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  1. Darryl62

    25: Finley

    My parents had an orchard and sold the fruits, seconds ere preserved, we also made butter and cream with a butter churn, this in the late 60s, a hard life, school holidays meant working in the trees.
  2. Interesting to see both the young Richter and the more seasoned Richter, looking forward to the continuing developments!
  3. Ohh, the excitement builds!
  4. @RedMoon, I looked at your website and it looks impressive, my nieces are learning Mandarin but not sure if they know enough to translate, but in a way I am hoping that you are transcribing / translating to English all your stories. Loving this story and hoping for many more. Definitely I have recommended it and hopefully others will as well so that more readers can find this marvel!!
  5. Darryl62

    25: Finley

    My mother would give us icecream with a dollop of hot stewed peaches in winter in front of the open fire. One of the best childhood memories 💖
  6. Darryl62

    25: Finley

    Oh my giddy aunt, you pulled that firecracker out of the back pocket! Wowed said I wondering if this Unicorn has wings... both could fly...ooowwwhhhh
  7. I just wanted to say, thank you for your lovely story. More than happy with the way you work out the characters in this most amazing story ❤️
  8. So agree with you, but each of these people at the time were dealing with tragedy and had no room for others.
  9. Lordy, lordy, lordy.... how do you do it. Honestly, spellbinding.. even though less than 2000 words, more conveyed than some in 5000 words. If only each chapter was 5000 words, but... then the anticipation for a new chapter would be lost. I am in Australia so each new chapter is waiting at breakfast, you have created an amazing place to visit, thank you 😊
  10. Darryl62

    Time crystal

    So! Pigsirpoq becomes Emperor was my take.. a slip of the snout by Richter there..
  11. Wowed is not sufficient for this chapter! So many possibilities 😌 ✨
  12. The web is closing! Who to trust? Why kidnapping Pigsirpoq? Other than losing the selection, to what purpose? Was it to test defences?
  13. Darryl62

    Déjà Vu

    I could only think "mind the teeth " and then thought, they have quite a large tongue..
  14. From the harshness of both the landscape and the violent action to a warm and emotional reunion between the brothers and Qana. Most satisfying thanks again for your amazing world 🌎 ❤
  15. Oh my goodness, English is a 2nd or 3rd language!! You write with such a fluency that you have surprised me with this comment you added comments are also really appreciated
  16. Qana.. what had held him up? Are others also being attacked? Are the Canines targeting the Wolves or just the Snow clan? More questions!?. Who are the attacking group and who sent them. Wiil Winter Chill be needed and can its strength be 'lent' ? Loving the Pigsirpoq interactions 😍 ❤ Greedy that I am, just over 2000 words finishing one cliffhanger only to hand another! ( hoping for a 6000 word chapter 🙏)
  17. Wow! If only you could post more than 1 chapter a day!!!! So thrilling!
  18. It "Them" making themselves known is my guess. I just love the tail and ears as a form of communication and frequently wish I could display to my 2 teenage girls. Luckily I was overseas for 10 days so my equilibrium is fine, husband if had a tail would be thrashing around...hahaha
  19. This story is such a delight, I have no idea which way it will fall, but all the characters are so interesting and entertaining. Even the future/past chapters only add depth not a discordant tone which you have skilful avoided. Most impressed with your skill. (He sighed enviously)
  20. Winter Chill, sending greeting! A gift, makes me wonder what our hero will receive...
  21. Darryl62

    Sweet Suite

    I suspect Thors wealthy parents are going to be most unhappy and vocal just when the clan arrive and the flame will be lit. Also that Thors parents will be beholden in some way to Stef or Brad. Jeremy needs time, thats all. And Kris to occupy both his body and thoughts.
  22. Darryl62

    Void

    Such beautiful descriptive images that you conjure up. This story is like being on the event horizon of a black hole, inextricably drawn in..loving it
  23. Not sure if their snouts are made for kissing, perhaps nuzzling is the most comfortable action 🤔
  24. It seems to me that the hierarchical nature of the world leads those lower in the pack to live in the lower levels below ground and that having been to the surface was an unusual experience and exceedingly rare.
  25. Darryl62

    Terminal 5

    Strangely, perhaps from a non USA feel, this chapter left feeling as though I was treading water with no movement other than a restating of positions. While I acknowledge the research into this incident, overall I feel that the story has not progressed this story line and I await the next instalment that perhaps relates to the title and consequence. There, I said it..
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