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Kieran endured his arrest and 12 hour ordeal. The police were certain he killed Big Paul but could not prove it, Kieran is even more a marked man to them. They will get him if he makes a mistake, It is assumed he ruled his area. But, the police have not realized that Ben was the real boss and killer. His killing power was known to the people. Kieran thought Ben brutally killed Big Paul to clear any opposition to him. Ben ruled and Kieran realized it. The chains around him were tightening But to those around Kieran ...." He was powerful. He was the undisputed King of Cradle Grove."

Finally, the three are going to make love. They need to do this to get beyond the veil. Theo has resisted. He thinks the two humans cannot stand up to his sexual power. The two humans want to have sex with Theo. Finally, he cannot say no and they are going to share a bed.

You are saying Ben is just a distraction! This must portend a shakeup in the hierarchy and a new direction, if Ben is a side issue. I am looking forward how you move this story ahead with what you call the main event.

Are we seeing that Kieran choosing Riley and kissing him will lead to his eventual downfall with a new boss taking over after he is killed? Ben will say he made his choices and the consequences are his alone. Am I too pessimistic?

Now, things are getting a lot clearer, Alivin understands the garden in a new light from his designer's perspective and he is stunned He thinks it is inattentional and brilliantly designed and Tabby McCormick is the wise, skilled designer. The garden is not chaos. He sees how magnificent it is. He tells Tabby what he thinks and Tabby is overwhelmed by his insights. They agree a spot needs more blue--some lobelia. It is a wonderful collaboration. Alvin figures out he is a McCormick and asks about Tabby's living arrangements. He sleeps in the hammock and sometimes the shed--the artist studio now. Alvin asks him to move into the house and use the couch or share his bed. Tabby said he is not ready for that but negotiates a home cooked vegetarian meal from him with granny's apple pie as desert. He will pick the tomatoes and mushrooms. Alvin can easily make the pasta but is stumped by the apple pie request. He is going to search through granny's papers for a pie recipe. I bet the meal will bring them closer together. The apple pie Alvin makes might need refinement and Tabby should be forgiving. It will be time to talk and find more common ground.

Kieran was saved from the police by his father and his solicitor. He will not be charged with killing Gaz,.But his father essentially disowned him and said he was no longer connected to Kieran. His life is now based around where he lived now. However, things have changed for Kieran. Riley kissed him and he did not know what to do now. Riley had feelings for him. Kieran met Ben as he left the jail and told him about the kissed and asked for his help and wanted to know what to do. Ben saw the kiss as a weakness. He thought Riley will fail him and hurt his rule. They walked back to his place and met Riley, Ben showed he did not like Riley and left. Kieran did make a choice that showed weakness to Ben. He wanted Riley and will face the consequences. Near his room he kissed Riley, He cemented their connection. I still do not know what Ben wants. What does he want Kieran to do for him?

Matt is a failure. He is told over and over again he is a loser. It got so bad his father threw him out of his house. Matt has to find a place to live and a paying job to support himself. He lucks out and finds a place and a job that can use his editing skills from his college days. The only problems: his landlord is a good looking gay guy and his new boss is gay and his magazine is aimed at a gay audience. Matt has gotten his hetro self into a strange new world. How can he survive? Will he be found out and thrown away? Is he still a loser? Let us see how Matt moves ahead and navigates his strange new world?

A young man who did not take his responsibilities seriously in thrown out of his house by his father for messing up. He went through a long exploration of learning, of denial, shame and acceptance. He met a good man and after trials they clicked. It turns out to be a HEA.

What a crazy first date. Klebber is easily accepted by Dennis' family and friends. Even his two young relatives are valued . Dennis showed up an hour late and behind the curve. He and Klebber finally talk as Klebber is grilling the meat for the party But given that this is a wacky relationship that survives chaos, Klebber leaves for a hoped for hour on another date. Kleeber leaves his youing charges behind. Dennis finds out by picking up the wrong phone that Klebber is on a date. Dennis is going to leave and confront Klebber leaving his kids behind at this party. What can go wrong? Lots!

OMG--He is now an animal encased in leather and metal---Santa demanded and Claus performed magnificently. Santa's mouth-controlled Claus who released a great amount of savory cum that pleased Santa. Now, Santa is going to breed Claus. I expect in the next chapter his ass is claimed and will be powerfully taken and he will be filled with Santa's cum. Claus is agreeing to all this and seems to want it.

Cochran has more incentive now to find Rick and possibly kill him. He needs to be extra careful. Will he agree to be bait in a trap to capture Cochran? His place has extra police around it so the neighbor boys should be safe,

So, the final book could be a new one: Joel, Married with him running the farm/ranch with his partner

So, you are going to be inspired to keep on writing, Hooray!

You can always write a new work taking up Joel where you want to place his life, if you feel inspired.

24K sounds like 5 chapters, not one last chapter--Unless you are in Kyle Aarons territory who wrote a nearly 200, 000 word chapter and has more chapters to write in his Kandric Saga.

They have worked half naked in only underwear and Tabby began touching Alvin with feeling. They all but saw they want each other. I hope they move on tomorrow morning without reservation and with a breakfast of each other's desires being rewarded . Can they please play inside without viewers or interruptions? The deserve the freedom to be privately intimate to begin a new chapter in their relationship on a strong footing . Everyone , including Ms Patel, will know what has happened soon enough.

Kieran met "Ben" when he reported for work at the department store. He was shocked to see him in this world. He now realized ..."He was not a partner in a dark dance. He was a pet. A project. A possession so complete his keeper didn’t even need to speak to him." Will he figure out or be told why he was chosen and ruled?

I think Will is right about Travis and his method acting with his soap Father. He might well recreate the pressures and pain with Curtis, I hope Travis is able to accept the help of a therapist Will told him about a therapist that helped him. I am glad they are having a rich creative sex life and that is very good for them.

Jody was fucked and thrilled. The coach was ready and took charge. Their sex was intense, energetic and rewarding, They both were very pleased., What a glorious time.

So, Noah's grandfather placed a $5 million bounty on his head, The judge has reviewed the evidence around the call covering the bounty and has ended the court session until 9 AM tomorrow, Noah's mother is very upset. Her case is hurt and she left ' Things are looking good for Noah for now Noah remained in the court room with others and a violent explosion rocked the courthouse. Are Noah and any other of his family members hurt? I hope they get any needed medical care promptly. Why is Little B the bailiff?

Lyn gave Alexander an unusual gift in hope of helping him get out of what Lyn thought was his funk. It worked and they talked. Lyn called him his best friend who he did not want to lose. Brad was his brother and in a separate category. Brad surprised them all by saying he was told Alexander had a serious girlfriend. He denied it to them. The seeds are laid for continued misunderstandings. 50chapters and they cannot talk plainly with each other.....mmmm

Ohhhh--Hunter had a magical time with Yeison. They finally made love and really enjoyed each other's bodies and their sexual desires. Hunter was the skilled lover. Yeison said he loved Hunter and Hunter said it back as required. Yeison wanted them to be boyfriends--Hunter was not ready to go that far. But the times they spent together were so rewarding, happy and uncommonly fulfilling..... Will the passion of the moment wane? Will Hunter's practice of straying return? Will Hunters attraction to the bad boy Miquel surface ? Hunter is fascinated by him. What is this secret special mission that his father has for him that might confound Hunter's plans?

Yep, Alvin is doomed, Tabby pulls him in and he knows it. Alvin cannot go back to a high paying corporate job and give this new life up, yet. He is told he needs to time to adapt and to become more here. He has to live and prosper in this house and grow roots. Plus, he needs to figure out how he going to relate to this guy who is so compelling and exciting to be near.

It has too long without a new chapter. I am afraid this work is concluded. There was so much more to say, but ..... I will still think fondly of what has been written.

Ben is real He rescued Kieran and fiercely fought off his attackers and killed one man.