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Dan South

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  1. I am excitedly reading this again on my way to a new chapter published. These guys are so easy to love.
  2. Great storytelling.
  3. Grey has said to himself “you are not those people” and I’m a bit stuck on that. Saved but severed. Fate determined at 15. Fascinating and compelling storytelling.
  4. For thisreader this is a new story by a newly published author ringing in a new year. A brilliant read that I am confident will only get better as it grows.
  5. Dan South

    Exposed

    Fantastic imagery! Easy to picture Ashlee racing up King Street to the Metro. Following!
  6. Dan South

    Chapter 1

    Following.
  7. I feel like medical student @vanalas made an appearance in the telling of this story!
  8. Dan South

    Chapter Two: Scent

    💜
  9. Dan South

    Chapter Two: Scent

    So…”all will be revealed” eh? Get to it @drown. You’ve got my imagination running wild. Fun!
  10. Dan South

    Chapter Two: Scent

    Grey’s side-shadowing is going to kill me. What happened at home? And why is this sh*tty little bar the ‘Lunar’ Haven?
  11. I think your dialog is great. Following!
  12. Dan South

    Chapter 15

    Follow the money.
  13. I blinked at him, "Are you mad? No-one loves going to IKEA." << agreed! Happy Holidays @Robert Hugill Thank you for so much entertainment this year.
  14. “I tried to get him uglier…” Love it and love the casual way you drop bombs like ‘disfigurement’.
  15. Dan South

    Chapter 1

    Amen
  16. He bought salt and sugar. Last trip was not-yet-needed nails. Weeding the garden Jubal was future planning. He’s not leaving.
  17. How could Isaac listen to that load of crud from Jim? Wish Amber had been there. I still have hope for her to tell the truth. Great to s e this update!!!
  18. Thank you for the ‘74 is it not that old’ for a healthy man and then having Dominic reinforce that, too. This older guy appreciates the nod.
  19. Dan South

    Family time

    Roll on!
  20. Dan South

    Chapter 8

    I enjoy the embedded history lessons in your flights of fancy/fantasy. Always a great read.
  21. It was fall when we discovered that Just beyond the fence line of our new backyard was a forest of Twink trees…
  22. Dan South

    Chapter 6

    Quoting you just to love this twice ❤️
  23. Dan South

    Chapter 1

    Goosebumps…the good kind!
  24. Lucas is my choice for third place most skittish but definitely third because he needs his rest to get back on his feet and back to his farm. Can’t take my (side) eyes off Reid. Can’t say that Lucas isn’t / couldn’t be more skittish than Reid. Where’s Billy? Once upon a time i could grab a TV Guide publishing this weekend to get a hint at next Monday’s episode….
  25. Dan South

    Chapter 14

    Spellbinding storytelling. I could feel the storm and the hurricane too.
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