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BTW, I loved the historic cane. As a guy who uses one. I would love to have one like it.
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The ending statement sets the course for Sam....?Despite the knight’s surety, Sam thought he still had much to prove. Perhaps not to Graeme, but certainly to himself." How will Sam find a way to prove what he seeks? Will he find a way to get his parents' approval to join his knight as a squire?
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Bartos while analyzing others does not see any concerns with Renn who will put them in danger eventually. Marl's sad history will give others reason to be thoughtful and understand his outburst
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Regarding your bramble bushes Topher Lyndon, Sacramento County, California where I live, rents three goat herds to clear out rough, overgrown land.
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OMG--Can things get any worse ! The thugs have the ship and have killed and tied up the UK sailors. They expected to steal the sub and were shocked to see it was in terrible shape. He could not get the nuclear detonator. Bravo, the head thug working for Enrico, was confused, Bravo now blocked decided to fire some of the sub's weapons on the nearby UK surface ship. But the Russian sub commander decided the sub has been compromised and told the UK surface ship. Consequently, the UK ship prepared for battle and made its weapons ready to fire on the sub A mistake could cause the UK ship to blow the sub apart, Bravo in the sub cannot yet fire any weapons and does not know how much he is in danger. Bravo does not know he is in trouble with the Russian sub and UK ship Andrew is pretending to be Reza and might be able to confuse or prevent Bravo and his men from carrying out their mayhem. We will see. Andrew needs lots of luck. His action beginning the SOS call warned the Russian sub commander something was not right.
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A doctor is able to find the man he lusted after in his youth and they are ready to enjoy each other in bed. I enjoyed this good and fulfilling story.
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Dreams came come true--eventually
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"In time, Sura Island established itself as an island nation. In the blink of an eye, five years passed, and Azula was already acknowledged by the people in the Nerasa Kingdom and beyond as the prince of the Sura Nation." Azula rebounded and helped build a strong nation. He is not forgetting the pain and wrongs inflicted on his family and people. Will he get an opportunity for payback?
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Hugo has quite a good drawing talent. Maybe he will find more of it in his at some point. The havebeen given and outline of key people and beings, The aliens from a future Earth are dominant. Now that they are freed from their cages, they are seeking a way out "There has to be a purpose, a way to break free from this endless, fleeting existence.” Hugo hopes for an answer and is seeking Sinjin at his antiquities shop.
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Is all hope lost for Templeton, MI5 , Will and Andrew Carter and the UK sub? I bet not--It is going to be fascinating to see how you extricate the good guys out of the dead ends and disasters you have created.
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What a cluster..... Enrico is winning for now--Total chaos MI5 is disabled when needed most
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The survived and loved their physical intimacy. They will want more. Their attitudes are evolving but they do have some concerns. But for now they are changing their clothes to something more useful and updated. They are seeking a new location now that their time stream seems unmoving. I want to see how they treat each other as they explore.
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The child, Rebekah, was returned to her parents and he stolen silver was given to the village chief to return to the villagers. The knight and Sam were thanked. Sam felt bad that he impaired the knight's fighting. Sam did not know how to prove his worth to the. knight.
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BTW, it is evening in California as of now. I can read this chapter before I go to bed tonight. But soon, I will be traveling and will miss reading your chapters for a while unless I can connect on the road.
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Enrico set Templeman up as a corrupt agent. He knew the Finch files were being monitored. A rival to MI6 took the bait and did not let the MI5 boss see a message. MI6 and special branch men went after Templeman him on the streets, Templeman was wise enough to go to Canada House and ask for asylum. Mary had told him he was being set up. Will was recalled to Canada House. A standout was being held between the RCMP and special branch forces outside Canada House. The matter can be turned around eventually and Templeman can be saved after a messy dispute and hurt feelings. Time will be wasted when attention is needed on real problems. Enrico will have more free time to carry out his nefarious plans and he achieved his purpose.
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"Gabe couldn’t get the stranger out of his mind. That look that the man had given him . . . It wasn’t just that the guy was strange or intense or out of place. It was because he was attractive.". Gabe is in the closet with intense repressed desires and fears. He longed for his friend Justion but could not act on his feelings for him. The stranger at the gas station turned him on, but he was gone so soon. Will he see the stranger again?
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The stage is set. Why is the clerk nervous?
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The Hour of the Witch
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Hour of the Witch
Jack and Danny teamed up and fumbled through until they found a way to destroy the witch. She wanted to kill then all. and was only stopped at the end. The wolves remained unable to fight and stop Cassandra and they were stunned and powerless, The Alpha Ryder was clawed and bled. But, only Danny and Jack were able to fight Caassandra. They were the only ones sentient and fighting the witch who until the end appeared unstoppable while she froze others and caused intense pain at will. She did not know what Danny and Jack could do. They beat her and she was on more. “Hey, Danny,” Jack’s voice pulled him back. “I think we did it!” “We did it? What? And how?” “I have no idea, but Cassandra went the way of the Wicked Witch of the East. She’s no more.” Hooray! Now they have to find Ryder and bring him and his pack back to life and full power.- 26 comments
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"A young, aristocratic student at Cambridge in 1910, he believes in order, science, and the well-defined boundaries of his world." Oh My--Stoker is going to turn Hugo's world upside down. I hope he can rebound and learn how to adapt to relaxed boundaries with Stoker. So many more things are changing that they both need to grow and keep learning in my opinion.
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I am still focusing on how Andrew will help solve his damaged sub puzzle and how Will might aid the resolution of the troubles on land. But as you think ahead, it seems Andrew's cover is broken and therefore both might be in line for honors for their exemplary public service before they return to Canada. You will know what is appropriate. Maybe they both can receive the OBE award or something similar.
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Stoker knew what Hugo wanted before he could say, Stoker had to say his piece and set the table, He initiated contact and Hugo's desires were unleashed, They kissed and kissed, Barriers ended, Their shirts were opened for more exploration and touching> their hands moved lower. Stoker wanted more and said so. He had never had a gentleman before..."Besides,” he smiled again suggestively, his eyes twinkling, “lets get over talkin’…” What an unexpected and graphic, passionate growth in their relationship and real needs. Hugo is learning from an experienced partner. How far will they go? Will they now act differently towards each other and lower their cultural barriers? I am looking forward to seeing how they now relate.
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OMG--The terrorists must have off loaded onto the UK sub as the first 10 sailors have been evacuated onto the rescue vehicle to be transferred to the Aegis corporate ship. It will take 8 more runs to remove all but the last 18 people, including the captain, who. will remain as a skeleton crew. Andrew is staying and will leave with the last element being evacuated. Is he going to be saved? Will the terrorists begin their destruction of the boat before all of the possible crew can be evacuated? Might Andrew in the last batch notice the terrorists in their sinister gear with equipment and take action to confront them and start a battle with serious consequences? Or are the terrorists intending to hide from the crew and then leave explosives behind in the form of timed bombs and then leave in a final rescue sub trip so that they can live as the UK sub is blown up. If so, Andrew should be suspicious of the final 4 individuals in strange military gear who will leave the rescue vessel.
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I love all the good natured tickling. These guys are having fun. being tied up added a wonderful tension on the bare feet. Someone might think about blowing on the bare feet and maybe licking them. The photos should be amazing and worth framing and placing in albums.
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[Memory, Freshman Year, February] – Sharp, Bitter, Sour
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Freshman Year, February] – Sharp, Bitter, Sour
So Lyn needed to get over Brad having a girl over for sex. Alexander knows it bothers Lyn. Hmmm Alexander is very insightful.- 50 comments
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They woke up intertangled in a new area, Now, missing what was not on their person which distressed them Working the watch, they now found themselves on a mountain top in a large tent with scientific materials and a newspaper showing they were in the future. Wojciech was upset he was too familiar with Stoker and spoke harsh to him. He send Stoker out after food. Wojciech seems to have found a computer which mystified him. Stoker returned with hot tea,.Wojciech apologized to him for being harsh. They are lost and further way from their own time and place. I guess they will continue to stumble along. I hope they stay safe.
