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  1. The word alignment (noun) is derived from align (verb), primarily originating from 18th-century French alignement, which comes from aligner ("to place in a line"). It combines the prefix a- ("to") and the word ligne ("line"). Aligner is derived from the Old French alignier, which combined the prefix a- (from Latin ad- ("to") + lignier ("to line"). The original meaning pertains to arranging objects or troops in a straight line, as seen in the French military term aligner. The metaphorical sense of political or social "alignment" (bringing people into agreement or alliance) emerged much later, with the international political sense attested in the 1930s. According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the noun alignment (or its early variant alinement) is first attested in English in the mid-18th century, with the earliest evidence dating to 1742. The 1742 usage appears in a translation of a French work by J. Martyn and E. Chambers. While "alignment" is the standard form now, "alinement" was a common spelling in the 18th and 19th centuries. This ultimately stems from the Latin lineare ("to reduce to a straight line" or "make straight"), which is derived from linea ("line" or "flax"). Align (verb) appeared in English in the early 15th century (1425). (initially in senses related to ranging, sometimes with complex definitions like "copulate" regarding animals).
  2. Bill W

    We're All Mad Here

    Mad, mad, mad. Mad as hatters!
  3. Realization in stories acts as a critical turning point (aha moment) where characters understand the true nature of their conflict, driving the plot progression and emontinal transformation. It bridges internal change with external action, forcing protagonists to alter their goals, fostering empathy, and creating memorable, authentic moments that resonate with readers. Key Aspects of Realization in Stories: Character Development & Transformation: Realization scenes often facilitate the climax or propel the story into the final act by forcing characters to change. It shows the character finally understanding their internal problem, motivation, or need for change. Plot Shift: These moments often turn the story in a new direction, changing how the audience and protagonist see the way forward. The "Aha" Moment: Known as a revelation or epiphany, it is the sudden understanding of a problem's core. Authenticity and Emotional Impact: Realizations make stories feel substantial, moving, and grounded in the human condition, helping characters move from ignorance to understanding. Types of Realization: These can include understanding the source of a problem, the need for a new strategy, or a profound shift in self-perception. Realization often occurs at the midpoint or during a "coming-of-age" transition, where the character’s newfound understanding forces them to act differently to resolve their conflict.
  4. Realization (early 1600s) stems from the Medieval Latin adjective realis ("actual", from res "thing") to the French verb réaliser, then to réalisation. It was formed by adding -ize (a Greek-derived verb suffix meaning make) and -ation (a Latin noun suffix indicating a process or result) to the root real. According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of the noun realization is in the early 1600s, with the earliest evidence dating to 1611 by the lexicographer Randle Cotgrave. Its original meaning was "the act of making something real" or "to bring into existence" (1610s), while later usage covered "obtaining or amassing" (1753) and "understanding clearly" (1775). The verb "realize" (bring into existence) is also recorded in the 1610s, with early evidence found in the work of John Florio.
  5. Maybe the bartender thinks YOU'RE the one that pulled the prank in the bathroom.
  6. This is scary. Think about it. Things that most people use daily and are good tools can be combined to completely take away your privacy. Surveillance cameras to protect your home + WiFi + 5G + AI = a total loss of privacy. George Orwell's fear about Big Brother watching you can now become a non-physically invasive (because no one has to come into your home or follow you around) reality!
  7. Voice is the unique personality, tone, and rhythm of a story, acting as the primary tool to build reader connection, establish tone, and distinguish the work in a crowded market. A distinct, authentic voice guides the narrative's perspective, creates emotional resonance, and improves readability. Key aspects of the importance of voice include: Creating Immersion and Tone: Voice sets the mood (e.g., formal, casual, humorous) and directly impacts how readers experience the story's scale and scope. Establishing Authenticity: A genuine voice builds trust with readers, whereas an inauthentic or overly stylized voice (sometimes called "MFA voice") can break engagement. Building Character Identity: Distinct character voices ensure readers know who is speaking, preventing confusion and enhancing characterization by reflecting their unique personalities, backgrounds, and worldviews, says a Reddit post. Driving Narrative Propulsion: A strong, engaging voice pulls readers through the story by providing entertainment, humor, or deep emotional insight. Author Differentiation: A consistent voice helps build reader loyalty and makes an author's work recognizable among others. Voice consists of the author's personal style (word choice, sentence structure) and the specific, unique voices of the characters and narrator.
  8. The word "voice" originates from the Latin Vox (accusative vocem) is the direct ancestor, closely related to vocare "to call". It means sound, utterance, or speech and entered Middle English through Old French voiz around the 13th century. It traces back to the Proto-Indo-European root *\*wekʷ-*, meaning "to speak". While originally referring specifically to sounds made by the mouth (13c.), the usage expanded to mean utterance, song, or opinion. According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of voice as a noun in English is from around 1300. Noun Use: Recorded around 1300, notably in St. Francis. It also appeared in works such as the Wycliffite Bible (c. 1382). Also used in the Wycliffite Sermons to describe John the Baptist as the "vois of Goddis werd", 1425. Verb Use: The earliest evidence for the verb voice is later, found in the 1429 Norwich Constitutions. The word was established during the Middle English period (1150—1500). Around 1600 the word "voice" was used to mean giving utterance to opinions or feelings.
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    Chapter 40 S3

    Yes, I think Clint's spending time with Michael and Devin has paid off with him growing up a bit, and because Daniel is nearly a year older than Clint, he's a little easier to influence. They appear to be good for each other, and although Daniel tends to give in to pressure from Clint, like with their open nakedness after just meeting Michael and Devin, Daniel also seems to have a calming effect on Clint. 😃 Thank you for the compliment and I'm glad you're still enjoying this story.
  10. Ah, the lovely swim-up tap. Is that green water he's swimming in? 🤪 Happy St. Patrick's Day to Steve and all his friends!
  11. Bill W

    Chapter 40 S3

    I live in both NY and PA before moving to GA. 😃
  12. Bill W

    Chapter 40 S3

    Yes, Chris, so far a good time is being had by all!
  13. Bill W

    Chapter 40 S3

    It is a fun and exhilarating experience and I'm glad you had a chance to experience it as well.
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    Spiders

    @sandrewn, do you have a green spider for St. Patrick's Day, with or without a shamrock or a shillelagh!
  15. The word "shamrock" derives from the Gaelic/Irish word seamróg, which is the diminutive of seamair "clover"), translating literally to "little clover" or "young clover". It stems from Old Irish semróc, rooted in Proto-Celtic semarā. Historically associated with St. Patrick, it became a key Irish national emblem in the 18th century. Frequently identified by botanists as Trifolium dubium (lesser clover) or Trifolium repens (white clover). Folklore Connection: Legend holds that St. Patrick used the three-leafed plant to explain the Holy Trinity (three parts, one plant) to Irish pagans. Symbolism Shift: Used as a national symbol since the 18th century, it was worn on St. Patrick's Day and was associated with Irish rebellion and nationalism, particularly when worn during the 1798 Irish Rebellion, leading to its restriction by British authorities. According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of the word "shamrock" in English is from around 1571. It appears in the writings of Edmund Campion, a Jesuit and scholar, specifically in his work History of Ireland. Other early mentions were made by Stonyhurst (1577), Spenser (1596), and John Gerard (1597), who described it as a type of trefoil or clover.
  16. And over in the Emerald Island you can hear shouts of "Erin go braugh", which means "Ireland forever". To those of you who share a bit of the blarney in your veins and your DNA shows a link to the homeland, like mine, then a Happy St. Patrick's Day to you! And if you should decide to indulge at some point, which seems to be embedded in Irish genetics, don't drink too much green beer. Be warned that those who get inebriated often end up seeing leprechauns running around the bar/pub before they pass out in a drunken stupor. And please, don't drink and drive.
  17. Bill W

    Chapter 40 S3

    I considered that, but then I worried that if they shifted in front of the boys, you can't always count on someone that age to not slip and tell someone else. It might happen when the two of them are talking about it, maybe at school or somewhere else that others might overhear. That would take this story in an entirely new direction. Possibly it would mean everyone packing up and moving away with no forwarding address. It could also mean the destruction of two wetsuits, if it happened during this trip. 😧 I think Michael and Devin were alarmed enough thinking that Preston might have figure it out, and he's more like to keep their secret, since he already believes there might be shifters running around.
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    Chapter 40 S3

    I didn't realize you lived in PA. And yes, using the toilet is also a problem when you're in a raft, so I'm hoping there were no females in your group as you were hanging off the raft to take care of that function.
  19. Chapter 40 – Daniel When we got back to our room at the Quality Inn, we carried our wetsuits and booties inside, we began to get undressed. “Daniel, did you bring long underwear with you?” “Yes, I was at Clint’s house when you called and told him about bringing them, so Mr. Fowler drove me home so I could get my long underwear to put in with my other things.” “That’s good,” I said, “because wearing them under your wetsuit will help to keep you a little warmer.” As I
  20. Bill W

    Spiders

    The first thing I noticed was those fangs! Nasty looking. The the artwork - comical horns and emphasis around the mouth. With orange and black striped legs, I would dub this the Halloween spider.
  21. Visibility in storytelling—making characters, themes, and narratives prominently seen—is crucial for fostering human connection, building trust, and driving action. It enables audiences to see themselves in stories, turning abstract ideas into memorable, relatable experiences that, according to studies, increase audience engagement, brand loyalty, and personal reflection. Importance of visibility in stories: Human Connection & Trust: Sharing personal, authentic stories humanizes creators or brands, making them more relatable and trustworthy rather than just informational. Engagement Through Relatability: When audiences see their own struggles, growth, and emotions reflected in a story, they are more likely to stay engaged and connected. Memorable Impact: A visible story that focuses on sensory language and emotional cues creates an experience rather than just delivering information, making it more impactful and memorable. Driving Action and Reflection: Visible, intentional stories encourage reflection, prompting audiences to align their actions with their values and engage with the content, turning "out of sight" topics into remembered, actionable insights. Visible vs. Invisible Narratives: Effective storytelling often uses a "visible" plot (the action) to represent an "invisible" theme (personal growth or emotional journey), adding depth and resonance. Strategic Positioning: In the digital age, visible, consistent storytelling helps creators stand out. By focusing on authenticity over perfection, storytelling helps bridge the gap between a message and its audience, ensuring it is felt, remembered, and acted upon.
  22. Visibility (n.) originated around 1400, directly from Late Latin visibilitatem ("condition of being seen"), derived from visibilis ("that may be seen"), which stems from the Latin visus (pat participle of videre, "to see). It combines the Latin root vid- (meaning "to see" or "know") with the suffix -ility, denoting a state. It came into Middle English through Old/Middle French visibilité. Initially meant "condition of being visible." By 1914, it referred to the "range of vision" and by 1958, the "state of being publicly prominent". According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of the noun "visibility" in English is in the late 1500s, specifically documented in 1581 within the writings of theologian and college head William Fulke. The word "visibleness" also appears in the same era, with early evidence in 1581, while the adjective "visible" has earlier roots, appearing in English literature around the early 16th century. The modern sense of "range of vision under given conditions" was recorded in the early 20th century (c. 1914).
  23. Cute, but beware. They mark the deck with their claws!
  24. Too bad the Knights Templar didn't believe in the Friday the 13th curse, since their headquarters in France was broken into and they were arrested, imprisoned, and many killed on Friday October 13th, 1307 by order of King Philip IV of France.
  25. Recognition in stories, known in literature as anagnorisis, or the point in a play, novel, etc., in which a principal character recognizes or discovers another character's true identity or the true nature of their own circumstances. It is the pivotal moment a character moves from ignorance to knowledge, often shifting the narrative from tragedy to joy or vice-versa. It is crucial for driving plot, sparking catharsis, and developing character identity, as seen when characters realize hidden truths or identities. Key aspects of recognition in stories include: Plot Advancement: It acts as a major turning point, reversing fortune and transforming the character's journey. Deepening Emotional Impact: Authentic recognition scenes, rather than contrived ones, evoke strong emotional responses and provide deep satisfaction to the reader. Character Transformation: It forces characters to confront reality, identity, or fate, leading to profound personal change. Thematic Understanding: The act of recognizing a theme helps readers comprehend the deeper meaning of a text. Beyond traditional literature, "recognition" as a narrative tool in storytelling (e.g., in business) validates work, boosts confidence, and inspires others by sharing meaningful, detailed narratives of accomplishment.
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