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Chapter 7 - Resonance 7.2
Darryl62 commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Resonance 7.2
Qana.. what had held him up? Are others also being attacked? Are the Canines targeting the Wolves or just the Snow clan? More questions!?. Who are the attacking group and who sent them. Wiil Winter Chill be needed and can its strength be 'lent' ? Loving the Pigsirpoq interactions 😍 ❤ Greedy that I am, just over 2000 words finishing one cliffhanger only to hand another! ( hoping for a 6000 word chapter 🙏) -
Chapter 7 - Resonance 7.1
Darryl62 commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Resonance 7.1
Wow! If only you could post more than 1 chapter a day!!!! So thrilling! -
Chapter 6 - Air Conditioning and Barbarians 6.4
Darryl62 commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Air Conditioning and Barbarians 6.4
It "Them" making themselves known is my guess. I just love the tail and ears as a form of communication and frequently wish I could display to my 2 teenage girls. Luckily I was overseas for 10 days so my equilibrium is fine, husband if had a tail would be thrashing around...hahaha -
Chapter 6 - Air Conditioning and Barbarians 6.3
Darryl62 commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Air Conditioning and Barbarians 6.3
This story is such a delight, I have no idea which way it will fall, but all the characters are so interesting and entertaining. Even the future/past chapters only add depth not a discordant tone which you have skilful avoided. Most impressed with your skill. (He sighed enviously) -
Chapter 6 - Air Conditioning and Barbarians 6.2
Darryl62 commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Air Conditioning and Barbarians 6.2
Winter Chill, sending greeting! A gift, makes me wonder what our hero will receive... -
I suspect Thors wealthy parents are going to be most unhappy and vocal just when the clan arrive and the flame will be lit. Also that Thors parents will be beholden in some way to Stef or Brad. Jeremy needs time, thats all. And Kris to occupy both his body and thoughts.
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Such beautiful descriptive images that you conjure up. This story is like being on the event horizon of a black hole, inextricably drawn in..loving it
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Chapter 5 - Roses and Violets 5.3
Darryl62 commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Roses and Violets 5.3
Not sure if their snouts are made for kissing, perhaps nuzzling is the most comfortable action 🤔 -
Chapter 4 - Lyre and Sand 4.4
Darryl62 commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Lyre and Sand 4.4
It seems to me that the hierarchical nature of the world leads those lower in the pack to live in the lower levels below ground and that having been to the surface was an unusual experience and exceedingly rare. -
Strangely, perhaps from a non USA feel, this chapter left feeling as though I was treading water with no movement other than a restating of positions. While I acknowledge the research into this incident, overall I feel that the story has not progressed this story line and I await the next instalment that perhaps relates to the title and consequence. There, I said it..
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Ohh, just arrived as I sit at the gate for my flight Sydney to Auckland and then to Taupo. Perfect timing 👌
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51 countries and counting, only count once even if multiple visits. Husband is at 52 countries the bastard
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On behalf of all the overseas members, never understood the super bowl thing, must be like cricket, past me by. Now rugby 🏉 union in particular, those All Blacks have a certain something going on... this is when Google is your friend
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So, some random hi vis truck driver said "show me your arse", so I did. He had a feel, he was super fit, does that make me like Will? Literally like Will, dropped the dacks. Obviously he was hot...
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I'm tempted to ask if Queen Victoria was on the throne, but that would be mean, how about George the 6th? Closer???
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Amazing, our author has Will calling himself " an insecure nutcase" and showed how shallow he is as he was not the star of the threesome. Perhaps the sun stopped shining out of his immaculate arse? (Australian humour) We know that he is going to throw a hissy fit at Travis popularity, and again, I want to see Jeremy take a bullet (wounded only) for Travis and Will have a total spaz attack about his feelings not being validated...
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Ahh, but one of your readers has been more shitty than the others and has absented themselves when called out for their behaviour. I also love this crowd that hold each other to account for the good and bad.
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Unnecessarily mean Tim. Settle yourself and think about the effort others have made to excel at something that brings enjoyment to themselves and others and that a real life tragedy occurred. 💔
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Loved that story! Am I allowed to promote another story while talking about this one? Guess so!!!
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I can just imagine rewrites happening as we speak
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I think that the meeting next week will be interrupted by the stalker, who will be aiming for Travis but Jeremy will take the hit in saving him. Will will be so annoyed that he has to forgive Jeremy and will pack the biggest tantrum to anyone who will listen even putting it about that the guy was put up to it by Jeremy. Thor will want threesomes every night and it will become a nuisance to Fab and Will who will try to get him out with money or a hook up with one of Marie friends. Jacks 21 year old nurse will fall pregnant, so he will be paying support for 4 children. What else...?? Marie will call it off with her guy and start with Nico just to get back at John
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Honestly, it feels like the chapter was about 100 days ago! How greedy am I!!!!
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"I suspect that I will appreciate it i the end" , perfect lead in for that joke! Many thanks m'lord A'bar
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Oh my God, don't you start!! Hahaha 😆
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There is a lovely Australian phrase "settle petal". Oh, please don't be put off by @PrivateTim, even I have been bitten by him in the past. @Wesley8890, keep up the good fight, we are all correct in our own way. Just ask a policeman who has interviewed witnesses, they all see different things. Both of our fictional characters have flaws and generosity, Jeremy with the houses for Carullo, Will with the project in Hawaii. Both generous, as for their flaws, turn to @Mark Arbour...
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