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Darryl62

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  1. Love Dawn and her glasshouses, its one of the few places Richter will feel truly safe in
  2. The gossip board updates! Oh, how embarrassing for Richter to find his name being brandied about.
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    Blurb & Flashback

    Can I add, I noticed this previously, just a little edit, "what carefully " , Watch carefully, very very moving
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    A Good Deed

    I know that it is all fiction, but I really want Travis to die, he deserves it. After all that has happened to him, hospital, stalking, his whole family dramas and he doesn't bother with security? Its not like he's poor. Would rather hear about Jeremy at his sessions with Dr Jones thanks. Travis is tedious as fuck. Over to you all now..hahaha
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    A Good Deed

    I think the misdirection is good. Fin knows a lot, appears poor by the snarky comments by Sarah and others. Perfect for passing information on Will and Travis. Part of a larger conspiracy, still going with Alexandria Carmichael..
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    Act II - Memory

    I thought our entry was very handsome, but when he spoke, God awful 😖. Stong country accent that could cut bricks.. I will be ok,just time and radiation treatments
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    Act II - Memory

    In sitting in hospital here in Sydney Australia, 5 am it started, having just watched the 2nd semi final of the Eurovision Song Contest, sadly Australia did not make it through to the final. Milkshake Man was so... tempting with an attractive man. Anyhoo.. loving the story, keeping me entertained and I understand the delay in chapters, not that I like it. The spell backfired, did she learn nothing from the slap? Will have to entertain myself my looking at your other stories here. Thanks again for your lovely work 😘 😊
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    Amiens

    I am looking forward to the Cowes saga with a fractious Caroline having her freedom curtailed while acting pregnant ( no out and about while pregnant in this era) . Hopefully, the Princess is also ready for the headstrong self-centred harpy..hahaha, poor Calvert. He will have Granger to comfort him as the screeching reaches a crescendo...
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    Chip

    Ohh yes, correct!! Thank you 😊
  10. You played it perfectly! I think we all thought Michael was a bit strange, but to know he was a psychic and he had the blessing of the Senate...well, totally took me by surprise. Circles within circles, well played!
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    Chip

    In my head I seem to remember that Alistair killed himself after leaving a voice mail to Will which he retrieves far too late. After the exposure he and Jeremy had with the paedophile. I am sure that if I have this wrong, someone will know.
  12. The car arriving add a sense of urgency and slight foreboding that a very old pledge was being called in. Hopefully more people will arrive and with them perhaps knowledge that had been forgotten. Loved the pictures of the valley and its stillness when viewing the panels. Brynjar.. Exact Same Size. Shivers, even though we had guessed back at the first shift. Renato, what a surprise and a clear thread to all other Vampires in daylight. ohhh, suspense for what the witches will try.
  13. My, my, my... if touching alone while thinking about shifting can make it happen, and drinking 🍸 the essence of Ray gives Gabriel magical qualities, can it be diluted. ( a New Zealand on air TV series called "The Creamery" comes to mind.) How many drops per litre? Honestly, my mind is just in overdrive! And helping the Vampires instead of fighting. Who knows?!? Author, make haste!!!
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    Chapter 3 (9/11)

    Zorro I feel will never see his parents again, lost friends due to spies. Thrust into a position of power that he never thought would happen. Where to now for our group of heros?
  15. Dear @Jack Poignet, you must let us know what you are updating! So many! Is ir just spelling and grammar,? Comprehensive change? Should I start from the beginning?
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    Chapter 3 (8/11)

    The golden house seems full of maniacal idiots, yet someone has the brains to do this. Outstanding work 👏 👌 👍
  17. Mother may be like Ray, part Shifter, part Vampire, part human. She also could be part of a long term plan that necessitated her having 2 children in exchange for something with the provisos of not having contact until the oldest was mated. I also think she will be a linchpin in the future 🤔 😏. Just a guess, and you can be sure no one will be happy with her return, especially those damnable witches.
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    Chapter 3 (5/11)

    I an fearful that this delightful, calming and interesting interlude is actually the eye of the storm, not the safe harbour implied.
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    Chapter 3 (2/11)

    Ahh, sadly I wonder if Fay was Dorothy when the Three Musketeers were young.
  20. Ohh, my love, so heartbreaking beautiful writing
  21. I'm looking forward to Kris and Claire crossing swords. Finn needs a strong reality check about being young and unattached. I see much drama ahead, Travis mentioned Jack (Meredith co actor boyfriend). And my ears pricked up immediately, our author doesn't name a person for nothing...
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    Chapter 2 (5/6)

    I also think that Zorro is so young, caught up in events that he was not properly prepared for by his father looking to protect his son. Sadly in reality this happens. He has though, found either lifelong friends or will be so traumatised by the whole awful experience that he will withdraw from the world. We can guess that its option 1. Wonder if some of the Herbivore nano tech might include bionic eyes.. like the dragonfly drone...
  23. @Jack Poignet is indeed very very good at angst with his characters. Here, I'm looking forwards to the lovely dope ( Ray) being a Mr. Bean while attempting to get this Big Paws reality integrated with his viewpoint!
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    Chapter 2 (5/6)

    At long last...a bit of sunlight in very dark story. Perhaps it is the dawn over the horizon 🤔
  25. Dr. Bob?!? From the Muppet Show? My my, a man of many unexpected alliterations
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