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This is excellent news Al Norris. I am really looking forward to more and new chapters being posted here. I have read the original ones with great interest and can understand how compelling new chapters will be. Thank you for the update.

Adga and her crew fought a serious,prolonged series of fights to control the underground space and capture bandits. At the end Adga and the leader of the remaining bandits came to an understanding and a stalemate. They all will stay underground in place as the death storms prevent movement. Now they have to figure out how to eat, secure enough water and get healthy. Several are still injured from the fighting. Adga is worried to face her new position of greater authority with two slaves granted by Lord Kandahar and the expectation of a higher rank and command. She is told she could be, if all goes well in Scorpion Falls, to be in line to wage battles that will earn her great spoils beyond what she thought was possible. She cannot yet accept this bright future. Others by her are supporting the reality of her greater opportunities.It will take time for Adga to grow into this new light.

Zach has lost Taylor as a sexual partner. He made a play for Will and was rebuffed. I can see Zach working on Travis once Will is 3000 miles away at Harvard and Travis is tensed up starting his acting career. Who knows? Resolving the Curtis Buck murder should clear the field and set up any new interpersonal dynamics.

You ended this chapter with the mother of all cliffhangers that changes nearly everything. It is so shocking. Afterdusk spoke to confirm the until now hidden powerful and scary battle ahead! We learn from the deadly dying green dragon that green dragons are revealing themselves to behind the problems facing King Wyhrem. They claim to be numerous and to know how to use the old magic. They want their homeland back from the king after thousands of years of denial. They know how to assume a second shape to remain undiscovered as they plot against their enemies and this ability is not limited to only royal green dragons. King Wyhrem faces a seious hidden enemy not caused by the actions of Premier Kandric. Kandric is in the way of the green dragons. He and his brothers are needed to help Wyhrem save this kingdom. Wyhrem and Kandric's upcoming meeting should take on a new , less contested meaning and might perhaps suggest a need for a joint fighting command and strategy to fight the green dragons who are behind the Rolling Dale mess. We will anxiously want to know what you say next. The enemies Kandic and all face are much more varied, numerous, hidden and extra powerful. It is called a "mortal spectacle." Wyhrem heard proclaimed...."As the Green Dragon Death exploded outward, the voice of Afterdusk entered the great hall. “Now, mortals, you start to understand what you face. This is becoming quite the mortal spectacle!”

Change starts when one person takes responsibility and acts properly. But, we also saw that two people with good intentions can reinforce what they think and help them realize what matters at the important time of the year. No preaching or appeals to guilt. Love for your fellow man matters.

The four are meshing much better together. They talked easily. Colin cooks and is going to teach Owain and maybe Joe since he will need survival skills when he is on his own. This was all said so effortlessly and congenially. It seems Owain is going to join a choir and join Colin in the endeavor. Mhari did not know that Owain had enjoyed singing in a choir when he was on his own. She still accepted her father's guidance that hobbies were a waste of time. She missed on on so much and is seeing in others the value of a hobby now. Mhari has not yet found a hobby, but I think she is unwinding and opening up and will find one or more. The three adults are encouraging each other and are supportive of Joe's acting training. Joe will have an improved family environment to help him grow and become a better young man. Any large inheritance is still a distant and non-earth shaking possibility.

Wow, Double Wow Bravo! The battles were well fought and prolonged. Just when all seemed lost--Cassiel and the Goddess of War and Kage intervened. Huntington was toast and all his remaining forces were killed. Huntington badly misjudged and caused his own destruction by violating what was allowed. You did it and tied it all up in one glorious, fulfilling chapter. Thank you dear author.

Well Done--a truly happy ending with many marriage ceremonies ahead orchestrated by Francine. Matt, Rusty, Maddox and Jonathan are so happy and ready to move on And you left the identity of Xpress still unknown. Hmm--something to discover in any future story. Thank you

One of those two girls helping out at the Boot could be a potential girl friend for Michael, I bet. Hearing him sing could make a star and boyfriend material.

I am also surprised how perceptive Toby is, He knows that Brian and Gordon are so close and that they play with Russ/.Toby approves of it and likes Russ. He is verry pleased Brian and Gordon will be getting married. Russ keeps coming up. They are setting boundaries and more willing to take up his offer to use his Normandy property and are aware he might stop by for some fun. It seems fine with them and even Toby. They are ready for the meeting with the lawyers next week. They do not know the agenda. Deirdre is going far away with Jasper. They should give up custody of Toby and cut out the maintenance. Maybe this is something for negotiation ? Toby has the nasty comments Jasper has made to him on a list. He seems to be unfit and not creating a healthy environment for Toby. What Toby can add wil strengthen the case for Deirdre to give up Toby. She has made her choice and it is not Toby.

The most disturbed family member is Taylor Buck. She has been fucking her father for 6-7 years. Maybe she is getting too old for him and he rejected her for a younger girl and she atacked him? Maybe they had a large fight after she chose Curtis over Zach and she got very upset about Curtis not wanting only her. Who knows? She has to be so mixed up and unhinged? Someone said--who shot JR? Well, we found out later after the cliffie that JR was not killed. I think we need lots more info about the death of Curtis and should get it in the next chapter. Travis was at the home and just spoke to Curtis. Jake was mysteriously in town. They could be police suspects. It should be a major well investigated crime.

I took methodwriter85's point that our dear author has not chosen to show Will in housekeeping roles and not to suggest he did not do them when needed. He will need to be more independent at Harvard without a family staff helping him. I am sure he can adapt. I still bet he will let Stef dress him when he visits Cambridge and New York Will spends his own money at times. A few instances have been made part of the chapters and maybe there are others not reported. He bought the house and land and funded renovations in Hawaii. He has come into $150 million from a trust and made an angel investment from his assets in the early version of Facebook. Stef was impressed by him. Will has bought gifts for Travis and others recently. Will can live a peaceful, very upscale , unhurried lifestle with his own funds. If he was on his own without a family support system after college , he might need to hire trusted people.

Wonderful--What a delightful time as Hudson prepared and fucked Otis after giving Otis a blow job. Hudson is intoxicated with Otis. He carefully prepared Otis to be fucked and Otis truly enjoyed what Hudson did. Otis loved being fucked and wanted to be fucked agan as soon as possible.Hudson was in love with Otis but could not bring him to say the word "love." Otis wants no longer than to be a temporary boyfriend.However, Hudson feels guilty thatnhe is lying about his police job and what he is doing to catch evil doers. He does not bring up Jackie to Otis. Otis says the most provocative things to Hudson and turns him on Otis has told Hudson he wants to wear a tail. Now that his ass hole is loser from being fucked, I bet he can wear a tail and make Hudson happy. Otis wants to please Hudson.

Oh No! Simon is bought as a slave by the orc king, a huge beast. He is not bring used yet, but Simon lusts after the king's stunning cock and magnificent cumming ability. The now alive Simon loves sex, being bred and blowing male cocks. Will Simon stay a slave to the king or will he escape soon? Yidian has yet to help Simon.

If Sebastian has a psychological operations /deception annex to his war plan, he might task Elijah to appear as Huntington at a critical place and time to confuse and misdirect and turn to the side or around Huntington's forces and weaken the attacks on the Montana shifters. Elijah as Huntington could order a retreat. The Montana shifters could exploit any opportunity given them.

kbois--Might your epic battle be stretched over two chapters with a cliff hanger in between ? The tension will be very high. Just saying--I know you cannot give your plot away

Huntington, I expect, will stay back and give orders . He could be surrounded with powerful guards. He could see his role as a modern general who approves the plan and charges trusted subordinates to carry the plan out. Generals do not fight unless pressed. But battle plans never survive the first contact. Huntington will be a top target if he is found. He knows this and will not expose himself unless he is critically needed. Asa and Caleb will be looking for him. Note : Russian generals in the Ukrainan war are being killed by snipers at a large rate. Communication between Russian troops is very poor and generals have moved to the front lines to resolve unexpcted problems and to make sure their orders are carried out. Ukraine snipers and signal intel experts --who will notify the snipers --look for Russian generals to kill.

Huntington has to be in Montana leading his side and surrounded by tough fighters and maybe some of his reptile warriors. He wants to see Sebastian and others die. I bet Sebastian is going to attack when he sees the enemy and not just defend in place. Asa and Caleb would be perfect, fast moving killers for Huntington , if they see Huntington find an opening . Kill off the head of the snake is a common tactic to win.

Huntington has to die. This conflict must end decisively with the evil leader terminated !

This build up felt like the beginning of the movie The Longest Day--preparation and waiting and anxiety “Goddamn!” Asa exclaimed. “This is fucking unnerving. I’ve never hated cats so much as I do right now!” Now, Sebastian has confirmation that Huntington has landed all his forces and brought them together and will attack shortly His forces are ready--Asa and Caleb will be at the front Sebastian sets Plan A is being executed--I hope he is ready with a Plan B and Plan C. Huntington may well surprise him with feints and a commando raid or two. Maybe, the Pixies or some fae forces might be able to impair Huntington in some way? I cannot wait to see what happens?

Mhari is extending the olive branch to Colin and finding common ground of family similarities and a possible renovation project Colin might do for her. She seems supportive and made a point of asking Colin to be a friend--a good friend --for her brother who has been uprooted and needs less stress. Colin was strong enough to say he needs a friend, too, since he has come out. I think Mhari cleared the air in a good way. Let us see what happens in the pub and hopefully she will continue to be supportive of Owain and Colin.

There are some important things to learn in the next chapters. I hope Frederick and the three wagons Mabil sent on ahead to Silverton made it to the town safely and were not attacked by bandits. They can help Mablin, if and when they meet up. The upcoming plan and trip can be agreed upon to Silverton, Scorpion Falls as the entrance to the Desert Realms and then to Lucas the Lost. Mablin and others might take time to advise Xavier and his friends how to maintain a low profile so they can move without any issues.

The evil Boris almost l killed Winston and he fell over the cliff. james went down and farther to find Winston. He met mysterious being and saw beyond ancient sites, beings and statues.Knowledge of the past was transmitted to James. Winston was alive and later rescued. They did not speak to anyone what they had seen or learned. The site is staying hidden. Winston and James were rescued. The original discovery by their parents was announced to the press and public. Boris was undergoing care and not around. In celebration, James and Winston made love for the first time that night. What a magical event. James was the vessel that honored those beings from the past who wanted to speak to him and reveal their knowledge to him.

Both Charlie are fitting in and growing into the family. Charlie is working well at the autoshop. He is encourage to speak up. Max made sure he was using the focus with the business paying the bills. Stacy got Michel to open up. A new haircut made him look amazing and extra handsome. Stacy led him into considering working part time and then going to college. He set Michael up to sing a special , touching song and then a happy one and and his performnce stunned the people. He sang beyond their expectations. It was magical. I was reminded of the surprising impact Susan Boyle made when she sang "I Dreamed a Dream" at Britain's Got Talent. Michael has a great potential. Tomorrow they are going to help Harry go home. He should be pleased to see all the improvements made. His home will look and operate better and will be safe. Stacy and others will stay commited to helping Harry. Life is good!

Zoel's mocking tone was evident. "Fuckin’ freshies. It means that we have everything we need now. The satchel, the greycells, your girl. Yep. Consider our beef squashed. You won’t be a thorn in your asses anymore, squirts." He did it. Zoel angered and energized Rafe and his mates. They will fight aggressively and seek to win back their kidnapped friends. Zoel willl be ready. He has been preparing. BTW, is Zoel taking on others without the approval of his alpha, Cain? He did not mention Cain. This upcoming battle should be epic.