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Thanks for the prompt addressing of the last chapter's cliffhanger. Until now there was a great deal of conjecture on what had happened to the rapist director. He was not killed , but terrified and humiliated The director had to face his worse fears up close and found the rattlers very threatening. Returning home he founds a rattlesnake in his bed and seemingly everywhere and had to jump through a window to flee to a neighbor. Animal control removed 11 rattlesnakes from his home. I am reminded of the scene in Godfather where the hollywood exec who opposed the Godfather found in his bed a bloody severed head of his his prized stallion.The exec got the implied message at that earlier time and I assumed a veiled, and indirect threat has been orbwill be given to the rapist to stay way from Travis. Will assummed Jake was behind the rattlesnake scare. Jake learned what would really scare the director. But , there was no evidence linking Jake to it at least for now. Will told Travis that Jake was upset that the guys hurt Travis whom he called his brother. Travis was touched that Jake stood up for him. “I have never had that until now,” he said. “This is the first time I had a brother do something like that for me, to really bail me out, to really have my back.” “Let’s hope Jake doesn’t get busted,” I said nervously.
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Travis had a revelation. He saw Chucky his stalker, at the club and decided to ignore him---and meant to frustrate Chucky who did leave. Travis shrugged. “I am not going to give that little bitch control of my life.”
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Damn--This step on the Railroad was headed by a bully and sadist. It turned out he wanteed to keep 74258 as his sex slave and would enslave or kill Abel. The labrador's sick intention slowly became evident and 74258 was the last to realize what is happenng and the labrador played with his tail and ass hole. Too suddendly, things changed.The Labrador who seemed to be in charge lost control. He was apparently mortally hurt but was able to get off a shot from his gun. The chapter ended too fast to reveal the results What happened? Who killed the Labrador? I assume it was 74258. Was Abel hit or missed by the labrador's gun? If the survive, They need to leave fast.
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Good New--So far they are safe and on their way. They have gotten, safe and useful guidance. 74258 still needs to pick his name. I can see an analogy to the US Civil War era underground railroad that helped freed slaves escape the South.
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I’m Harboring… a Fugitive?!
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in I’m Harboring… a Fugitive?!
OMG --What a mess! Ryder reminds me of the statement made by Churchill describing an opponent. He is not just a bull in a china shop--he brings his own china shop. The shop definitely has connections to a wolf pack since a salesman had a weapon able to injure wolf shifters. Jack and Ryder escaped. The police are after them . I expect Pembrooke and his allies will also be on the hunt. Danny needs to calm down. Will He? Will he listen to Ryder's explanation? BTW, will Ryder bring Jack with him since they both are on the run?- 22 comments
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What a delightful, heart warming start to their honeymoon. The location is superb and the host is generous and insightful. Adam and Marc want to make love often and i expect they will seek out new locations for sex. This is a one in a life time new experience. They should savor the moments nd create lasting memories. It is interesting to learn that this new couple has paired with a ancient, very courteous family with 1100 years in this area. I hope Bella will be able to return with them to be able to enjoy their home planet and home area.
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Until the end, I thought this was a set-up and the two were being tricked and would be captured and tormented. Finding Adam's restored head was too convenient and possible sign of their fate But, I was wrong. A safe alternative was found by74258 and Abel did not give away their plan.The two seem on the safe path to escape without their tracking collars.
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Well, it looks like Brad thinks the production company would be a good purchase. While talking with Stef and JP, they are shocked to get the latest news that something terrible happened to the rapist director. What happened to the director? Jake is missing Is Jake involved someway or is he behind the director's problems? The director is a bad guy so he may have other enemies, too, who want to hurt him.
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I love Finn's comment about Will “I think you’re the only dude I’ve been with who didn’t lie about his dick size,” he said, chuckled for a bit, then went back down on me and sucked me to a nice orgasm."
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Chapter 3 Accident (2/2)
akascrubber commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 3 Accident (2/2)
I am confused. Abel reached Luther who refused to leave. He instead wants to be near Richter. Does he think he can save him? His memory is lacking but Luther feels he can do something helpful. When talking with Luther an old white wolf appeared and stopped Abel from helping. The old wolf was a commander and not a friend of Luther and maybe messed with his mind. He took Abel away and back to his squad mates. Will Luther have enough time and skill to save/rescue Richter? Who are the real enemies?How did Abel end up in this squad? -
Jamie Vayne, Exposed?!
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Jamie Vayne, Exposed?!
Jamie did not read the clues and was too trusting. The Mitches looked like they were gleeful. They knew something he did not. Angus drove him home fast and nervous and told him to hold off looking at what was posted and trust him to look out for his career. In the end he told Jamie he would be the best guide for Jamie. Is Cottontail's brother in league with the livefeed crew and feeding them ideas? Cottontail is totally upset with his brother. But, I expect when Jamie did look at was posted he will be perplexed and see something quite different from what he experienced. Hmight be very upset and shocked. It would seem Angus had used him and abused him.The comments from fans seeing the bad drummer and as a troubled muscian portrayed should tear him down. Cottontail might show up to support Jamie and try to explain what had happened. Jamie is now the guy the fans will hate. Can Cottontail turn Jamie's hurt around?he has changed his attitude and wants to find a way to be Jamie's bf. Is- 7 comments
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Act I - Touch-A, Touch-A, Touch-Me
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - Touch-A, Touch-A, Touch-Me
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Act I - Touch-A, Touch-A, Touch-Me
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - Touch-A, Touch-A, Touch-Me
Wow--both guys are anal virgins and have not even been given a blow job by anyone else. They do not know what to do, Gab by custom cannot initiate any sex play. So if anything happens eventually it will be up to Ray to make the first move. This is so slow and awkward..... At least since Gab is naked, he starts and removes Ray's clothes so they are equal. They finally start stroking their own hard cocks and then begin stroking each other's cock. They then each have a great orgasm and release on their partner's body. They are overwhelmed I bet they can recharge quickly. I suggest they take a shower together and then get in bed. Maybe, nature will take over right away or when they wake up and at least one or both will make love to the other -
Chapter 3 Accident (1/2)
akascrubber commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 3 Accident (1/2)
OMG-a passive, non-responsive Luther has been sentenced to be given 160 lashes and hanged. He offered no defense and was judged guilty of killing Richter. Did not the emperor know Luther was Richter's replacemet. Why has the emperor or council not said anything. Luther asked for more time. He was given it by having several days of lashings, Abel has planned to help Luther escape and travel on a ship through a wormhole. He can defeat anyone coming after them. But, Abel's friends are too scared to help him. He will act on his own. Willl Luther accept help and escape? This will give him even more time, I expect. -
Part One: Bathroom Confession
akascrubber commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Bathroom Confession
Brandon wisely gave the 14 year old some solid advice in the bathroom about needing a new friend for sex. But, he realized the youngster could not take his advice and will be troubled hoping for some sex with his oldest friend who is really straight. In fact Brandon was giving himself some advice ,too, for his dealing with his straight friend, Tyler. Brandon still wants Tyler badly. Tyler wants Brandon but is hurt thinking Brandon considers him just another conquest. Still both Tyler and Brandon do not talk openly and misundestand each other. Tyler wants Brandon but thought he was giving a guy a bj at school and in effect saying his sex with Tyler was not commitment to him. It turns out Brandon is selling his drugs for cash and not giving blow jobs. BTW, Devin and Tyler also seem apart and not acting friendly. Devin has given Brandon the death staredo Brandon wonders if Tyler turn Devin against him? This is confusing. -
The youths are together now after recovering their shared values. Josel and Zdain had to decide to be friends in front of others. There are underlying problems and missing people that could later cause trouble.
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Chapter 2 Accomplice (4/4)
akascrubber commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 2 Accomplice (4/4)
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Chapter 2 Accomplice (4/4)
akascrubber commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 2 Accomplice (4/4)
74258 has changed his mind, he is not content to stay. He arranged a malfunction so Abel would meet him. "So, thanks to you, I'm now suffering from sleep deprivation every single day." 74258 adjusted his collar again before walking over to me and handing me something. "I suppose that means it's time to consider leaving this damn place." It is also time for 74258 to get his own name as they plan their escape. -
Chapter 2 Accomplice (3/4)
akascrubber commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 2 Accomplice (3/4)
What a disaster! The fox named Abel by his childhood friend Adam who was tortured and killed thought he found a kindred spirit in rebellion in 74258. He was mistaken. 74258 accepted his fate and saw no reason to leave in hope of a better life in a new land. He was sent here because he slept with his earl's son and he expects soon to no longer have to look over his back because the Earl is old and will die soon. Abel went from anger to dispair. He has lost his only hope. The way to get out required two to input code and data. The system will reboot in 3 months. What will Abel do now? Will he give up? Will he instead try to bring down the whole system to avenge Adam? What are his real options? -
Part One: The Junkyard
akascrubber commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: The Junkyard
omg--high school drama! Issues, problems are built into mountains from molehills. People jump to conclusions and do not ask and listen..... Tyler is jealous and cannot get over his jealousy and assumed Bradon gave a guy a bj and showed him he was a momentary thing--But was Tyler right? He did not really talk with Brandon who initially was defensive. Having someone jealous he has cared about for so long maybe new for Branso.If they are going to be a long term item, they will really need to talk and really open up. Both will be hurting unless they cler the air.. Can Christine talk some sense into Tyler? A neutral third part might break the ice. As for junkyard Matt, there is more to meet the eye, I like the suggestion to checkout the yearbook for pics, club memberships and the bio's of each senior. Is there a counselor or teacher or coach who knew his dad and mom? Will Tyler as his mom? It is also time for Devin to give up his anger and talk to Tyler. The next day at their senior table would be a place to re-connect.- 41 comments
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Might the ninja protector for Travis be tasked by Jake to really injure the Director so he has to be taken off the production crew? This could be a fast way to protect Travis.
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Chapter 2 Accomplice (2/4)
akascrubber commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 2 Accomplice (2/4)
76184 was a friend of Adam and enhanced the destructive code Adam entered into the system drones. He thought he was being careful. But, his boss came down to tell him he noticed changes in the system and it would be reverted at the end of the harvest in case Adam had caused harm. 76184 was not charged with anything only alerted . He might need to make more changes. What does he have in mind to effect? What is his goal? -
Sometimes, in a Crystal Ball
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Sometimes, in a Crystal Ball
Three Points: 1. Jack is a gifted fortune teller. He noted Ryder was suited for average joe or Danny. Pembrooke was called his wrong choice--for mate--and might kill him with a sword. 2, Ryder has jack taking him to the shop that sells incense to Pembrooke. Ryder will talk without restraint and shock the staff talking about Pembrooke.I can see the staff valuing Pembrooke as a client or pack leader and will identify Ryder for Pembrooke. Maybe someone will tail Ryder to Danny's residence so he can be set up for killing tonight or in the morning when he leaves seeking Pembrooke.. 3, Danny is even more smitten with Ryder. He will want to have sex with Ryder this evening.- 26 comments
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Act I - I Dreamed A Dream
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - I Dreamed A Dream
I will await to read your new background. You , as the author, can frame the terms. -
Chapter 2 Accomplice (1/4)
akascrubber commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 2 Accomplice (1/4)
The sad painful public torture of the fox, Adam, reminded me of the gruesome drawing and quatering execution in Braveheart which was also meant as a warning to the masses---and failed. Adam's death might also fail to stop the cries for help. He signaled his reform/rebellion was not discovered. Now, we will see what happens.
