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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    Thank you for a happy, heartwarming, very comforting story. What a welcoming, supportive community of interesting, good people.. People shared their talents and time. You wanted to know them and be with them and keep on learning what they face. Lives were repaired and enhanced. They all can look forward with hope and love.
  2. I like the comment that Russ is becoming part of the family. The three men happily have sex and more sex. They are compatible and energetic in bed and in the showers. Toby learns about their physical relationship. It is not hidden or seen as something to hide. Toby is not concerned, just accepting. He likes Russ. He wants to see his flat with the great view. Their holiday is comimg up. I hope they have great fun without any wrinkles.
  3. What a shock! Mark has followed Grey from the pack to the B&B. They fight as wolves and Clara and Dave keep them apart and turned back to human status. Grey is told he has a new home. Mark demands he go back to his old home. Mark has broken free from silver chains. He not supposed to be able to bo this. At the end Grey decides he needs to find Beatrice who may be Dave's mother.Mark says he might be able to help Grey find her. What supernatural powers to Clara and Dave have? How can Beatrice help all of them? Willl Mark and Grey end up fighting and killing each other?
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    Awesome--this is a magic filled introspective chapter that opens up new avenues and promises bracing honesty, Xavier commits to the future he and his father wants: a new Seandra I did not fully see they way events are unfolding. I was surprised pleasantly. Xavier and others are travelling and going to set up a camp awaiting Mablin's return. Mablin is going peacefully to Silverton to sell the green dragon. Jameson has acted like a businessman, not a bandit. Mablin expects to get a fair price. If not, Xavier has paid him for the horns already much more that he expected for the whole dragon. He will seek out a mage who can gate them all to Lucas the Lost. When he returns Xavier promises to tell him the truth. Mablin dare not anger or betray Xavier when he learns about the dragons in his caravan. They have caught a halfling who is also a green warrior dragon. The halfing wants the green dragon's horns since they can reveal how the green dragons change shapes, He is held as a collared prisoner. Xavier and others have kept the horns will investigate their magic and learn how green dragons change so easily.. The prisoner can be interrogated later. Thane reveals more animal magic to others so they can see through their eyes like he can. Lucas explains more about magic and magic users to Killian. He has become more powerful than Lucas at this time till they reach the next location but is untrained at his new level. Xavier allows Lucas to open up and Killen learns who are dragons. Aegir went into the spirt realm and learned Garnet was a dragon. We do not know how he will react. Critically, Xavier commits to a goal that will unit him and his friends. Xavier..." could find a place to cower and simply try to live his life, or he could do as his father commanded and try to retake and rebuild Seandra. He may not have the Seandrans that had been sent with his mother and the wealth from his father’s hoard, but he had his friends, old and new." By the way, Xavier does not know some Seandrans have appeared to Adga in Scorpion Falls. An inidentified small being magically hidden is following Xavier and his crew. He cannot figure them out. Is he a threat? Who is he? He does not appear to be a green dragon. Is he connected to Gambra ? I expect things will change dramatically when Mablin returns and he and others find out Garnet and Xavier are dragons who are seeking the power contained in Lucas the Lost. I hope that a mage can transport the caravan quickly to the target city.
  5. One of my pet peeves is when a writer starts what apppears to be a good, compelling story and then just stops publishing with no explanation. In your words they go dark. kbois, I appreciate that you think through what you are doing and write when you find a worthy, interesting voice you can sustain . You can be trusted. Plus, what you write is high quality and very interesting. I want to read what you publish without hesitation. You have earned your large loyal following.
  6. Experiencing a chronic medical condition stresses relationships in new ways. I agree with Cane23 . Owain, Colin and Mhari passed their tests and became even more compatible and accepting with each other. I liked how they treated each other and spoke their minds. You left me wondering-Will Colin acually move in? Can both agree on a interior design plan? Can they bring Joe along and help him smooth out his problems with his mother? What is Owain'medical impaiment and will he become disabled at some point? It is encouraging he has been honest with Colin and Mhari . They have not fled him.
  7. Wow--Dave is the son of Beatrice who was left on the foorstep of Clara's mother. The curse did not attach to him due to his separation. He was raised as Clara's brother. He must be a mage/shaman werewolf. Grey's presence will unlock his until now true nature. He is fated to protect the wolf. He and Grey are ready to be mates, it seems. They have a very strong attraction. Grey needs to come clean and relate his history and who hates him.. They need to be told of the curse and about Beatrice. Clara figured it out. She pushed the guys to realize who they were since they were clueless. The three will be powerful when united. They should be able to stand against their enemies. Time will tell.
  8. Well worth reading. This story will leave you very satisfied. It has it all-love, passion, evil, individuals you grow to value and some to hate and fear, monsters, shifters, magic, serious fighting, uncertainties, mysteries and several cliffies. You will truly enjoy the engaging, long ride to the end.
  9. Bravo! Well done on so many levels. You ended this story on a happy, romantic note and tied all three togther wonderfully. I valued your honest, backstory insights on the series . You have created a monumental. substantal intellectual enterprise that excited our minds and passions and captivated us. Like the best writers you engaged your fans with appealing comments that improved your impact. I want to keep on reading what flows from your pen. Thank you
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 104

    The missing guard sticks out as a sore thumb. Why was he missing? Did Curtis or Big or Taylor or someone else pay him to leave so they could do somethng without being seen? If it was Curtis, it could be for a sexual reason. Finding out why the guard was missing could rule out any premeditation for the killing of Curtis. I suggest when Travis go to present their plan to Big to make him and his sister rich that they find out why the guard was missing.. They also might require Big to turn over the tape of the beating and shooting to them. He might still keep a copy. Then, both sides would have a reason--the tape versus huge payment-- to not go public or later try blackmail.
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 104

    Well, the main question was answered--Taylor shot her father with her gun in a fit of rage and anger. Sher was taken by EMT's to a hospital berfore the police arrived to see the murder site and begin an investigation. But, Zach Big will lay the bal,e on him for two reasons.1 Protect his sister who he loves,2 Be able to collect$100 million from a life insurance policyon Curtis. It would be void if he commited suicide.Travis is conflicted and wants Zach to be pumished for raping him the last year. Will states“You either go along with this plan to frame Zach, which you know is wrong, or you sacrifice your reputation and your career.” After fucking and showering and fucking again, Will and Travis develpo a new plan. Convince Big to agree itwas suicide,Will and Travis will each contribute$50 million to Big and Taylor. I do not know if the plan be accepted by Big and Taylor. Things may be rolling along and statements have been made that cannot be taken back.It will be hard to charge Taylor with the murder without cooperation. Any evidence connecting her to Curtis must be lost since she was taken to the hospital and put in hospital gear. Zach could be charged unless Big and Taylor support his innocence. Travis and Will need to see Big ASAP and see what he thinks about their offer. I hope Big listens. They are being so generous. Can this worK?I hope so.
  12. akascrubber

    Party Time

    There was a lot of potential for things to go wrong, but the event was held without a major issue. For a first effort, it was a success. There aftermath will be a learning/testing ground. Will anyone complain? Will any pics be taken and posted online? Photographers can get quite inventive, if there is money to be made. I can see a security upgrade might be considered. If this was a intel situation, there would be an airport like full scanner at the entrance for people to be full body scanned and and cell phones would be taken and held until the guest leaves But the boss was happy and the security staff was pleased. So, Bravo! The event left a good feeling. Now Russ and Brian and Gordon are going to have some great fun and be able to enjoy each other intimately.
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    Heavenly intervention from Ryan's dead father saved Ryan from committing suicide. He has had a tough life and is currently beset by bullies in school. He was at a very low point until now, Ryan is gven two glimpses in to a possible future that gives him hope and a choice--to save one guy. He no longers thinks about suicide, How he moves forward will be very interesting.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    I love the plot complexity and cast of evil players. Basileus Dio has found out he has a trusted noble and his clan with a small army to safeguard him. We know who is the most important leader of the plot against the Basileus but the court intrigues suggest many cannot be trusted. We also so know who is the main strong good man defending the Basileus, Raith. Raith is sent on a spy mission to a port to find culprits. He is taking a squad of trusted men with him. I expect the troubles will increase soon.Raith has to watch his back.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 16

    Did Sam have a will--even written by someone else or forged--that left his assets to a person who could be the killer ? Or,Sam was in debt. Did he have to give a pledge of his assets to pay off the owner of his debts?
  16. akascrubber

    Prologue

    Intriguing start. Thank you. I am expecting a great tale based of what you have written before.
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 16

    Calhoun and Chase now have evidence from Rory's confession that Micco was not the killer of Sam. Two others are now prime suspects. Somethung went wrong, Rory knew Sam was not to be killed. Same wanted the shelter to be shut down so he could get the inheritance money. But the hurricane is messing things up. Regular law enforcement pracics cannot be folllowed. The good guys need to get to safety and the two bad guys need to be rounded up when possible. I expect the dangers from the huge weather rain and high winds the hurricane will drastically change things.Flooding and tree uptooting and buildings being destroyed might change things in unexpected ways and kill people. Micco will be trying the protect the animals.
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 103

    Maurice Jones-Drew was an All American Running Back at UCLA. He is an African American who in college measured 5'7" and 200 lbs. He was a high draft pick in 2005 and joined the NFL. Zack should be so fortunate as Jones-Drew. He needs to not be charged as a killer to keep his football career safe.
  19. I am looking forward to your Jackie solution. I thought Hudson would disappear him into protective custody and he would seem to the boss as if he ran away. It might cause the boss to need Hudson even more to set up the new club. Instead, maybe Hudson has found something on Jackie that he does not want the boss to know and both guys need to say quiet to suvive. But--no spoilers so I will await your solution in the next chapter.
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    Except for Harry talking with Michael and Charlie,you are tying most things together wonderfully. Brad and Charlie strenthened their relationship sexually. They seem so committed. The actions leading up the musical built up and extended the true holiday spirit. People in need were supported. So many people stepped up to help in the ways they could. The Christmas musical was delightful and very entertaining. Stacy as Daisy Chain acting like Mae West sounded so encouraging and happy. You wanted to be there. The acts charmed the crowd . I was impressed by Michael who should be a winner when he goes to college. You left us with good feelings and high hopes for all. This happy chapter is a fitting tribute to Carlos. He loved life and his characters conveyed his love and your characters do also. Thank you for this holiday treat. Happy New Year!
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 31

    Beckett keeps meeting fools along the way. Now the creatures on the mage coucil seem standoffish and threatening until he uses some magic, They say he is not human. Maybe, they will not kill him and , instead, help him. Can the mage council get Beckett back to Paralax ? Will he have to find his own Acme rocket?
  22. Hudson and Otis made love anfd are in love, They feel they are the lucky ones, But Hudson's cover seems to be broken. Jackie knows his real name from Otis telling him. Jackie wonders if he is a cop. What will Hudson do to Jackie? Will he disappear him?
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    Jeha is in the midst of a family battle. Efforts have been made to kill him-- probably by his cousin and rival, Moon. Moon is getting the family involved in drugs that kill and bringing unwanted publicity. Jeha has the support of his father and mother and grandfather, the family head, to stop Moon's drug business. While on the way to find the master chemist for Moon, Jeha sees Axel again and is beguiled by him. He wants a relationship with Axel Unfortunately, Jeha might see him at some point soon as a paitent, if Moon is able to have him injured.
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    A magical story uniting three men in love . A dead man's messages and hopes are fulfilled and two men connect.What a sweet HEA tale. This is a wonderful message to begin 2024!
  25. akascrubber

    Elijah's Encore

    Perfect-the love abounds and extends with all from Elijah onwards. The twins are going to find meaning in their lives with their mates , family and a career as a doctor. I like knowing that Elijah and Tyler realize Kage is with them, protecting them. BTW--I can see the Brazil vacation as a possible theme of a new story ???
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