Dan South

Time for a run.

I think the flashback is significant, not gratuitous. If not now, then sometime Felicity would have been in counseling. Ashlee’s issues are well displayed but is there an actual diagnosis? Pause the NOVA gays and get couples counseling STAT. Roots in reality are apparent. Thanks for the update!

Fantastic storytelling @drown

Boys. <sigh>

My only question is what is how autobiographical this is.? I suppose the story feels genuine and generous.

Fascinating when Holy Mother Church isn’t maternal. They’re in love. They’ll be fine. Right?

Great fun reading the comments before the update I’m so excited to see @Sean J Halford

You write great love/hate stories: I love to hate half your characters while I love the other half: High society, high drama. Great read

“…or in some piece of sh*t story on the internet.” LOL.

Spoiler alert: this story is neuro realistic. Not sure it’s meant to be but it hits. I will keep my words few. Quick read. Worth your time. Read this.

Much better than the Wikipedia image I felt compelled to google! 💜

I remain confused but highly entertained.

And today’s anatomy lesson is acromioclavicular joint !!

Here to join the sparrowfart fan club!

Go Alejandra slapping Elena! It’s a good start! Those bitches, Jim included, switched the babies. As always, delicious drama.

This keeps getting weirder and I’m very much here for it all. Tell us more @drown!

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This is not an easy read but it is a good one. A painful conflict finds a reasonable resolution. I had a hard time remembering that this is, at its core, a love story. Does love triumph? Only one way to find out. Read on …

As a former Gulf Coaster I’m going to dare a cliche here: what a perfect storm. An incredibly accurate hurricane description. Well done.

A respectable resolution for a plot that I found very conflicting . Stuart is a saint. I would have changed the locks is Chapter Two!

Rumination, tarnation, damnation. Imagination. Probably spelled most of those words wrong. Doesn’t change what I felt. What I feel. What I’ve experienced. I can’t not ruminate. I always feel the need to consider what what I’ve read. Tarnation has nothing to do with tarnish. No cloud, no darkness, no lack of polish. Damnation? Dammit this is ending. Not over. Just ending. For now? I choose damnation as my oath, my swear word to deal with not getting another chapter next Monday. Damnation! Imagination. Imagination? Stimulated. What did men made like me do to find love in the American west before it was America? Maybe the lucky ones found their Bearpaw. I’m going to leave a respectful request that someone lists the best order to read the old west of @Headstall because I’ll be waiting here for what happens next or, more accurately, happened next. #Reid

Nothing ‘boring’ here @drown. In a word…spellbinding. And if Grey’s wolf has doubts about Mark, so do I.

Boys are dumb I was. Carey will be fine.

@Lee Wilson is right about the tissue warning should be presumed reading @Mancunian but I, like @drsawzall jumped in without the needed supplies. A wonderful story, start to finish. I think I have some Baxter background reading to do. Cheers to all these wonderful characters!

Compelling.