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Rikard is continuing to play havoc and not tell others of his intentions. Arcanis has been destroyed and upset at least Darien's plans and the effort to destroy the Asmus hedgehogs. One failure leads to more problems.

So..."Luther’s prank that destroyed Richter’s treasured coffee beans" These civet coffee beans meant a great deal to Richter. I am looking forward to how they became treasured to Richter at the academy.

Topher Lyndon your writing ability and speed amazes me. You seem to be able to cover widely different themes and avoid being repetitive and upsetting people with different cultural or political viewpoints. I am very interested in seeing how you advance a story with Enrico and Xue now in business for themselves. They can be very focused and deadly.

What an ongoing catastrophe beyond Hugo's and Alec's comprehension. Sinjin at least seems to have led then far astray and set Hugo up to be killed The Bride saved Hugo and thought Sinjin was crazy. “Sinjin and his damn aggregate bullshit.” She tsked aloud. “Listen, I think the fastest way to get yourself killed around here is to listen to him. He’s a crazy old man, sweet, but nuts." There are stalkers out there and maybe going after Alec. Hugo wants to go after him. It has been a week. But he is still too injured to move. We know when he can, Hugo will go after Alec. Maybe the Bride can give him some advice. Surprises pop up and let's hope Hugo finds a way to reunite with Alec and flee the citadel.

Things ended softly. The group of kids moved out for the most part. Only Joel, Davin and Colt were left sleeping in the truck bed. colt's girl friend left disappointing him. The fight and mention of a gun did not bring out any serious discussion. Davin wanted Joel to go to their school. Surprisingly, Joel had not thought that far ahead. But, he began to think it would not be a bad idea to get a fresh start in his senior year. Looks like Colt is straight, and Davin does not have a girlfriend. They will wake up in the morning no liking the rough time sleeping on a truck bed, But, they will have a safe time reporting to Celia and Trace with no beer breath, It may be the calm before the tough discussion when Joel's hurt knuckles are seen, He needs a story or maybe should come clean, Maybe any fallout from the fight among the schools will take a few days.

I totally enjoyed this story. I was challenged and worried by all the bad actors with evil intent. Trying to steal a nuclear submarine, blow up innocent people, attempt to cause nuclear disasters, murderous spies, and also face bloody internal bureaucratic fights impairing national security are only some of the issues to be faced .Andrew and Will Carter are central , helpful an skilled players in the drama. It is a worthy read with suspense galore.

I love it. Jamie and Hearst finally got together. They are going to be boyfriends and living together and making love as much as possible. Their inhibitions are being released. What a wonderful resolution.

What a shocking intro to a blood thirsty torturer and killer and a easily seduced playboy! I am looking forward to seeing how this develops

Sam finished digging the grave for his parents and took the necessary time to cry and release his sorrow. The village healer attended to him and gave him proper healing substances The villagers helped take his parents to the grave site and bury them, It was a fitting time. The chief said some very inspiring words. “As we say farewell, let us remember Joefre and Sophie not for the tragedy that took them, but for the admirable lives they lived, and for the fine, brave son they raised. Let us carry forward their legacy of love, kindness, and compassion, and let their memory be a guiding light in our own lives.” I think Sam can move on now. What will he do?

Thank you for the happy, very revealing interlude. They arrived in Birmingham in 2010 during a joyous Pride festival. Same sex relationships were displayed as normal and welcomed. It took the two a while to accept what was going on but they the kissed and danced. Drinking some coffee and a doughnut gifted to them they soke honestly and finally called each other Hugo and Alec. They saw what was possible for two men in love with each other. But, time marches on--They were taken away to soon face the citadel, but this happy memory will stay with them.

Vargan has a new dream . He pictures himself as the new emperor. He will use Dareis Monteilon to assist him. Chancelor Berron has found his oath to the darkness has come due and he is terrified. A grotesque man has appeared and demands his help. He wants Governor Dareis Monteilon and his two boys, and then a certain boy - Josel Sandkan. Poor Zdain and Josel are in grave danger from Renn and the grotesque man.

What a very successful conclusion ! MI5 and skilled military and other actors took down the foreign bad guys with precision and stopped foreign goverments from gaining a nuclear detinator. Seeing Sir Edward smile and gloat over Defarge was priceless The foreign agents made payments to people they did not realize who would benefit. Enrico and Xue earned their significant ill gotten gain . We learned they are going into business for themselves. Enrico made sure a very large payment was made to Ezra that will insure his happy future. Sinclair landed in South America tied up by Xue. Enrico bribed the police to believe Sinclair was a pedophile and now he is destined to be placed in a nasty prison and given very bad treatment by those who hate child predators. Sinclair may well lose his life before his lawyers can try to help him. Will and Andrew and Jacob are returning to Canada. Will wanted to be certain Andrew will be taking his Navy uniform with him and maybe for some mysterious personal fantasy play. Thank you for a wonderful , well told yarn. The end was very satisfactory. I am looking forward to your next Carter story.

So painful and relentless--All seemed lost as Brother Mathias attacked. He had to get close and end them. He moved into the birthing room. But when Lucien as born--light filled the room and a new power transformed and cleansed everything--Brother Mathias failed and fell back--He was disoriented and without followers--Marie could not forgive him for what he did to her mother and slit his throat. They are free and healthy. The new Lucien shines and displays his power. A bright future lies ahead for him.

“I don’t just want to save you, kid. I want to keep you. Feed you. Wash your hair. Watch you squirm when I talk like this.” His voice dipped into a growl. “I want you to be mine. I want to teach you everything you never got to learn.” “That’s what I like about you best,” D murmured. “That I get to be your first in everything.” They kissed and Joey was transfixed Unfortunately, they were found sleeping by two killers in a motel. D found hard and ended their lives, Vinnie is after them. The drove away and found new clothes at a Walmart. D knew they had to change cars. He selected an older model but was unable to break into it. Joey came into his own. He was able to break into theb care and wire it to start the engine without a key. Now they arevon the road to South Carolia to get Uncle Leon's box of date to uncover the mob and help them stay safe. This path they are following is very dangerous. They are going to need lots of luck.

“Wojciech-cun, you’re destined for something, a destiny you have selected,” he touched the box, “and when you are ready, I know that you will take the steps you need to fulfil that chosen destiny. You are not a burden to him, but a purpose.” Hmmmm Hugo, the lore master, is on his way with Stoker. Danger awaits. He will face physical challenges in their next location. Finally, he accepted a sword to protect them. Sinjin advised Hugo and wants him to return to him when his next task is completed.

Everything happened so far--things fell into place--Andrew is safe and on land. He had great conversations with Will and Sprog. Salvage operations are underway on the sub. Templeman recovered from the shootings and talked to Enrico or now Alejando who is soon going to melt away. He gave out info on his computer and targeted as Sinclair as the big boss and Jared as the financier who knew about the money and is a target for death by Sinclair. Sir Edward with Templeman and MI5 are back in operation. Defarge is sidelined and wounded. Sinclair bought him a yacht. However the battle with Defarge for control is moving still into high gear. Sir Edward is ready. You took us through the issues with speed and did month get us lost . We are left with admiration and happiness at the outcomes. Like-life things are not resolved and details are left undone. Sinclair is removed as a cancer. Enrico is free to take on new opportunities. He will still likely target his enemy, the US. Will and Andrew also must be open to move back to Canada when the time comes holding their heads up high. Thank you.

Gabe won his game with his best friend Justin. Justin knew something was bothering Gabe. The team victory dinner did not shake Gabe who was attracted to Justion. Gabe was in the closet in a funk. But, he returned to thinking about the man he met last night at a gas station. He was unnerved by him.

People are afraid. Eitenne and Amelie had prepared a strong defense in their partially built home. Brother Matias is going to attack them and the official cannot stop him. We are left awaiting the attack. I hope Brother Mathias can be defeated

Troy severed Jace well. He gave a great blowjob and acted like a excited bottom. Troy has not told anyone in high school he was a well experienced cock sucker and loved having sex with straight jocks. Jace really liked Troy's sexual talents. One task down and won and more to go to earn his spot at the frat.

Let's hope Joey is saved and he can begin taking care of D. Joey is a nurturer as well as very good looking and tempting to D.

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Let's hope Joey is saved and he can begin taking care of D. Joey is a nurturer as well as very good looking and tempting to D.

Hugo found the fiddler and he was his devil."I have told you, you perceive me as the devil, and so I am, in a fashion." His devil gave him roadmap and a warning along with an encouragement to enjoy his passions with Stoker, He was warned others in the time stream do not approve of gay sex so be discrete. "You have claimed the first Aggregate, you have four more to go before you get an understanding of what’s happening here. But be warned, each one will be more difficult to claim than the last, and each will force you to face a part of yourself you would rather keep buried." So ,Hugo will have a painful journey of self-discovery before...?

What I am hoping to see in your final chapters is how you knit together the final parts and show Andrew and Will recovered and hopefully praised as things turned out along with Templeman, Sir Edward and MI5 valued, and Mason Defarge disgraced for his conspiracy efforts and overstepping what is proper. But, maybe, I am asking too much. We will see !

Templeman rose to the challenge and dispatched by disabling three of the 4 professional hit men from following Sinclair's orders. Dr Reed acted decisively and threw a heavy statue at the final man and knocked him unconscious. Enrico was observing--using the internal cams ??-giving Templeman strategic advice on where to place himself to fight them really was useful. The special rifle Enrico offered Templeman was very effective and much better than his borrowed handgun. Is Ezra now joining them? “Go mum!” Ezra’s voice broke through the silence of the wrecked apartment." His mother will be so happy. I expect Enrico will blend away letting Ezra stay with his mum. Sinclair is no longer needed and is set to be killed by Xue, I expect. Templeman has the information from his passports. Will he use Andrew's phone to call Canada House to ask for help if he cannot reach MI5 or his MI5 boss?