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I vote for EPIC as long as Ray and Gab survive and help the others regain their proper roles. I do want Valerius to turn into ashes.
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I vote for EPIC as long as Ray and Gab survive and help the others regain their proper roles. I do want Valerius to turn into ashes.
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The battle was intense and brutal between shifters and vampires. Lord Valerious overlooking the battle was disturbed. He no longer felt certain of victory. Rafael was fighting with deadly force in the midst of the carnage.. “This is pointless. A victory of ashes. Stop the fighting. There is a better way.” What is the better way? Will both leaders fight in single combat till one wins?
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So, we now hear the story of Jimmy's troubles from winning the national literary prize. What a mess. He was so young. Now he is older with new friends. Hugo and Sareena offered to help him. He would go to class with Sareena and slowly feel out going back to college. Jimmy stepwise recovered and began his new educational journey
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What a mess. The phone calls have been listened to and false data was given to the cops g fingering both D and Joey. The cops know they are going after Leon's information on the gang. D even thinks they are being watched now in the beach house, 'They need to think up a new plan. D is still sure they need to secretly get what Leon hid. Is it possible to not be caught and killed? This is serious and very dangerous.
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They know what must be done in this bizarre respite location and have been able to come to grips with what is happening in the Tides of Time. Some travelers are leaving and others remain. I expect they will find two people who see their watches as curses and want to give them up. They might start with people who seem to be near in time to this present and may want to stay here. Good Luck! I expect Reed with stay behind to do damage control and stop any current problems from Hugo's and Stoker's trip.
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The Three Amazing Vampires
akascrubber commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in The Three Amazing Vampires
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"The Cookout (Part 2)"
akascrubber commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Cookout (Part 2)"
Whose heart cannot melt when facing a young, handsome, very sexy and smiling Brad Pitt--mm? He would win hearts and willing partners. -
I am sorry your other books are not in libraries crvboy.org has several of your works listed alphabetically under authors. You are listed as Lyndon, Christopher
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A sharp cop or maybe agent would have a second gun on him. I am interested into seeing what Reed likes. The Colt 1911 would have been out of date in 2025. James Bond used the more compact Walther PPK pistol
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I bet Reed kept his 45 in great condition and would be ready to use. The weapon had an effective safety, too.
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I like a long story--Plese do not go off base as Dr. Who has gone. It has lost its fan base.
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They need to flee and find that spot in New York. Hopefully, they can find two people who willingly give up their watches. Reed knows they must leave this time and is helping them as long as they leave. I have used the Colt M1911 as my side arm in the US Army. It useful at close range carving out body parts and not accurate at longer ranges. It does make a scary loud sound. It is a carnage weapon. It was developed to destroy Huk rebel forces in the Philippines in the early 1900's--hence the Colt as named 1911--who would he hopped up on drugs and stage attacks on US soldiers. The old US revolver had no effect on people in mass attacks. If Stoker shot Reed's body at a close range he would die within a short time.
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What an interesting date. They both gave their all and really began learning about each other and liking each other. Jimmy is very thoughtful and open about their developing friendship. Sex was not the end game this first date. They would last for a long time. "Just know that there was love there, and it came not in a rush of clothes and hurried passion. It would never have survived that. Wil and I discussed that the other night, had we jumped into bed, we’d have never lasted the week. It was a slow burn, intellectual, calm, and intense, like he was."
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Jimmy did work his magic and convinced a straight guy to give him a date and they must have clicked. There is something special about the evolving Jimmy. What a happy transition for Will and Jimmy !
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The empowered Stoker can stand up to Agent Reed in close quarters, I expect. Reed does not know yet about Stoker's new abilities
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Wow--J Edgar Hoover wanted them and had them arrested at the Smithsonian. The were placed in a cell in the FBI building. When agents appeared to take them to Hover. Stoker decided to take his Aggregate which gave him highly skilled fighting abilities. Stroker knocked out both agents and they fled the building with Hugo knowing its internal plans. Reed found them leaving the building and offered them a ride. He decided at this time not to kill them. Stoker's new abilities should continue to come in helpful.
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Please write with the dynamic covering your friends and partners you feel bests helps us understand you as you develop.
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What a charming story full of learning, growth and goodwill. Hugo is fascinating and more than an athlete. He really saw Jimmy as he is and wanted him and then to fully enjoy gay sex. They were splendid and brilliant and surprising. Finding out they separated on good terms is the best news. Jimmy is so young, and he needed Hugo as a good friend and best type of caring role model. "Hugo was the direct path to Wil. Without him guiding Jimmy to something better, Jimmy would probably still be lost. Gratitude for that crazy, geeky-jock boy—well, Jimmy never forgot." Now, please let us find out about Will.
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Act III - Holding Out For A Hero
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Holding Out For A Hero
Amazing--Lord Valerius has been overruled. Ray, Gabriel., Ariadne and Renato left the Castle and vanished. Their power joined together to stop Mother and Lord Valerius from controlling them. These four are heroes. The stage is set. Lord Valerius has oirder3d all his troop to move and attacked the witches and wolf shifters. This final battle should be violent and conclusive. -
Act III - Holding Out For A Hero
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Holding Out For A Hero
OK--I love the title, I remember Bonnie Tyler singing the sing for the hit movie "Footloose". Kevin Bacon was portrayed--but did not do the real dancing--as the hero to the youth in his new small town who are held back. You have set the stage and raised expectations. Will your story fulfill the hopes you have raised? -
Stoker and Hugo realize they might be trapped and seen as too valuable. The President wants to keep them to extract lots of information. Dottie will not protest. But knowledge of these two as gay men could be a weapon against the President. Stoker a is worried that Hugo will be hurt and transformed when he unloads information. Dottie warned Stoker about Reed but did not give a full account. He has traveled in the time streams for 200 years and advised three Presidents, He is worried about giving out too much information that could turn the President into a benevolent dictator. Will he kill Hugo? Will he find a way to give them their watches back so they can flee this time.
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A Wolfshifter Meant Only for Me
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in A Wolfshifter Meant Only for Me
Things are floating along without real resolution about the characters and definite roles for all key individuals. We know now Vince is a guardian and he was Danny's guardian. Danny is a healer. Ryder and Theo have to resolve their issues. Will Theo start his pack now? What is Jack going to do? I assume there will be a pack wide meeting to explain things that are now settled.- 18 comments
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Hugo was brave as you relate. But, you had to be something thrilling yet safe while approachable, sexy and compelling to influence him and see new possibilities.
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Jimmy was a ball of nerves only settled by the great Mike. Hugo, Jimmy's date it turns out was also a ball of nerves when he met Jimmy for their first date I love that Hugo brought Jimmy muffins as a gift, I like this very personal touch. I bring my famous banana bread as a gift when I meet people for the first time. The date went very well. They talked and talked easily and stayed beyond closing, Hugo was captivated by Jimmy and saw none of his flaws. This straight boy was taking Jimmy home for great sex and his first time for male to male sex. I have read they will keep on dating and Hugo will transform Jimmy into knowing what could happen, Hugo is going to open Jimmy's mind in good ways. Hooray!
