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Yes, Will, I think, would keep a secret from Andrew. It is the stock and trade of the intel business. He might consider the secret not important overall or maybe it would hurt Andrew to know the secret or maybe would lower Andrew's respect for him--like he had to kill someone. I knew a couple who operated in the policy world who had very different views , but they loved each other. They decided when they got home from work that they would not talk about policy or politics. They had two kids who kept them occupied

Andrew and Will have secrets that go with their job. Andrew has official CSIS secrets, Will is a politician, and the trade is inherently sneaky. Politicians normally do not like have what they really do exposed to sunlight. Will just lied to the media on a Sunday talk show for the PM.

Thank you for explaining your internal reasoning about your writing. You are very productive, and you have let us know...."nothing makes me feel happier than just pouring writing onto a page." It shows. I and others greatly benefit from your creativity and drive.

I do really appreciate that you are keeping the momentum up by publishing a chapter a day and not once a week You are creating some compelling, fascinating scenes and lots to worry about. I find myself looking to read your next chapters of Carter's Orders. I like the key people. BTW, I first found you by seeing and reading Falcon Banner on Crvboy links page. Each chapter is listed and available right away without delay. I did not know how long it took you to publish your stories. I see you reported that you published Falcon Banner in 2005. I think I first read it -7-8 years ago. Good works can have a long life.

What a stunning surprise! You did not wrap up the story, but extended it with new scary challenges Leon through his flash drive gave out two huge problems to resolve. The Carrillo brothers still needed to be taken down in Miami. Leon identified the accountant who needed to be turned. Leon also told Darius how to get and where to find his $20 million stash for his use now. Riley told them they needed to bring down the Carrillos to complete their deal to be freed of legal problem. They would need to go to Miami as a start. If the bring this mob down, then they will be free and can keep the $20 million. Josh negotiate a $ 4million share to help Darious and Joey. This gets even scarier. The Miami mob guys will be alerted after what has happened with the Cleveland mob. Josh is still on drugs and is going to be a weak link. Finally, can Riley be trusted to keep his word about saving them legally and letting them keep Leon's stash? Higher ups in the FBI could interfere.

Very touching, very romantic--Kenny and Steve are finding more common ground and slowly, ever so slowly finding they instinctively are in sync. There are no rough spots or haters spoke out. They held hands, a cheer erupted from the crowd and without thinking eventually they began to dance. They lived in their own world of happy moments Are they going to kiss in the dark not trying to make a public statement? I bet they will and they will want to kiss more. Lids will be pleased. They may all return home on a high note How long before the mothers ask their kids what is going on? The mothers could have their eyes opened about at least part of the secret business dealings and will want to know much more.

If Walter finds out Josh broke his Code Black protocol, then Walter could order Josh killed at the right time. Josh may be the key to unlocking Cerberus so he could have a short-term pass until his usefulness is no longer needed. Note what happened when Bourne woke up and went rogue. He was targeted for assassination by another deep cover killer.

Andrew senses this fake story about Will has all the hallmarks of a serious, high quality compromise attack. It is going to be appear to be true and shocking. Could some foreign enemy --perhaps China or Russia or???--maybe through a cutout be assisting Father's forces to create a more sophisticate attack than on its own to destabilize Canada's government?

So , Andrew is not going to tell Will what was in the file. He thought the material was fabricated to look real and Will needed to look shocked and indignant at the charges when he heard publicly of them. Andrew thought if Will knew right now what the false claims were he would go off charging claiming foul and only add to the fire. Meanwhile, Andrew is going to aggressively look at the false , compromising charges like he has seen in his intelligence work. He is going to protect Will with the real facts. Who is Andrew going to get to help him and keep the investigation secret? Unknown to Andrew, the PM or his nasty aide might leak the bad news for Will in the near future on the PM's timetable not Andrew's

Hooray! I am very happy. Thank you

I hope the next chapter is going to be published soon. I want to what Eli is learning and wanting

Is Andrew going to be in the position to uncover the plot by Father and his minions to reek havoc on the government and also destroy Will in the process? This disruption could prevent serious action from being taken on his compound and his overall operations. Andrew does need to find the mole or his plans will be short circuited again.

The ground work is set. Both sets of parents are meeting and exchanging pleasantries about their sons. It seems the mothers might be leaning more about their sons than expected. The chance meeting of the male adults rekindled old memories. The current teacher and now Baptist pastor were very close friends in high school and not so now. Had they been sexual partners in the past? Clovis remarked to the two...“Well,” he said, his voice a quiet, conspiratorial whisper. “I remember nothing, I saw nothing, and I will speak of nothing.” Jason’s face went white. Blake’s went bright red.

OMG--the mothers will meet at the Spa, Words will be exchanged and they will learn something very new and surprising about Steve and Lydia.

Well--Things might b get personal and dirty. Will is the target of a supposed scandal that could bring him down and he is to leave for Wahington, DC to negotiate a very important North American trade treaty with the US and Mexico The PM has an assistant who wants him to authorize the releasde of a terrible matter and ties Will to murder. The PM wonders who the friends of his assistant are. I can bet they are connected to Father. The PM is told he could let Will hang and then save his position in government. The PM appears to be considering the offer. Separately, CSIS has learned of the charge{s}against Will. In an indirect way, Andrew is given the report which he can deny receiving officially. Andrew is shocked at the accusations and is at a loss what to do. It cannot be true and could be a ploy to topple the government. He is thinking about asking Will --even though Andrew should not know about the charges. Well, the PM could decide to release the scandal charges and the matter will take a life of its own--no matter what Andrew does. Please Andrew give Will time to prepare a defense.

This is confusing. I ran into the repetition not expecting it. It is too much of a jumble for me. I will wait for the next chapter.

Thank you for this next chapter. Josh is becoming more aware of his other side and he wants answers. He brought in his new brothers and they supported and protected him It's strange his other side wanted him to better know the prat at the holiday social gathering Josh thought..."If I ever had the chance to meet the architects of my situation, I was going to give them a piece of my mind. They’d built me for something I didn’t understand, and all it had done so far was leave me confused, exhausted, and adrift in someone else’s life." Greg notified him he will meet him later in an official capacity. He thinks Josh can be key to solving a major problem. Josh did not react or suggest he knew what Greg was talking about. Josh thinks he will be guardedly forthcoming. He still feels he cannot trust the FBI. He may say more later-but he is worried the time is short. Why does he feel worried about time and what might happen later? You have given us lots to consider.

Love it--these two boys and Lids are 12th Night in modern form. The boys are hiding themselves and are set to want each other and the sister can see through their disguises. I am impressed she knows Kenny is gay right away and knows her brother is gay, too. She can see the connection and why Steve says Kenny is his friend he trusts. She tells Kenny to not hurt him and warns him she has a switchblade--lol. Steve like a character in 12th Night does not see through Kenny's disguise --for now So many things can go wrong, Secrets are going to be revealed if they are not careful and things might get awkward. But, the boys need some safe premises for their essay that will not expose things they want hidden. Kenny can begin by reminding others he is not Amish. Steve can say he is being successfully tutored.

A wonderful, love and memory filled night for Andrew and Will. The mustang that brought them together was found and now is their car to restore. Somehow this feels like the calm before the storm. They both deserve a break and time for each other,

Luke was close to kissing Lyn and was stopped by Brad appearing. Does Luke sense Lyn is gay and should be called Daddy? Brad was upset this time by Luke getting very close and acting intimate with Lyn. Brad demanded Lyn give him 3 uninterrupted one on one time tomorrow, Lyn agreed not knowing what Brad had in mind. I bet he just wants to assert his primacy and not make any sexually suggestive moves Alexander advised Lyn..."Tomorrow, don’t fall for it, Lyn.” Alexander leaned forward, bending awkwardly to kiss Lyn’s forehead. “He’ll try to get you on his side, as usual, and you’re too nice and still too in love with him--” Alexander will be there to pick up the pieces. He is not pushing Lyn, but I think he needs to be a healer after Lyn and Brad meet. Maybe, sex can be the best therapy Lyn will need.

Yeah, Krispy Kreme lights a special outside light to let all know the donuts are fresh. A rush can easily begin...

The only clear path I see is that Renn will dominate Zdain and teach him about intense gay sex. Zdain should be repulsed by what Renn is doing to him before Renn my try to kill him We will need more info to understand the plan of the Redeemers. Are they going to kill or enslave their new captives? Will they, help them survive reasoning that the enemy of my enemy is my friend? We will see. I am looking forward to reading how you carry out your vision now.

This was so comforting and still unusual. Imagine both dads being understanding and giving permission for their sons to explore their feelings with a good boy. The dads know their sons and want them to be happy. For now, the sons are not being completely candid with their mothers. So, Steve and Kenny should feel free to better connect with each other. Their dance date might give them the freedom to become more intimate. Steve's sister could easily encourage their relationship.

Jean was set up. Is he eventually going to realize this? Father is ruthless and his men are killers, it seems. Father wants Will to be in play as a target. Does he see the PM resigning for Will given his problems? Will the note alternatively make the PM see Will as a threat and plot against him and cause a messy scandal that would lead to the PM losing his office? Does Father have a way to spy on Will for his purposes? It is still not resolved how Father and his compound leader knew about the CSIS spy in the compound. There is a poisonous leak somewhere connected to Andrew's operations. Could this leak be able to spy on Will, too? Maybe their house is bugged?

Mrs Hickey does not know her son. I expect she will be shocked and totally surprised when she finds out about the real Steve who could not be honest with her.