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Cooper will be tested, I hope he is resilient and finds some compatible friends.
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I love this sarcastic comment by Zorro--“Every day’s the same—jogging, getting hit, classes, and Aramis’s constant sarcasm,” I said with a shrug. “Feels just like home.” He is undergoing very rigorous field training carrying doubts and worry and uncertanty. He hopes he measures up.
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You conveyed that Comicality was a very special person of depth with great sensitivity and care with a welcoming heart. His words will continue as a beacon for others who need understanding .
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I am sure Logan wll find a way and a safe, private place to intimately thank Ranger Finlay. They both sound receptive.
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It Didn’t Sound Corny At All
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in It Didn’t Sound Corny At All
Too much overthinking and worry, Hearst He cannot see Jamie rally likes him and accept Jamie is so grateful to him . No one else is touching Jamre like him. Jamie wants them to have sex oiutdoors. Cottontail holds back until Jamie entreats him to ask him forcefully. So Hearst finally says...“Make love to me like you mean it, Jamie.” So what can go wrong and shake things up? Hearst could lose his mask and be identified. Maybe, Wen could be following them and take pics of them making love.- 12 comments
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Otello, the disabled son of the emperor has found out that he father is being turned into a sad, unreactive man by the medicine is is being given under the direction of Marshal General Vondau. Otello feels lost without anyone to help him and his father. Reading books he decides he likes th author, A Sandkan, and writes to him for help. Troubador Karl finds the letter near Sandkan's burnedout house and decides to help Otello. He is going to free the jailed Franz and seek out Otello The book ends with a promise that things might improve if Troubadour Karl can actually help Otello. Will Karl be discouraged when he sees how handicapped Otello is? The wary Marshall will not give up power easily.
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Part One: I Have A Bigger Secret
akascrubber commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: I Have A Bigger Secret
OK, It will soon be known Tyler is gay and a bottom. People in high school will be shocked. Brandon has said too much. They will be seen double dating and heard talking at the movie. Let us see what happens Monday at school The groundwork is set almost for the next part.- 28 comments
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Gabriel takes his mate around to meet everyone. Ray slowly begins to think of Ray as his mate. A a hunger is buiding up in Ray for Gab. Will they make love in the next chapter?Do they need to bond to stop the vampires from claiming him?
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Aramis & Chapter 3 (1/11)
akascrubber commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Aramis & Chapter 3 (1/11)
Zorro and Edwin are confined at the three musketeers base. They are undergoing therapy and have severe regrets over the death of lost relatives. Could they have saved them? They are advising and strethening each other. They are deciding eventually that theywill learn from the past and hope they can do better. -
Love in the Olive Groves
akascrubber commented on E K Stokes's story chapter in Love in the Olive Groves
Etienne decided he had to take on a new adventure and not freturn to a hidden life at court. Charles sadly said good bye. The road trip gave the three boys time to wonderfully explore each others bodies and sexual desires without inhibitions. I expect they becoming better lovers. They traveled along without guards. Their downfall seem to happen in Naples where theives stole their wagon. With the help of a local young boy they found their wagon and gear but were accused of being theives themselves.They were found guilty by a local judge a and were to recieve lashes when the young guy who helped them came to the judge with the innkeeper who stated the wagon was theirs. Luckily, they were freed and sent on their way to meet the important artist. BTW, the story title refers to a kings boy. I am looking forward to see how this connection takes place. -
Part One: You Have A Secret...
akascrubber commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: You Have A Secret...
Brandon is worried he could be hurt by Tyler who is not thinking at all that he intends to hurt Brandon.Talk through what your concerns are now, I suggest unlike most high scool kids who do not speak up and brood. But at least for now go with the flow and enjoy your time. Should we be worried that Matt is going to offer Brandon something he cannot refuse? --Possibly he has in mind--a job at his place, an art project, unsolicited relationship advice, etc. -
Zorro shows he can be a selfless hero. He protects and saves lost foxes from being left behind and gives his dead brother's name as the rescuer so he will be memoralized. Zorro joins the insurrectionists and flies to their base with his family sword. He joins an injured Porthos and finally meets Anthos on the plane. Maybe, a new three musketters will be born.
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Part One: You Have A Secret...
akascrubber commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: You Have A Secret...
Tyler and Devin cemmented they were non-sexual friends. Tyler misses Brandon and texted him. They both are testing out their relstionship and what it means.They need to talking and seeing each other.I hope they can handle with grace any future disturbances.- 46 comments
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Darn it--Ryder feels a very strong and unusual compulsion pulling him towards Danny. He started kissing him and Danny wonderfully kissed back. But, Ryder felt he had to focus on his fated mate" Pembrooke. Danny and he talked--again past each other--and he had to hold back and broke it off. But, Danny's scent is driving him crazy Danny thinks he understands Ryder is going to have an arranged marriage and it is so outdated. He also thinks Ryder is saving himself until he is married. Danny cannot understand what is happening. But, slowly Ryder's resistence is fading, He is finding Danny more and more compelling,' Are they finally going to make love in the next chapter?
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Oh No--Zorro lost an eye. His golden retreiver nemisis just had to take out his eye. The pain was intense. Later, many black clad rescuers arrived and saved Zorro and Porthos and the captutered foxes. Zorro saw the one who took hid eye be killed. He recovered his family broach and historic sword. They had to swiftly assemble all and leave. More medical will be needed and hopefully they will be treated in time. I hope this event is really over and they can safely escape,. Both Zorro and Porthos will need help and time to recover mentally.
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Adam and Marc are having full, engaging lives with their children and are also navigating their business opportunites with skill. They have carefully studied the Dupont business and know its capabilitues and shortfalls. Marc has a ideas and knows what needs to be done if Dupont is taken over. It will be a friendly, but brutal house cleaning.The Dupont's agree with what Marc says is needed and accept their roles. They need new leadership, new blood, new tech and much more money. It is amazing Marc and Adam can move ahead on so many levels and carefully expand their corporation and keep it successful. They have a great team and solid plans.
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Finally, justice was done and the evil is finished
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OMG--What sadness-Zorro lost his innocence and found out his brother was a unsanctioned excecutioner cleansing his area or those who are outcasts. He reveaied this to Porthos as they are recovering from their torture. It appears Porthos or Edwin is noticably burning up and on deaths doorbed. Wll the golden retreivers let him die without any medical help? Zorro is alone and may have lost his only contact that keeps him sane. Are the golden retreivers listening in on their conversations?
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Zorro is being psychologically tortured. He is starving and offered tea and pastries. He eventually eats just a bit before he is bloated. He is unable to eat anything else.Then he is showed Porthos being badly tortured, One of his eyes is removed and Porthos screams. His fingernails are being removed and he screams more. Zorro is now asked for informtion like names, etc. He has nothing to give. It would not help making anything up. He could only suggest false data that can be found maybe easily to be a lie.He is not a terrorist and has no information.Will they both be hurt even more and be left to die in a day or two since they have nothing to give?
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Will and Jeremy had an honest, brutal discussion, Will had talked and gotten comments from Darius and Brad before. Will told Jeremy he forgave him and told him why. Life ahead is not going to be calm, but they agreed to keep talking and listening. Jeremy on his meds is a good brother. Will is in his corner.
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A Florentine Offer, a Lingering Loyalty.
akascrubber commented on E K Stokes's story chapter in A Florentine Offer, a Lingering Loyalty.
Wow--A sailor discovered Etienne and the Prince fucking and later forced Etienne to be fucked by him. Eventually, they reached Constantinople and the Prince and his men fought the Ottomans. But they lost and had to flee the city. Etienne stayed with the Prince in his bed at least. They arrived in an Italian port and the prince secured a ship bound for England/ Etienne toured the city witing for the ship to leave and met two young boys. They hit it off and had a night of wonderful sex. The three were invited to travel to Florence to model for a famous artist. Davinci? Etienne was perplexed. He liked his new friends and the chance for adventure and the opportunity to get away from the stuffy and risky court life as the Prince's boy in his bed What will Eitenne go to Florence? Will he return to his Prince? Either way his life will change significantly. -
Zorro is being water tortured and going in and out of dreams with his brother and family. He is facing or undergoing a Kafka like no win interrogation by an uncaring interrogator. Porthos is seeming to offer him an optimistic outcome from his treatment by the golden retreivers, but I think he is just trying to keep their hopes up. Something new and dramatic has to happen for these two jailed surviving, in my opinion.
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Act II - For The First Time In Forever
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - For The First Time In Forever
So, it is confirmed Ray is Gabe's true mate. Ray is bewildered. Gabe wants to protect him with all his might. Ray enabled Gabe and his father and sister to shift quickly and without pain. Can he empower others? The prophecy has come true, but is being kept secret for now. The vampires and witches will need to be told.What happens next? -
Who Doesn’t Like a Maverick?
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Who Doesn’t Like a Maverick?
Jmie was mast6erful--a consumate, skilled, friendly and likable drummer. He willingly trained young drummers and then starting performing with three bands one after the other.He was doing a marathon online show and he was very popular, The comments showed he rocked. Jamie definitely countered the negative live feed interpretion of him as a fake, weak, unfriendly drummer,. He was very happy. Two troubling incidents--Angus called to apologizze and said he fired the bad guy and was reorganiing the situation. Then Jamie thought he saw cottontail but was mistakened when the guy was curt and pushed him away abruptly.Was it really the bad brother Wen? Later Wen called Hearst and said he had a choice job-- secret for now since it required NDA's. Is Wen now being paid to target Jamie? He would love to do it.Wen hates Jamie and is going to want to bring him down. This suspicion is another reason to not trust Angus. -
Part One: Did I Make You Gay?
akascrubber commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Did I Make You Gay?
Hayden had a great line in My Life as a House. He suggested to the complaining neighbor that 6 inches should not ultimately matter at any time or place. The uptight, righteous complaining neighbor objected about how the renovated house will be the extra 6 inches over the property line and soon realized from his voice, body and moves that Hayden might be refering to cock length . Hayden had been his earlier paid sex partner at a nightime dark rendevous. The neighbor gave in and removed his complaint because he did not want his gay sexual behaviour made public.
