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Renzak is a vile creature who poisons all around him. His intentions are always evil. He sized up he corrupt Monteilons are intends to use them to thwart the Republican factions. In the end he knows he will end anyone no longer of use to him like his mentor was. His young assistant is worried and his parents do not know they have made a deal with the the devil. Renzak has use for them for now,
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I would like a crocodile to find and eat Brother Mathias as soon as possible,
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My Mark on Your Heart
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in My Mark on Your Heart
Damn--Thay are made for eah other. Their sex is fabulous. Their inhibitions and Ryder's , i think, misconceptions need to be proved wrong. How can the script be flipped?- 34 comments
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Oh, The joys of being a responsible parent.Marc and Adam had 14 kids. Each pair had a adult symbolizing ceremony and each set upon the career that fit them. We saw them all through the process culminating in reaching their 16th birthday. There seemed to be no problems within the children and family as Marc and Adam help growth and make a powerful, well defended enterprise. But, surprise, realizing all the kids have left the nest, Marc hinted to Adam that it would be wonderful to begin having new children in two years.
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[Memory, Freshman Year, October] – The Extra
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Freshman Year, October] – The Extra
Brad is too oblivious about guys. He sees friends easily. Lyn does not like Alexander from the start but it seems the three stay together through college. Brad has to be the reason . The two like Brad and tolerate the other. The two must not have had an honest conversaton--yet. What kept them from speaking about their differences in college? Years later will they open up to each other and become real friends or enemies?- 20 comments
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The Passport and Cartier Watch
akascrubber commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in The Passport and Cartier Watch
So Taylor had the expensive watch and passport that belonged to Travis on the east coast. The stalker took it and must have given it to her. Zach confirmed she is really mad at Travis. She must be backing the Serbian gang going after Travis. Will has to tell Jake and Brad. Can they track her her cell phone?She has not called Zach or her mother yet. Maybe, the gang is holding it for her so she can be tracked, The bad guys are going to move Taylor and Travis in a day. The driver has been identified. Things could get messy in the new move. Taylor wants to help Travis and her find a way to escape if possible. He needs to continue to be suspicious of Taylor. Is she trying to get him injured or killed or just tormented?. The real reason for the kidnapping or end game is unclear so far. No blackmail demand has been made. Things do not add up like they should by now.- 27 comments
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This is a very dangerous and volatile situation. Corin and Etienne are stuck in a room surrounded by hurtful people and are at the end of the they can wait before fleeing and escaping by boat. Will they get word in time by Thomas before they must leave? Has this trip been in vain?
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Oh, I think Arthur is on the scam and feeding him false hopes of a career. He has to know what disaster is likely coming. Arthur is very savy and has to know the methods and insanity the reality show is going to push and the design for Jamie--as the bad guy. This could be the last potential upbeat meeting with Jamie for Arthur. Will Athur make a real pass before the meal ends? Arthur knows Jamie will be intimidated by the high class restaurant surroundings to not make a scene. At least, Arthur should cause Jamie just a bit to question a bit what is going on.
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Richter gets a dressing down from his chief med officer to jumping in and saving the day showing others they are not needed, Then he receives a notice of the reactor in distress and call from PFC Luther. Maybe he needs to solve the reactor problem and meet Luther. Is this the situation that brings them together?
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Jamie had reasons to be unsettled. He misread Cottontail thinking he was beginnning to leave him. Cottontail was focused on getting Jamie to not on on the LiveFeed Trip for three months and missed the clues he was giving Jamie by his attitude. Jamie tried unsuccessfully on focusing on the trip as a way to improve his career as as drummer. Then Arthur was sending him odd homoerotic signals in a posh place where it would be impossible for him to make a scene. I assume Jamie can work his way out of a request to come home with Arthur, but will be shocked at the implication. Three months--That is a long time if it in fact lasts that long. At some point, a clasic reality show incident will have Jamie on camera facing his worst fears and being shocked to his core. I expect Jamie will be lulled in to complacency before the Live Feed coup de grace that is intended to ruin his career and the image he has built. Let us hope Cottontail finds out what his family secret is and finds a way to warn Jamie when he calls him from the road
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Act II - Empty Chairs At Empty Tables
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - Empty Chairs At Empty Tables
Ray survived. Mother wanted to take him and study him--for her own purposes Renato objected and Mother was forced to leave.. Now what? How will they get Gabriel back? -
Lots of introspection and judegements. Danae is the one who gets about and asks questions, You think she is open to have sex with the right guy. Darren watches her and is jealous when she gets close to a guy, Zdain is full of guilt and thinks he let their past home become open to attack letting many lives be lost. He is very attracted to Josel but cannot tell hm. He is sexually charged and even thought Renn was interested in him. No one realizes Renn is the viper that wants to destroy them.
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Secrets Unveiled, Bonds Forged.
akascrubber commented on E K Stokes's story chapter in Secrets Unveiled, Bonds Forged.
I am concerned that Eitenne;s confession tp Corin might cause trouble. Wil Corin keep his confidence? Could someone have overheard him? -
I think looking at all of Will's sexual partners, the two who will have a long term impact of Will are going to be Travis - for romance--and Peter Thiel --for helping Will build a potentially incredibly successful $billionaire portfolio with Meta and Tesla
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Etenne is building new home meant to endure. However, the friar is suspicious, Why?
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BTW--I read this chapter during or after the server glitch Here is part that wrang off key-Lyn seems to have told Brad he was gay at their last meeting in college. But Brad seems to have forgotten or missed what Brad was saying. Were they too drunk to understand each other? Now they are meeting again with a mistaken understanding that could cause trouble. “You sure do exercise,” Brad said, feeling his biceps through the jacket of his suit. “Wait till the girls see these guns. I’m not supposed to tell you this, but Bella has already told her unmarried girlfriends that I have a couple of buddies coming that are total future husband material.” “Oh, really?” Lyn showed a little bit of teeth. “And how do you know that?” Did Brad really not remember their last conversation before becoming strangers for eight freaking years? Or was he just choosing not to?"
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A fary tale like happily ever after love story. Fate seems to have brought two lost souls together.
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They are made for each other. They relate erotically and willingly. Nothing they do seems wrong. Ryder is keeping his wolf in check. Danny has never felt so good. Ryder's cock inside him feels just pefect. How can Ryder give him up? I cannot wait to learn how they experience making love and the impact this has on them.
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Thanks, Mark. Now we can see how the kidnapping took place. As Travis reaized, it was crude and not well thought out. Jack had to be involved. He made the look up call from the phone. Travis is rightfuly suspicious of Taylor who was in the llimo handcupped and then place in a cell next to him.; I can see Taylor behind it all. She wants to be present to spy on him and alert the Serbs if he tries to escape. Maybe she is paying Jack who want Travis off the show, Travis was told they wanted money from him and did not seem in a hurry to make financial demands. If Taylor is connected, Travis can likely learn from the demands that they would craft a request that sounded like it was made by Taylor. She wants his money and lots of it. Has she run through what he gave her" So far Brad and Jake are at loose ends. Will had to suggest checking on call from the plane. Given how lame the kidnappers seem to be, maybe they can be found and tracked when they demand Travis given them lots of money and he tells them then he has to go to his bank. BTW, what happened to the alert warning Travis gave from his phone? I hope Travis is found soon. Will is a nervous wreck.
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Chapter 1 Magician (2/2)
akascrubber commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 1 Magician (2/2)
Richter had his first sex with the Altai wapiti , his room mate. They both agreed to play. It was over fast. His room mate did not know Richter was a virgin. Richter reported ble had a reversible vasectomy which will stay blocked till he is 22. Richter is 17 now. Will he want to have more sex? -
Shifting Tides and Secret Missions.
akascrubber commented on E K Stokes's story chapter in Shifting Tides and Secret Missions.
What a dramatic change of events ! Eitenne is silently sent way from his friends on a mission for the Cardinal.He is not going to see them again.No sex is involved as he expected at first.. Eitenne will travel with gypsies through France to England. He is to hand a letter to Prince Charles who is going to attend a fair. Eitenne is in the dark about the purpose of the letter. I expect Eitenne is in danger along the route and even more so when he hands the letter to Prince Charles. What will Etienne be required to do next? Must he take a reply back or accompany the Prince on any subsequent journey? -
The Dark Side of Jamie Vayne
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Dark Side of Jamie Vayne
Jamie thinks he has revealed all and should not have any problems from Live Feed. However, Jamie thinks his family history is well hidden. Jamie wants it to stay hidden.He is not worried about the LiveFeed trip. But, Wen knows something bad about Jamie's family will be revealed on the trip and will severly hurt Jamie's reputation. Wen tries to discourage Hearst from seeing Jamie. Hearst will not commit. Wen is almost ready to tell his brother what Jamie's last name is. With this name, Hearst can research Jamie. Wen think what Hearst finds out about Jamie will disgust him. Too mny mysteries... If Wen is right, then Jamie is going to be surprised and shocked and his reputation will be destroyed on film. But, what is so terrible and so far hidden about Jamie's family? Why would they also be shocked by his lifestyle? Are Jamie's father and mother leading social or media figures or conservative figures or politicians or religious leaders? -
Amelie will have just one child, a child foretold by an ancient woman in her village. The child will go on to have a wide and powerful impact. Amelie and Eitenne, her husband, have a great reason to recover and build a new life after the major fire.
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As for the airport kidnapping, Jack could have gotten the flight info in advance from Travis by telling him he had to arrange his own pickup.. Travis would have used a car service and would not know who the driver would be. In any event, Jack could have a team over power the car service diver while he was waiting at the airport and put him in the trunk.So when Travis arrived either sober or dugged by Jack he would easily go into the hired car and be taken away. Jack could be seen leaving by a second hired car so he woul not be tied to the kidnapping. But, what does Jack want to happen to Travis?
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Act II - No Time To Die
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - No Time To Die
The witches took ther king and fed on his power until he died, Then the witches fed on new shifter children. They hid their motives. Now they want Ray to feed on him. What a massive betrayal ! The witches are coming and Ray needs to be hidden from him.Gabriel wll do his best to protect a barely alive Ray. Two more groups will be present, too. Two new shifter families have arrived and vampires will soon be present and complicate the mess now. Will a huge fight happen?
