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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 26

    The scared and lipless Kal'ditha has shaken up the Monteilons. He demands their sons and more. I am uncertain that these parents can find their children and give then to this bastard. This situation is messy with conflicting bosses and cannot end well.
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    They have made their case to the inspector and told him about the involvement of a higher up who is likely an assistant police commissioner. The two guys trying to harass Shane in the hospital were vice cops who might be in the take, They decide to find an arrest Jarvis today and take the two rent boys into hiding tomorrow. So far they cannot find Jarvis. Has he gone into hiding? I hope he can be found soon.
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    Enrico entered the fray and asserted his power by destroying the helicopter. The Wolf and his men have no way to escape, It is a standoff. The Wolf needs Enrico's help to leave. Now what will Enrico demand from the Wolf in order to allow the Wolf to leave? Maybe the Wolf can lie and pretend Enrico has won and ask for a plane to leave. Enrico will want the fighters and threats to leave. The destruction is programmed to happen, is it not? The Wolf might think he can leave and the financial system will collapse is going to occur. He may assume Enrico does not know about this built in disaster. But, maybe Enrico does know and can stop it?
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 20

    On bastard down--more still out there The general has died and it was assumed to be a natural death. The Order's plan to use the General 's guilty actions -not knowing he had died yet--to bring down the government failed when Will did not take the bait Will feels guilt from his complicity in killing the General, What about the military plans ordered by the now dead General ? Will the military forces leave the national government headquarters now? Silas still has pawns and levers to control. Sarah took Ed or Ned away. Now, Sarah is flying Petter and Matt are being northwards and away from Ottawa. They are being lied to making them think she is on their side and this process is legal. Are these three detainees going to be brought together without yet being aware this is a scam? They need to wake up and flee.
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 19

    No, Will is going to figuratively stab the General in his chest when he gets the proof that the alleged crime is fictitious. He could demand his removal by asking Parliament. Where will Peter and Matt be held? Might they be placed or hidden in a secure facility or safe house that also houses Ed Rawlins? Just hoping..... Andrew needs to be proactive and not just deal with his removal of Matt and Peter. I hope he is now ready to send a small team to capture Pierre Thorne.
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    I would love to see Steve , a potential agent of chaos, or Brian , the pastry chef, ignored by their guards who are focused on the intrusion by Alex, then let loose on the server farm and shiny buttons.
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    You said provocatively...." someone FAR more terrifying that Alex and Kenny is already INSIDE that dam, right next to the biggest financial system in the world... Wolf is going to have a bad day." I love the sound of the scary solution you have identified. Let me guess, please.....Is it a person or persons that were sent to this dam when the attack on the earlier dam was identified and threats were made? Or, might the server farm have its own AI defense system that will spring forth when it senses danger which the attack on the drone triggered? I am really looking forward to this terrifying mater and Wolf's bad day in your next chapter. Great cliffhanger!
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    Wow--Alex and Kenny found out what was really going on. It is mind blowing disastrous. The dam attack was a cover. The dam is powering a massive server farm that is running a critical part of the world's financial system. Wolf is going to activate an algorithm that will crash the server farm and collapse the system. The enemy will know this timing so its side can make hundreds of billions from the crash. Alex and Kenny know what is intended and they are stuck outside the dam unable to prevent the impending crash. The smart drone is disabled fighting off a virus. Wolf's men inside know they are around in a general sense but, not their specific location. Now, can the drone repair itself and wreak havoc on Wolf's plans? If not, does Alex have to go back inside when he can and find a way to manually destroy the effort to collapse the system? This is a very dangerous situation.
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 19

    Cannot wait to see Will take charge and fight. He will win the public over and save his friends and family.
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 19

    Silas has acted , but is not done spreading corruption and wronged charges. His agent , the General, has seen that Peter and Matt were arrested at the PM's home and the charges are released to the media. The leak on West has not been made public yet, The boys are safe but must be terrified. The RCMP guards are protecting them and resisted the offending military people taking the boys away. The General's men failed to secure the boys as hostages. West and Andrew are running to the PM's residence and are furious. They need to act wisely and not be bated into overreacting. Andrew had to realize Silas would respond to his visit. I hope they know the boys need to be safeguarded in a better protective location. Andrew will have his people reviewing the charges. I hope the Order has made mistakes in creating the charges. Lisa is going to insure Will acts responsibly. So far, his instincts are good when confronted with ill-timed corruption assertions concerning his friends. But, the media fury over the next 24 hours will be punishing. Will is going to show his mettle and leadership instincts in a crisis, especially when his family and friends are involved.
  11. Lyn was in heaven and so was Alexander. The exchanged blow jobs and cummed in each other's mouth. Lyn could not suck off Alexander enough. He wanted him badly and enjoyed the stress and pain in his mouth. Lyn was fucked and wanted to be fucked again. His sex drive for Alexander was unbridled. Lyn was on new ground. Alexander was surprised and heartened. Brad reached out to them. Lyn did wanted to talk to him. He texted Brad and said they would meet at dinner. Can they keep the new dimensions of their relationship hidden from Brad?
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 23

    I still have been blown away by seeing Michael Phelps looking so hot and compete in brief swimsuits in 4 Olympics. What an athletic body that photographed so well! He won a total of 28 medals setting records.
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    Some worries from the demands of Silas- "You will deliver the complete, sealed Edward Rawlins file—the proof of your husband's deception—to my offices in New York. William Carter will then publicly announce his resignation, citing a complete, professional breakdown under the stress of the national crisis. You sacrifice your career and your husband's political life, and in exchange, the terror stops." Why do they need the Ed Rawlins file? Do they not have official proof he is Will's son? Silas wants Will to claim he has had a mental breakdown. Andrew should note that someone in the medical field has leaked Will's history. He could be led to the leaker in the PM's office.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    The lost Shane was found. He was absent getting an MRI. The guard stepped away when he left. The two supposed police officers visited Shane again, but he had nothing to say to him. Later, Helen looked at the hospital tapes and got hard copies. Might her boss know the cops trying to get info from Shane? Shane said he had some famous customers he had seen on TV. Two clients were cops, too. I think the high powered customers are items to follow up on. I hope Rick can find a safe place to protect the two street hustlers.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    With more help from his father, Alex was ready to lead the assault on Wolf and this new huge dam. The scale of this project is mind numbing immense and other worldly. The brutal cold and winds are daunting and dangerous. Alex and Kenny are ready and motivated. What do they do first? They can count on surprise since they do not expect to be followed. Alex's father told them about the threat from international financiers who will profit from the disruption of the total system. The reason for this attack is now known. The Brisay dam attack was a diversion and this new attack is still intended to be hidden. They must be trying to destroy the electronic and mechanical controls at key points so the result is a catastrophic failure not recoverable for a very long time Can Alex and Kenny stop/kill enough people to ruin the plans of the Wolf. He must be on a timeline with an extraction planned. Kenny could destroy any escape plane/helicopter. Might El Coyote inform the CSIS of this new attack so it could also send resources to fight the Wolf?
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    What a beautiful, Hollywood worthy chase scenes. Andrew thought ahead and played chess to defeat and humiliate Silas. The car chases were epic. Andrew laid his cards on the table. Silas gave away his demands and made strong threats. His family and the kids are targets for sure. He needs to up the strength and extra vet the protective details. He knows he cannot hold back on the Order's people. Given the monumental drone mess, is it time to replace the General and his leadership team? Maybe. new command individuals need to be brought in. Has Will the authority with Parliament to make changes? The media might be clamoring for changes and accountability in the military. Silas is going to really go after the Carters. He so far has not realized he has at least one leak since the drone factory was blown up. His ultimate power play to force a military take over is no longer a valid option. Things might get messy. The dirt on West has not hit the media yet. Is Will going to ask why his military guard detail was replaced and why the kids are not home? What is Andrew going to tell him?
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 23

    I am wondering when social media and internet erotica will enter this tale. Teenagers are connected to their phones/computers and gossip spreads quickly. I expect the school provided Crome books have filters so teenagers might use their cell phones to pass on unauthorized comments and pics. They could search for sex ed material on their phones or home computers. Pics and vids can be exchanged and some are hurtful or testing limits. There is a lot of comments in the regular media about teenagers being too addicted to online activity. Some schools have banned the use of cell phones in class to stop distractions.
  19. Tim went through a shocking passage after graduating from high school. Life, friends and relatives threw Tim curve balls. You will find him keeping going. He did not lose his faith in himself or become embittered and suspicious. There are matters that encourage him. He knew he had a grandmother who cared for him and accepted he was gay. He moved away to attend college and begin a new chapter in his life.
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  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    Tim experienced so many ups and downs with people he knows surprising and disappointing him. He knows he is good looking hot and very sexy. Forced to move earlier to stay with his grandmother he was at first concerned she would not like him because he was gay . He was wrong and she fully supported him. In the first of two males who surprised him with romantic or sexual advances, Tim needed to remain centered and hope for the best. There are good things happening in his life that will give him security. I join with others liking Tim and the arc of the story and would gladly read more of Tim's story.
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    Alex was masterful and focused. The two enemy soldiers were taken out with skill. He opened the spillway and avoided a serious disaster downstream. You could feel his pain and unwavering determination. Injured by shrapnel he still labored unrelatedly and climbed up and out of the wrecked dam. He connected with Kenny in the otter and they were able to successfully clear the dam. Kenny knows the direction the Wolf's helicopter took., Alex sees a radio tower and says he has an idea. What is his plan? Will he contact the Wolf or his father?
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    Dmytro is guard and under medical care by CSIS. He will recover and be hidden. Andrew viewed him and learned of the existence of the Father's son. He has a team investigating him. The local authorities are not helpful. Andrew realized Jane was dead and probably killed by the Father's men. No one has yet picked up on her last message about the local communications data. Maybe the CSIS can listen in on Thorne, the son. The time Andrew spent with Jacob on the ice was beautiful. The were so happy and in sync. Both were restored practicing in the cold on the ice outside the official residence. Andrew is going to have a tough and possibly brutal conversation with Will. How much is he going to tell Will? He could cove the destruction of the drone factory and plot to use drones. Sarah's betrayal, the loss of Ed Rawlins, the fact that the father has a son, too, the freeing on Dmytro and the General's collusion with Silas. Andrew needs to say there could be more moles. So far one key mole close to Andrew has not been identified: · McLeod, S.E., BG Dr: Status: PCO Chief Medical Officer/Task Force Authorization.
  23. Jack broke out of his box and gave his first blow job and savored the tasty cum. He loved Vince's cum and wants more. He is addicted to it Theo could only hear them and was upset. Maybe, they are training to have sex with him, too.
  24. Noah's mind was flooded with facts and images. He was out for an hour. Eventually he reached home and was given a debrief by his grandma with others adding more. The family had hidden magic with powers distributed through out, Some have special abilities. Not everyone is the same. It is not known yet what Noah's abilities are. Noah learned that Shiloh is not part of triplets. There are four brothers, and one is missing, Tristan is pushing Noah to grow up fast and lose his innocence This major reveal is going to take time and support to help Noah to fully adjust.
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    Did not the leaks start before Rick arrived with his BF Adam?
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