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  1. This story is not aligned with real history. This use of the Stuarts is immersed in its own version of history
  2. Lyn and Brad met purely by chance at the start of their freshman year. Brad was the outgoing, friendly, very handsome guy who invited Lyn.a classic nerd, to a party at his dorm. Lyn showed up and met Brad who then moved on tried to connect with girls. Lyn acted like a good wallflower and blended in. At end of the party. Brad met Lyn and asked him to help himto get to his room. He was drunk for the first time of his life and needed help. Brad trusted a new person in his life when he was very vulnerable. He must have seen something good in Lyn and found a burgeoing friendship. Lyn helped him on the way to find a place to vomit and recover at his moment of distress. Lyn undertood Brad's intervention was path breaking. . “Who else was there for me, tonight? You, Lyn baby. You. I’ll never forget this.” Brad saw them as becoming great friends not seeing any hidden sexual desires in Lyn who stayed carefully in the closet. Oh, Lyn you are going to be tormented by Brad !
  3. akascrubber

    A Good Deed

    Travis did not see any problem taking his acting rival on his plane. Will was concerned, but Travis blew him off. “Remember Jack Roenig, the dude who is pissed off that I got his role?” he asked. “Meredith’s boy toy,” I augmented. “That’s him,” Travis said. “He needed to get back to LA for Thanksgiving, so I offered him a ride.”
  4. akascrubber

    A Good Deed

    i was thinking the hatred and desire to hurt/remove Travis was due to a actor rivalry. But Jack is from the same general area as Travis. Is Jack's possible motivation against Travis due to his role as a Buck that succeeded well after the company fell apart? Lives might have been ruined. He does not think well of his siblings. There could be many who want to see him suffer. I expect Jake will be studying the possibilities of local enemies and see if they connect with Jack
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    Ashes

    Etienne is determined to rebuild better and safer. He will lead and motivate others. Meanwhile, Amelie is feeling something stiring within herself. She does not yet know what is happening to her after the fire.
  6. All the rationalizations and misdirections ends tonight. They will give themselves to each other.But it is supposedly to be a one-night stand since Ryder is fated to another. But Ryder realizes he loves Danny, not Pembrooke. I bet their love making will be so powerful, that both will not want to stop. Ryder , in peak of passion and excitement may confess who he really is and what his mission is. After their earth shaking shared orgasms Danny will be so in love with Ryder that he will do anything to stay with him. He will see Ryder's revealed nature as making him more interresting.
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    Chapter 45

    Please enjoy your time off. I hope you get re-charged for this story. You have Adam and Marc handling their kids on business trips and learning how to fit in with corporate activities. Right now, Adam and Marc are planning on 4 more kids. They need to discuss adding more. Life is good and all the systems and staff re working well. The cruise ships will return the investment in one year due to their high demand. I wonder what new challenges wait Marc and Adam?
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    A Good Deed

    Nothing like a hanging or a lost boyfriend under mysterious circumstances to wonderfully concentrate the mind.We have one person who may have taken Travis and Jake and Brad will be on him. Time of the essence with a kidnapping. What Travis should have done is a matter fot future review. Brad and Jake will interrogate the plane crew to find out what happened, I can speculate one obvious possibility: Jack Roenig drugged a drink Travis was using and appeared drunk. Jack took charge and helped him off the plane to a car he had already arranged. Jack was prepared for Travis to appear drunk. So the search for Jack should start right away.Look for places Jack might have taken him after his past is studdied.How will Jack pass way any responsibility for having Travis?He wants Travis dead and will try to arrange a situation that points to another person What a serious, potentially deadly cliffhanger. Am I being too dramatic?
  9. Richter at one point considered himself "an insufferable oddball.". But, his master is not happy with him. Richter is too obedient and lacks a backbone. Richter is a raw gemstone to his master that needs to be polished So, the master is applying his massive powers and is pushing and challenging Richter How will Richter be changed?
  10. So, Richter was happiest at the Academy! Now he is dreaming of transfering his world view and knowledge to Kuther, his successor, before he dies. The stage is set and bounded.
  11. What is clearly a new world of passion, I am struck how delicate and sensual actions are indirectly erotically described but not made graphic. I wonder if this text might fit a PG romance novel. See below..... "As their intimacy reached its climax, Enzo’s control became more pronounced, his movements sure and rhythmic. Étienne, lost in the intensity of the moment, surrendered to the pleasure, his body arching against Enzo’s, soft cries escaping his lips. The Tuscan afternoon seemed to hold its breath, the only movement their ragged breathing and the gentle rustling of leaves. In the aftermath, as the sun began its slow descent towards the horizon, casting long shadows across the olive grove, they lay wrapped in each other's arms, their bodies damp with sweat, a profound sense of connection binding them. Enzo ran his hand lightly over Étienne's skin, stroking his hair, a quiet possessiveness in his touch. In the warmth of the late afternoon sun, under the ancient olive trees, Enzo had not just sketched Étienne; he had claimed him, initiating him into a deeper, more intense realm of physical intimacy, leaving Étienne breathless and utterly conquered by a desire he had only just begun to comprehend."
  12. I fear the three are set for a painful breakup. It is clear Etienne is the one being most desired by others and he desires to be with an older, more dominant male. Allessandro realizes this. Giovanni is most upset that he has to share his feelings for Etienne with others. For now, they are in the midst of conflicting emotions. Etienne will certainly be asked to be with Enzo and Ricci again. He is too desirable. His future relations with older males could break the original three apart.
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    Roadkill

    Wow--Cottontail;s brother had followed Jamie and saw them fucking, He heard his voice and knew has was Jamie's partner. They met for breakfast and Cottontail's confessed all.He was upset they were having sex and that Cottontail was a fury. But, the scary matter was not their relationship, but that jamie has a dark family secret he is hiding, Cottontail was not told what the secret was, However, the Live Feed leader was told. It appears Jamie is being set up for a huge disaster. Jamie was asked if he could travel for the show. Jamie said "yes." I can picture he will be put in a room with cameras running and then his supposedly shameful family could enter the area and meet him. The LiveFeed crew will want to film fireworks Will Cottontail be able to reach Jamie in time to stop a confrontation with his family. Jamie should give up on the show or at least not help it. The staff clearly wants to hurt him
  14. I thought Lyn would be the tormented victim Are you suggesting he might be a spoilsport and try to ruin the impending marriage? If so, this will get very messy fast I cannot wait to see how you lead this story.
  15. Mother confronts Ray who she dislikes. She throws a powerful truth spell at him to force him to reveal all. Ray is tormented and bleds and is rcked with strong images of being attacked and orotected by the guardians. But he does not know who he is. Mother is very upset and her spell on Ray backfires on her. Ray has been tortured by Mother and they are no farther along in understanding who he is. He has unexpected power. He threw off her spell before. His blood turned a vampire into a powerful daywalker who wants to protect him. The witches will arrive before nightfall. The vampires will arrive after nightfall. Is war likly. Will Ray be able to figure out who he is after the intervention by Mother Can Ray bring about peace?
  16. Good setup--eight years after college Brad is getting married to a woman and Lyn who is gay and unattached regrets they never connected intimtely. Brad may not know Lyn is gay, Lyn feels a he missed out with Brad and will need to be on his best behavior. Brad has a 10 day reunion/marriage planned. Lyn will room with Alex who was the third wheel in their college trio. Lyn is workaholic lawyer and Alex is a heart surgeon with a past. It will be interesting to see how the three guys and the prospective bride relate. Will they stay friends after the 10 days? Brad is off bounds for Lyn. Is there a possibility that Alex and Lyn might find they have a great deal in common?
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    Amiens

    Will Daventry and George be able to salvage the argeement they had with the government now that the treaty will take much longer to settle? " The agreement Daventry had negotiated had given him a cabinet position without portfolio. The government had also promised Granger command of the Endymion should hostilities recommence." Even it he is lucky and in good graces after his trip , it looks like George will not be given a command for sometime. He will have additional time to assist with the pregnancy masquerade, oversee his new house being built, being a good supporter to his opera singer star, etc.
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    Amiens

    George will need to use his more careful and measured diplomatic comments when reporting to the PM and Lord Hawkesbury. They dropped the ball wanting to add new items for the treaty. Tallyrand called Cornwallis an "oaf" and Lord Hawkesbury "inept." George was of the opinion that the present government was second rate and temporary. In the present day US ,a management consultant would say A's pick A's and B's pick C's. Either the PM or Hawkesbury as B's picked Cornwallis who was a C. I will look forward to finding out how George educates the government leaders. He has to be careful and does not want them to send him back. He accomplished his task to quiet any opposition from Napoleon. Now he has to carry out his plan to cover for Caroline's pregnancy and birth for the Princess.
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    Amiens

    Happy Birthday! This is a welcome chapter. Thank you George worked skillfully and effectively as usual. Napoleon is not upset with him.He won back Caroline's support with a very lovely necklace and earrings featuring rubbies. Then he saved Daventry from a disaster when problems arose and he was furious and wanted to leaved on his own. Instead George helped him to receive Cornwallis's agreement to return to London for treaty consultations. Daventry will returnt to London with George and Caroline and not cause public problems for the government. The British Foreign minister added new requests to the draft treaty and sent them to Cornwallis and did not notify Daventry. He was sidelined. The new British requests caused the French to add more of their own. Now, the whole treaty process is bogged down and may take months to conclude. Daventry in London can give his advice to the government and now a new partner for Cornwallis can be sent in replcement for Daventry.
  20. Ryder has been convinced by Cassandra that Pembrooke is his mate, So, Vince and Danny are considering how to get them to meet. Jack , however, tells him seeing Pembrooke means his death. The cards have spoken. Ryder has to different profacies. to consider. He thinks shifters and humans cannot mate. Jack questions his assumption. He sees how Ryder looks with affection towards Danny. So, if yder is willing to consider Danny as his mate, how can he reveal his true nature and need for a mate? Will Danny think he is crazy and reject him ? Will he play along in order to finally have passionate sex with Ryder?Will Vince encourage Danny knowing how much Danny wants to have sex with Ryder? Will Pembrooke or his goons show up and force Ryder and them to flee ?
  21. Giovanni's lie about Etienne may have serious long lasting repercusions. At the least, their friendship will be severely fractured.Eitenne will no longer trust him nor seek him out. Giovannni's punishment could make him upset or decide to leave. Etienne could be drawn stronge towards Enzo as a guide and maybe mentor and possibly eventually intimate relations. Having sexual relations will change the chemistry of the studio in ways we do not know yet.
  22. So now its war. The vampires will attack the wolves since the vampires failed to capture Ray. Renato, the vampire Ray saved, stood up to the raiding vampire party. Renato called Ray, my Prince There is much to understand, Ray saw the giant statues of the five beast-guardians. He said they had been chasing him. Earlier they met two people who drove into the area say they had dreams of being chased by beasts. People are returning. What is happening to the former wolf shifters? Will they begin to be able to shift? Will they be able to stand up to the vampires? What role will the witches play?
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    Chapter 44

    I am so impressed about how Marc and Adam keep all their responsibities in line and care deeply for their kids and their corporate duties. They never seem to get tired or overwhelmed. Now they are considering dding even more kidThey look ahead and create superb situations and physical products. The sjips are impressive. The cruise ship that will leave with the first guests is going to be fabulous and popular. The impact of the 5 sectors, I am sure, will be surprising. I hope you really enjoy your break and are able to further craft this interesting story.
  24. Michael knew best what had to be done and let nothing stand in his way . He was truly intelligent , multi-yayered and not mad. He is creating the possibility of new beginnings. The Railroad is underway.
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    Chip

    Will easily talks to guys and finds out what matters to them.He does not blow up when he is told no. It is a toss up to me if Finn and he will be friends or is he just a guy who is open to infreqent sex. At least Will has a reason to learn about fisting from his dad since Finn is open to trying it. Now Chip and Will are exploring whether they will become more intimate, Will has blown his mind with the home and meal at Matt and Wade's place. They will have to cover how Will knows Chip's friend. Is it going to be a trouble spot or not" They have a place and time to open up if they feel inclinedget . I guess we will find out soon. I hope Jake has a good report by Thanksgiving on the stalker funder and the Sebian gang. BTW, did someone on the show have a Serbian name before he or she adopted a beautiful sounding stage name?
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