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CSIS can send a team to recover an injured pilot. if they face US government opposition, Will can call Trump for humanitarian help. If Andrew is given to Abernathy, Will has authorized West to recover him using his men. It could be very risky to take this option
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Will takes command. He authorizes West to find Peter and Andrew. Andrew has flown a plane to Plattsburg and crashed in the US Will is ready for a war footing "Tell Abernathy in the only language he understands," Will said, his voice the calm, final note of a death knell. "Tell him the King of the North is done negotiating: this is war."
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What a wonderful, happy , ticklish, and loving couple. Alex and Casey are so compatible and caring for each other. They have just agreed to move in with each other. This is a delightful, optimistic holiday season story!
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Rick --shut up about your work with Adam ! He could be connected in some way to the powerful people who will be implicated in the case. Might he have been a customer of the boys and not want to be found out? Heck, even if he is not associated with the bad guys, he could be kidnapped and forced to spill the beans on where the boys are or used as a bargaining chip to try to get Rick to give up the location of the boys.
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Chapter 22 Bonus Snippet and Author's Note
akascrubber commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 22 Bonus Snippet and Author's Note
You are truly missed. I am so happy to learn that you have an active story being developed in your head, and it is "moving along pretty well." Hooray! I will be a grateful ready when you are ready. -
Blast curtains were pulled to protect the members of Parliament, The Phalanx close in weapons system as designed would defend against missile attacks at the last moment Will and the members stood firm and resolute. The Conservative Party members who supported the Father realized they were going to be sacrificed. It must influence their vote for the measure. This is a truly historic moment. The nation is watching. A vote of confidence is before the house. If Will is made the Prime Minister of a united nation, he should have a groundswell of popular support and mandate to end the Order's influence after these senseless attacks.
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Theo has become besotted with the two humans. He fears he cannot control himself and will become too sexually aggressive. Vince realizes Theo's problem and gives him a heavenly, extremely pleasing blowjob while Theo is in his human form in his bedroom. Hooray! Let's hope this takes the edge off Theo's pull and makes him want more. He has been without a real sexual release for too long.
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Chapter 22 Bonus Snippet and Author's Note
akascrubber commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 22 Bonus Snippet and Author's Note
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This was so astoundingly raw and over the top. All boundaries of decency were broken by attacking Parliament and trying to kill the children in the residence, The attacks failed to kill the children and stop the brave people in Parliament. Now, we wait to learn what is decided by the vote. Andrew is on his own mission to kill Abernathy in the US. Peter, Matt and Ned still need to be found.
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The Truth That Broke the Room
akascrubber commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in The Truth That Broke the Room
Caleb confessed trying to hold onto Silas, but he could not hold onto him . Slias was pulled away by a riptide. His body was found two days later. Shilo thought Caleb did not try to save Silas and let him die. Shiloh was wrong. What an emotional time. Will Shiloh forgive and no longer hate Caleb? Tristan gave Noah access to Shiloh's memories. Noah knew the pain and anger Shiloh felt and his need to peace and reconciliation. -
What a terrible shock--Lyn was alone at home. he was simply told his mom had died. He is lost after the funeral. Brad and Alexander are there to comfort him. What is to happen to him now? He is going to have lots of questions.
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The tension is rising on multiple points--Will some be saved while others are kidnapped? Andrew took more of the poisoned pills as he left the residence. Has Dr McLeod begun to activate the flight response? Will he seek her out and be sent on a terrible path in flight fighting more demons? Is he going to be lost for now? He is out of commission unable to help West or protect the kids for now, it seems. The honorable, ethical Dr Kinsley refused Dr McLeod's apparently official order to take control of the kids. Will Dr McLeod go around Dr Kinsely and send official forces to pick up the kids while the PM is tied up in Parliament? Who is left in the residence to refuse her with her when she shows up with written orders with police forces? Has the DG acted in a way to stop Gagnon and negate McLeod? What is going on? At least we know West and CSIS forces will be going after Peter and Matt and Ned. So far, neither Silas nor his crew know that CSIS is going to evacuate the mountain lodge. I hope Silas stay's ignorant
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I am expecting one of more spoilers that will create tension and draw us onto needing to read Book 3 to learn if the issues are resolved. Of course, I may be wrong. We will see in a few days.
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BTW--are you going to have Andrew triggered and flee and get lost as a cliffhanger at the end of Book 2? Will could be devastated just as he is made head of the national unity government.
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Totally risky and critical situations Is Andrew going to break? Gagnon asked that his fight risk be instigated. He knows what is destroying Andrew's internal control. Andrew is taking the pills that capture/control his mind. Can West act to contain him at the residence? Will took the unexpected risk of his career. He did not resign but asked for a national unity government from Parliament. It will surprise Parliament. He listened to the forceful reasoning of Caleb Henderson. Perhaps, Will is going to be helped win n his motion because the Conservative Party is leaderless and cannot organized a forceful resistance.
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This spy and mystery thriller set in a bitter cold, hostile wilderness will capture your attention and keep it. The CSIS is in the background. There are twists and turns and lots of violence with really bad guys lead by Wolf surprisingly trying to control the world's financial system who turn out to be facing 4 high school students aided eventually by El Coyote. You will want to find out how the two sides fight and who wins.
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Well done! Part realism, part fantasy Andrew Carter was told to fuck off--but I am sure he will not. Maybe, his help might be needed? The four boys are in love and are consummating their relationships and are moving to Australia to continue their high school education They will have a challenging complicated future and I look forward to reading about it
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Maybe Granger can find his next ship to command at the dockyards and St Vincent will owe him a favor after his help at the dockyards
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Juno--Elizabeth Danfield ?
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This tale has more twists and turns, For now, Will and the family are free from involvement. The Ortega family is behind the efforts. They are =mae they did not get to buy Buck Industries and hate Travis. The FBI is on them. Fellowes works for Ortega. They want to push Petrovic out Someone named Juno is the snitch on the Ortega family and their people I think Will and his family/friends need still to be careful. Happy Thanksgiving. You did not leave with a real cliffhanger and that is something to value.
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Renn has met two men who might show up later and injure him or more : Ytter Kazerbol and the upset Mungo Zdain is totally submissive to Renn who uses him as a fu..toy slapping and rough housing him using degrading names. Zdain thinks he deserves this harsh treatment. His father despises him and thinks he is defective. Zdain accepts this terrible label and receives BDSM pleasure from Renn. Renn is on the lookout for the meaning of the red comet. He hopes seers and wise men on the Misty Isles can help.
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Another reason to be thankful on this holiday, George was at his best! Granger and Daventry teamed up with the PM and foreign minister and it worked out as Granger predicted, Daventry will be the ambassador to Spain and Granger will make the introductions, Granger demanded two things as his price to help them and it involves the Navy. They agreed but told him he had to get the agreement from St Vincent. Granger got St Vincent to give Weston commend of a frigate and to promote Kingsdale to Commander and give him a command. Granger wanted a frigate to take him to and from Spain commanded by Weston. He is being given the Belvidera which is wonderful homecoming for Granger. St Vincent had two requests for Granger and he agreed, He will help him looking over the shipyards when he finishes his duties--and seeing a child is born--and will spy for the navy on the ships in three Spanish harbors, So it seems favors are asked and exchanged to the benefit of all...
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I hope Will can realize something is not right and Andrew is acting in a very unusual manner. He needs to get help for Andrew who might have even more extreme mood swings. Will might feel things are unnatural. Might Andrew tell him he is on medication to help him calm down and it is not helping him. The DG should be calling or seeing Will immediately to relate what Yani has told him. The head of CSIS should realize the mole is going to hurt Andrew without knowing what the medicine is, It description is not yet known so that is a direct clue it is malevolent.
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Helen and Rick made progress in the case against. Shae and Jimmy are together and safe. Jarvis had his hearing and was denied bail. Those connected to Javis gave away their identity. Jarvis looked fearful of the assistant commissioner and two thug like coppers with him. Rick tracked down a young man, Casey, who knew Jimmy and Shane and spilled the beans. The wo hugs wwer enforcers for Jarvis and the assistant commissioner was a client who liked kinky sex with the boys roleplaying with him as the headmaster using corporal punishment. Now, Rick needs to keep Casy safe and h get his testimony on the record. Are there any other high profile clients that might interfere? Is Jarvis in danger from being killed in jail ? Epstein in the US supposedly committed suicide awaiting sex charges.
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Bravo--Well Done So many heroic actions--Enrico was impressive and all of his new family acted effectively and responsibly Wolf was painfully taken out and left penniless. They left in the plane minutes before the Canadian authorities arrived to arrest the bad guys. Is Brian free of CSIS control? It is wonderful to hear that they all will continue in new stories
