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The Sharp Edge of Elegance
akascrubber commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Sharp Edge of Elegance
On average, teenagers in the U.S. spend approximately 4.8 hours per day on social media. This includes platforms like YouTube, TikTok, and Instagram, which account for a significant portion of their social media usage. A large percentage of teens (51%) report spending at least four hours a day on these platforms, according to a Gallup survey. Some schools are banning students using cell phones from their buildings. My point about online media popularity is not a value judgment, but to point out that teenagers often use social media and this component has not yet entered the story -
The Sharp Edge of Elegance
akascrubber commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Sharp Edge of Elegance
BTW--Teenagers like the ones in this story are often dedicated online consumers and are addicted to certain popular programs to obtain news, follow cutural activities , show off themselves and chat -
Good Value for the Money
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Good Value for the Money
Awesome recovery and victory--Thanks Pembrooke as a white wolf found them and proceeded to attack Ryder who was in his human form. Ryder was losing the battle until Danny hit Pembrooke over his head with a toaster. The white wolf was knu=ocked unconscious. Next, Ryder begam healing and could transform unto his wolf now. Danny thought he was exciting and handsome . Ryder tied up Pembrooke who turned to his human form, Ryder understood things more clearly.He knew Dany was the reason Pembrooke lost. Ryder realized the evil force was his clairvoyant. He was not going to lose his pack like Prembrooke did!But a new challenge happened. Who is this mystery taped person Vince and Jack brought to them? I like how you solve one puzzle and create another one. You show us there is lots more to discover.- 42 comments
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The Sharp Edge of Elegance
akascrubber commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Please do not let Reed Hastings, the prat, turn into Josh's love interest. He deserves a much better option for love and good sex amomg his school's classmares.cIt is just my hope. -
We see how Marc and Adam have carefully planned things out, building options for growth and maintaining secrets until they are ready to be more soecific. Haven is a good example. There are long term plans and the planet will be carefully enabled to grow. Hunter was tested and finally given command of a new ship which is vry powerful and dangerpus that will face great risk fighting behind enemy liines. Hunter was reunited with Martin who is now his second in command and likely mate. Things are loooking up for them.
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Things are getting very unreal and Troy is starting to be put in a new and unexpected subordinate place dominated by the jocks. If he doesn't flee this first night, he will be acccepting his new role.
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Meet the Members of Alpha Zeta Rho
akascrubber commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Meet the Members of Alpha Zeta Rho
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I am happily surprised, This mall restroom story is turning out well. Both men are ready for more,
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The Sharp Edge of Elegance
akascrubber commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Sharp Edge of Elegance
So to serious spy thriller references ,you seem to add high quality soap opera vibes. Josh survived his first St Augustine ball impressing the headmaster, tangling with his presumed class rival or more? and making the best impression by dancing with James with his older brother and mistakenly identified boy friend. Claire and Dan were a riot who live well in the rarifed atmosphere of old money without being consumed by it. Josh is still figuring out things but did find he aeaily fit in to this social scene, His alternate personna came forth and his senses were enabled when he realized a challenge was around. Josh realized..." There was still so much to figure out. School. My place in this family. The shadows of who I used to be. And that strange tension every time I remembered the other me watching." The basic canvas is prepared for Josh's new life. Are Claire's parents going to upset the apple cart or maybe add more spice to the mix?- 53 comments
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This wa painful to read since it exposed Lyn's secret of his poor situation.He had no where to go over the holidays and he had litle money Alexander was key. He realized Lyn's difficulties . He paid for the liquor Brad wanted Lyn to buy but could not afford it.Brad was willing to take Lyn over Christmas and Alexander would host him over the New Year's time. Lyn will be out of sorts. Alexander know how bad off he is, Will he make something out of it later? Somehow these guys stay together. Brad seems to be the glue and no one wants to disappoint him.
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The Inn. restaurant and airline service are operating beyond expectations. Mav found a need to accomodate three person groups, The Inn added larger beds and tables. Mav and Randy had the planned sex with Jules. Randy helped Mav by double dicking Jules would liked this attention. Mav had to later step in and get Jules to not come back to him earlier and then stay with his husbands. Mav told Randy they are not yet ready to get married but he is thinking hard about it. Randy had a scare when he heard a Roger Blaney was ready to check in. Roger posted on line sex tapes of him and ruined his life. Randy had Roger and his sugar daddy thrown out and told Roger's sugar daddy to check and make sure Roger did not post his pics or vids. Later it was found two states have warrants out or Roger for posting material about guys without their permission . Roger uses twitter and OnlyFans. The police here will be notified that Roger is in town. They might pick him up. Randy has to decide if he wants to sue him
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Josh blew it. Walter told him to go black and keep himself private, But, Josh told Dan that the man who met him at the landing pad knew him. Dan said he will tell his brother The rest of his time with the Kincaids was warm and welcoming. The family members made him feel like he was alredy part of the family. Josh agreed to test to see if he could enter the prep school all his family attended,.Getting ready for a formal dance, Josh felt at home tieing his bow tie and wearing his formal outfit. BTW, James handed Josh an old family cane that looked elegant and felt substanial. He realized the cane could make him more dangerous and would be tougher than his hospital cane that he used to hit the bad guy in the hospital.
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The mystery is solved. Elias the Younger is actually an ancient being who was cast out from his planet, He cannot leave earth now. Unfortunately he is no longer receiving evidence that the life on his home planets still exists, He wants Charlie and crew to find an intergalatic ship and investigate if his planet still contains his race of beings. His offer is accepted. They have found a trusted seller and ship off world. They begin their exploration and they find a huge fragment as they seek the home world. Has some or the cited planet been destroyed? How will they find answers?
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Marc certainly did terrorize and defeat the destroyers, including one headed by his son Hunter. Marc was testing out the battlecruser Stalker as a protype ship to fight behind enemy lines, The ship and its AI were fine tuned and approved for production Marc had to return earlier as planned to consider withAdam an opportunity that eventuallly will need Senate approval. Marc and Adam also discussed whether or not tghey wanted another child--one at a time up to four. The jointly agreed to have at least one more child. Marc later worked through staffing and leadership transitions on the ships. Hunter does not know it yet but he will get a prized command.
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Talking in the plane on the way to Palo Alto, they figured out by his comments and attitude Fellowes was not the motivating voice but someone was pushing or paying him. Brad and Jake took it on themselves to research who was behind Fellowes. Arriving at Escorial, Will and Travis had hot, passionate and fullfilling sex. They openly discussed like lovers what excited them in bed. The was the calm before the big dinner. Will told Travis he is going to hold back unless attacked and then he will open fire.
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Act III - Go The Distance
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Go The Distance
Ray and Renato traversed through fields and woods taking several paths and false endings till then found a scary white mist and the witches village. They expect Gabriel is here along with the witches who took him. Ray and Renato will be trying to rescue him. Their pack is not protected as the witches promised so Gabriel has no reason to stay. But, how will they escape? -
Somehow Richter survives what would disturb, embarrass or kill others. He admits to having a gay experiences, is told by another person he is gay and will keep his secret, he expands his consiousness and save many people by containing a fusion explosion. is told by his brother he is now known as The Mighty One Who is a Star, and finally saved many who suddenly are transported where they should not be and released his consciousness into Gray Snow and blasted away multitude of threatening squid. Qana appeared by Richter after he destroyed the squid and they laughed. Richter is gaining a very complex reputation and his extreme, uncommon power is valued
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There had to be a good reason for Walter Green to want to meet Josh at the landing pad. He was a senior person at the CIA who did not just meet anyone. Walter had to know who Josh was and felt a need to alert him to protect him and his role or Walter's role possibly as in the hidden program in Treadstone that was never meant to see the light of day or be revealed to Congress. Was Josh helping those who encrypted the software program, protecting them or spying on them? Will CIA or enemy agents want to kill him, especially after he fully regains his now blocked memory?
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What a powerful transition from hospital to his new home. Josh still very tender and partially infirm was given a heartwarning send off from his hospital and taken by helicopter to the CIA landing pad and then to his new, large and elegant very old money home. This home is not one that a normalstate trooper can afford. He met an older man at the landing site who told him he knew what he was and told him to go black or hide his true nature and become just a young man. Josh complied and his panic subsided. Josh is adjusting to his new home and family. He now has two brothers, Adam and James. There will be a party tomorrow and a dance and later school. Josh seems to have very acute hearing. Josh knows he has something blocked inside him. Will Walter eventually tell him who he really is? Can he find out on his own? Is he in danger of being killed or kidnaped? Will Adam or James provide him a reason to open up and might he need to act to protect them ? Josh realizes...."Whatever came next, Christmas, new schools, hidden pasts and whispering ghosts, I wasn’t on the outside anymore. I was now part of something. And life wasn’t going to slow down for me to catch up" He hopes he will be up to face the danger ahead.
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Charlie and crew met a strange being who looked like a younger version of an older man. The visitor wanted to meet hem and found a way to meet them through following and older man who sought out Charlie's help. Now, he is going to tell them why he needs help. I expect it will be highly unusual
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Chapter 7: The Reward
akascrubber commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 7: The Reward
Sean was completely degraded. He submitted to all his master directed at his office. Sean realized...."I belonged to him. Completely. And I would do anything—endure anything—for the privilege to stay that way." What next is in store for Sean? -
Kazerbol will seek out and kill Zal on his way to the Misty Isles Doptus is being sent by Kazerbol to find and kill Vargan. Their enemies will be destroyed to protect the Black Flame.
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Wencel tells his brother--- “You should be here, Hearst. You should be with me and take a front-row seat to the drama that will put Jamie in hot water. He won’t dare to show his face again, ever, after this." This is what Wencel wants. It turns out the Wicklows tricked their parents out of their money. Their father ended up a convenience store clerk. Wencel hates Jamie and wants him to suffer. Hearst did not know about the pain caused by the Wicklows. Now. Hearst has arrived and met his brother. But he is shocked. Angus wants to meet him and knows Jamie and he had sex. I can see Angus will want to use Hearst to hurt Jamie and ruin thie relationship. Can Hearst play Angus along and alert Jamie to his plan and give him time to plan a solution ?
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You sold out and won fans and big stars. Take the ball and run with it. Donot get writers block Ny advice --Keep making the next chapters a parody and do not over think it.
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Chapter 8: Training Balls
akascrubber commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 8: Training Balls
I have to admire Casper . He is really traing Eli well to follow him and want him more. Now he has started them training in a different small gym earlier in the morning. No one else is around.' For several days Casper instructs and touches Eli. He notice Eli is constamtky hard and not improviing. Casper wears a skin tight singlet showing his ass and cock. He is driving Eli mad He says Eli has not been improving So to help him out Casper get naked and takes his singlet off. Eli is laying flat on a met and Casper tell Eli he can lick his balls. Casper crouches over Eli and places his balls over his mouth. Eli strokes and stokes is cock. Then Casper moves farther forward and places his balls over Eli's nose which continues to excite him and Eli creates a stunning huge orgasm up his body. Casper gives Eli a towel who wipes off his cium,.They continue to train. Eli is blown away Will Casper next time get Eli to jack at the start of his traiining?He could expand how he temps Eli by letting hm lick his balls and cock shaft. Now that Eli is jacking is his jacking blockage ended? He might wants to jack more often--maybe in his room. Since he seems to be set off by smells and tastes of a guys balls and Casper knows it. Might Casper give him a worn jock to get off when he is not with him? Will Eli look for Mason's jocks or worn underwear to help him get off. Or will Casper at some point face fuck Eli when he is on the mat or in Casper's room? You have lots of options. Casper is in control.
