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Mix a hot gay boy with an online sex activity who wants to be really known as a musician who begins to have passionate sex with a guy who has such low self-esteem that he can only become intimate with this well-regarded sexy stud when he wears a bunny costume hiding his face and some body parts. Read on to learn about their sexual exploits, their misunderstandings, what roadblocks develop and enough surprises to win your attention. Laura Fox, as usual, deserves high marks for compelling story.
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Three years and they are still together and happily in love. Jamie and Hearst are a great couple. Jamie is still a drummer with Melinda's group. He told Rusty Parker about his boyfriend who asked him not to lie. What a pleasant ending. Thank you, Anytime you want to continue this story, I will gladly read it.
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Stunning--But Convincing and Affirming ! It came down to a battle of champion--Valerius chose his blood , Renato Rafael did not choose his son Gabe and instead chose Big Paws, Ray Suddenly Ray began to grow in bulk and power. He became clearly the dominant being. Renato would lose to him. Valerius tried to withdraw but Ray said No! Valerius conceded and his vampires left the field Ray's growth extended to the shifters and witches. They all became energized and strong Ray sought out his mate , Gab, and they united Great Chapter
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Oh My--Richard is a cunt, certifiable. Leaving Jimmy with no way to get back in the snow. At least Jimmy took it in stride and accepted Richard's nasty, self-centered behavior Duncan offered to put him up and take him back to Toronto and he accepted. Now we must find out why Duncan was dying and what Richard does when jimmy returns Jimmy wants Duncan. Will Duncan give in since he has little to lose? Will Jimmy stay in contact with Duncan until he dies?
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Great cliffhanger--Setting up a powerful next chapter-- So, the police were ready by Leon's house. Let us hope they give Darius enough time to explain himself. This can go sideways if the police overreact. I think Darius can figure out the flash drive's importance if he sees it. The flash drive can give them bargaining power. The flash drive was hidden in plain sight and all the previous searchers missed it. Joey's playful habits worked this time. Darius can turn state's evidence and can explain the flash drive that can take down two mobs. BTW, this time Darius has not killed anyone in either town. The Carilllo mobsters' active shootings might also make them the bad guys. They went after Zeke and Darius and Joey.
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So, is the fix in and assumptions made that Hugo will win with enough repeat practice and that not one of the fifty with rifles will not fire in advance to wound? I am expected to be fascinated to see how this plays out. Will Murphy's Law not prevail? If anything can go wrong, it will. I wonder what precautions Hugo will add or learn from his groundhog experiences to save the day?
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Dottie with 50 gun carrying agent. One holding a gun over Stoker's head. How can Hugo get Stoker away safely? Hugo has an unsolvable puzzle. Even repeated attempt will burn out his sole and he will still lose.
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Doctor Krisa--I am impressed by your educational achievement
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When you return after a well earned rest, I hope will find out that the supposed trap Dottie has sprung on Hugo by seeing Alec hanging from his noose will fail. Hugo and the Bride will have travelled multiple times and can arrive before Alec tried to put his neck in the noose and flee. We may also find out what Dottie and Hugo have done to Dottie and her agents so they cannot stop Hugo.
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Please do relax and find peace. You have been exceptionally productive and busy. We all will understand your need for a break,
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So as you say...."But it's a story about what Trauma does to a person. And those moments, however short, that give us connection." This is a tough read. Jimmy has lived through so many problems and problematic guys. Richard in Toronto was a horrible abuser and predator who lasted too long. He captured Jimmy and Marty found Jimmy and saved him. But, Ben saved him from being broken in Ottawa. Their relationship could not be normal. They kissed passionately, but wonderful Ben stayed a virgin and Jimmy did not give him up. This relationship is worth more development, please.
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Chapter 1: A very happy, Weird Birthday
akascrubber commented on Kyler Stone's story chapter in Chapter 1: A very happy, Weird Birthday
Tate is surprised finds out he is potentially going to be a powerful wizard and he also finds out he has a strong, handsome muscled body. The catch is he has to find a gay bottom and have sex with him before he turns 19 or he will lose all his power and good looks. Tate and his aunt are now on the lookout for a gay partner for Tate -
So, Stoker contemplated his death and was on a mission. He just knew Hugo would come for him they were united by love. I believe he knew he was being observed in some way, He arranged his shoelaces into a hanging device to look like he was committing suicide. Stoker wanted to provoke his guards and draw them out. Seeming to hang himself was his way to assume control. He knew he would not be allowed to die. Has he learned anything from Hugo's multiple past incursions in 1836? Of course, I could be making the wrong assumptions. We will find out soon. In a new time, The Bride, Kate, and Hugo were beginning a training session. She gave him a detailed description of what was going to happen next. Hugo was astounded at her knowledge of movements and forecasting ability. She would train him to understand how to find and defeat Dottie and her agents and then save Stoker. They would undertake multiple trips and piece together a complicated, layered plan "So that's how we're going to get Stoker back," she said, her voice a low, fierce promise. "We're going to use this." She held up her watch, its face a swirling vortex of light. "We're going to run the same loop, over and over, until we find the one perfect moment where Dottie is vulnerable. We're going to learn her every move, her every weakness, her every blind spot. We're going to learn the names of her agents, the location of her trap, the exact moment we need to strike."
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Clayton's underwear and socks will no longer be a subject for Lex to want for his own pleasure. I can see Lex wanting Superman's cum rag,. briefs, jocks and socks. How will Lex get what he wants from Superman? I guess we might see the answer in a new story.
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Oh No! You said Josh is showing up with Vinnie and his mobsters People are going to die. Might the local mob get upset with Vinnie seeming to move in and seek to kill him?
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OMG--I can see them having lots of groundhog sex and getting more in sync and excited. They will slowly find love and feel it be reinforced with consummate physical skills. Hugo will keep trying to learn what pleases Alec and bring him towards him in real ways. Just like Bill Murray learned to be an excellent piano player by practicing, Hugo is going to learn how to give Alec the most powerful, fulfilling blow jobs he wants and be the most exciting bottom Alec has met.
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Ok--spill the beans about the underpants in the bar story. You mentioned it but left us hanging. Jimmy, the alcoholic, is so clueless. His slowly developing relationship with a just younger Ben needs more development, please. I would love to know about them when they clicked romantically and really sexually.
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Hugo left the shotgun to add one more item to educate Alec that they were connected. It is a physical piece of evidence Hugo can cite next time they meet He is learning how to play the groundhog game to win back Alec.
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I feel impending doom might be in sight. Joey gave away enough clues for others to find them. The only hope is that Josh leaves Warren to find them and blows off Vinnie and his men so they do not know where he is going. Darius found out the action is still happening in town, but not at Leon's location. Is the house not really being watched from the outside so Darius can search it for Leon's stash? Or, is it a trap to catch him when he get gets inside. A simple WiFi type security system could alert mob guys that the house is being searched. They need to act fast before they are found at Zeke's location.
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Hugo went back to find Alec working as a gamekeeper. Their meet was awkward. Alec was suspicious of Hugo and even more so when he said his name. They continued talking. They both began to connect. But, things changed when they both took their clothes off. Alec fucked Hugo twice. Sadly, Hugo had to leave before he could explain his time travel story. Ok--this was a first groundhog-type meeting, Hugo is going to make many more trips back until Alec realizes what is happening
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But, you finished it. Completing the story mattered for you and your readers. I liked it. Thanks
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Sorry--This will take a lot to repair the story and re-energize the characters. You must have better current story lines that will excite your interests But, let us see what others say.
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As long as Flash is not like the controversial actor Ezra Miller who played him in a 2023 movie. Miller had a bad reputation from supposedly choking and abusing a woman
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I loved this description of Will....." Will was like that though, he was music, wild and unexpected and intense." They are going to make beautiful music together one day as Jimmy prophesied.
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As a runner, Flash might love the reward of having his tired feet and legs massaged, kissed and licked. I bet his feet would have a powerful, beguiling fragrance when he rested after a long, fast run.
