyng. The verb decree appeared in the late 14th century (roughly 1399). The OED also notes the related term, decreet (noun), first appeared around 1374 in the works of Geoffrey Chaucer.
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ascendancy - Word of the Day - Sun May 10, 2026
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The concept of ascendancy—referring to a position of dominant power, influence, or the process of rising to such a state—is vital for crafting compelling narratives by driving character evolution, shaping power dynamics, and building immersive worlds. It dictates the stakes, structural arcs, and thematic exploration of ambition, morality, and change. The importance of ascendancy when writing stories: Character Arc and Motivation: Ascendancy provides a clear, high-stakes trajectory for characters, often involving a "leveling up" or transcendence of mortal limitations. It enables the exploration of how power shapes—or destroys—a character's psyche. Structural Power Struggles: It is foundational to plot, establishing hierarchies and the conflict that arises when a character challenges the established order, as seen in the Path to Ascendancy series. World-Building and Stakes: The concept allows for building complex, often "arcane" systems of power, where characters might ascend from mortals to godlike figures. This establishes a "sense of wonder" or looming threat, essential for engaging readers. Thematic Depth: Ascendancy allows writers to explore "gray areas" between right and wrong, forcing characters to make difficult choices that define their morality. It can represent the triumph of will, but also the potential loss of humanity as one rises higher. Understanding the distinction between ascendance (the process of rising) and ascendancy (the state of being in power) helps authors refine the pacing and thematic focus of their storytelling. -
ascendancy - Word of the Day - Sun May 10, 2026
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"Ascendancy" (dating to 1712) refers to a state of dominant power or influence, formed in English from the adjective ascendant (from Latin ascendentem) combined with the abstract noun suffix -cy. It stems from the Latin root ascendere ("to climb up", "go up", or "rise"), combining ad- ("to") + scandere ("to climb"), which is also the root for ascend + the suffix -cy, denoting a "state of being" or quality (similar to infancy or supremacy). The term comes from the phrase "in the ascendant," which originated in 17th-century astrology to describe a planet or zodiac sign that is "rising" on the eastern horizon and therefore has "predominant influence". It refers specifically to a state of governing or controlling influence (e.g., "gaining dominance"). According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of the noun ascendancy is in the mid-1700s, with their earliest evidence dating to 1744 in the writings of 'H. Polesworth'. The variant ascendance appeared slightly earlier, in 1742. The word was formed within English, deriving from ascendant + the suffix -ancy. Ascendant (adjective & noun, around 1386) is the person or thing that is rising/dominant. Ascendance (noun, 1742) a closely related synonym that sometimes emphasizes the act of rising, while ascendancy usually refers to the state of being on top. Ascension (noun, around 1315) is often used for religious or formal upward movement. -
Leverage in storytelling is the strategic use of narrative elements—such as tension, emotion, and structure — to amplify impact, maximize audience engagement, and achieve a specific goal with "less effort" or resources. It is the process of turning a simple anecdote into a powerful tool that resonates deeply, builds trust, and influences behavior. Here is the importance of leverage in storytelling, broken down by key areas: Maximizing Emotional Impact and Retention: Brain Engagement: Stories that leverage emotional, personal, and well-structured narratives (introduction, conflict, change) engage more of the brain, making the message up to 22 times more memorable than facts alone. Creating Tension: Leverage involves managing uncertainty. By highlighting a "porthole" or a specific, high-stakes moment—like Luke Skywalker aiming for the small exhaust port in Star Wars—storytellers can amplify emotional resonance, making the audience feel as though they are experiencing the tension themselves. The Power of Change: The core of effective storytelling is the transformation at the end. Leveraging this change helps pull the audience along emotionally. Strategic Communication and Influence: Building Trust: Leveraging personal stories or customer case studies allows brands and individuals to build authenticity and trust, rather than simply buying attention. Driving Action: A well-leveraged story with a clear, emotional call to action can move an audience from passive listening to active engagement. Simplifying Complexity: In areas like research or marketing, leveraging simple, specific anecdotes helps cut through the noise, making complex ideas relatable to a broader audience. Efficiency and Resource Allocation: Doing More with Less: Just as financial leverage multiplies returns, storytelling leverage uses a single, well-crafted narrative to achieve multiple outcomes. Repurposing Content: A single story can be repurposed into a blog post, video, or infographic, providing a high return on investment (ROI) for the time spent creating it. Scalability: Systems can be built around storytelling to deliver messages at scale, which is crucial for building a personal brand or company culture. Creating Shared Meaning: Uniting Audiences: By tapping into universal themes (struggle, triumph, tragedy), stories act as a unifying force, helping different audiences relate to one another. Internal Alignment: Leaders can leverage stories to communicate core values to employees, creating a shared frame of reference and fostering a strong organizational culture. How to Apply Leverage in Storytelling: Capture Emotion: Actively look for experiences that trigger emotional reactions, then capture them for later use. Use Visuals: Use visual storytelling (e.g., Canva-made infographics or short videos) to grab attention quickly and convey complex messages. Storyboard First: Plan your story using a storyboard to ensure a strong first impression. | Focus on the "So What?": Ensure your story answers the audience's question, "What does this have to do with me?".
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Leverage" originates from the Old French levier (12th century), meaning "a lifter" or "crowbar", derived from Latin levare ("to raise") and levis ("light in weight"). It reflects the Poto-Indo-Euroopean root legwh-, meaning to make something "not heavy". The term signifies using a mechanism to make a heavy task light. Leverage is closely related to words conveying lightness or raising, such as: alleviate (to make lighter), elevate (to raise up), levity (lightness of manner), and relevant (to raise up/bring to bear). According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of the noun "leverage" is from 1724, appearing in the London Gazette to describe the action or mechanical power of a lever. Originally was formed by adding "age" to the noun lever, OED cites usage from 1297 in [Robert of Gloucester's Chronicle], and referred to the mechanical advantage of a lever. The first figurative use of leverage was in 1858, and used for influence or power to accomplish a purpose. Usage of the financial sense of the word leverage was 1933/1937 and used to describe using borrowed capital. The verb form of "leverage" appeared in the 1930s, with OED evidence from 1937.
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Have you ever wondered what smells spiders hate? Spiders primarily hate the strong scent of peppermint oil, as it overwhelms their sensory receptors, acting as a natural repellent. Other effective, strong-smelling deterrents include tea tree oil, lavender, eucalyptus, citrus (lemon/orange), vinegar, and cinnamon. These scents disrupt their ability to navigate and track prey.
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