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Act I - I Dreamed A Dream
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - I Dreamed A Dream
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Chapter 2 Accomplice (1/4)
akascrubber commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 2 Accomplice (1/4)
The sad painful public torture of the fox, Adam, reminded me of the gruesome drawing and quatering execution in Braveheart which was also meant as a warning to the masses---and failed. Adam's death might also fail to stop the cries for help. He signaled his reform/rebellion was not discovered. Now, we will see what happens. -
Act I - I Dreamed A Dream
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - I Dreamed A Dream
BTW--Notice the background given in the story---- Ray has no memory of his past. Love is involved. "Lost in the snow, a runaway with no memory stumbles into the path of a fierce protector. A fated encounter, a forbidden bond—can love break the chains of destiny?" -
Act I - I Dreamed A Dream
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - I Dreamed A Dream
Ray is distinctive. He smells Gabriel and his smell is captivating. Someone say this sounds like old fashiobed true mate stuff. But Gab says Ray smells nomal. Is his smell being masked? They leave to have sex in private. Ray is also a mystery. Gabe and others needs to investigate him. Ray will start with asking why other wolves were chasing him. -
So, will the outcome of the Admiral's meeting lead to new challenges? Luther is still in training and learning.
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I am worrried about Travis. The situation when he apears on the set could be tense and the comments might be nasty uness the director has learned he is in trouble. I hope Stef can act quickly enough to bring the hammer down on the director who needs to be replaced and fired before the bastard can hurt Travis. Will is going to be there to help Travis recover and move on after he experiences what happens on the set. Travis has a loving anchor that he needs. I am impressed how Will helped two friends/associates after Travis left. Sarah asked him to go to a LGBT meeting so she could find a female for sex. Then Finn who was mad at Will for leaving quickly when he thought they were going to have sex turned out to be needing saving from his domineering ex. Will made up a story saying he and Finn were going to have dinner and then walked away without a potential fight with a muscle bound ex. Let us see if they have a meal and then sex. Will is on track to end any bad mouthing by Finn and repair his image with upper classmen which he wanted.
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Cottontail is cut away from Xpress. The Live Feed Producer tried to place Jamie in a bad situation on screen and he seems to avoided the mess--so far Jamie cannot trust his producer
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Part One: Senior Table War
akascrubber commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Senior Table War
What a crazy, brutal contest. At least the right guys won. Now, let's find out about the aftermath.- 28 comments
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Act I - From Out Of The Mist
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - From Out Of The Mist
Gabriel thinks Ray is dangerous and can kill. Who is Ray then? Plus, Why cannot the wolves easily shift? -
Things are approachig a turning point. Some adults will leave and search for Plink. The youths will stay behind and work through their relationships
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Chapter 6 Curtain Up - FIN
akascrubber commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 6 Curtain Up - FIN
Will the dragons seek out Jack London and bring him into their schemes, He must be a psychic ? Luthe a very mad at the dutiez he has been given and go to the emperor directly. The empetor verballt attacks him af richter as mutts and incompetents. Lurther and Emperor fiht ancd the Emeror is hurt and defeated Th Council quickly sends a husky to save the emperor. Lurter relents and leaves .. The Husky is given a space ride with Luther Four questions--Who killed Richter? Luther does not know---Why was Luther's memory wiped of certain information?---What is this great conclusion that the council is expecting and what is Luther's role in the conclusion? -
Halloween and Travis’s Horror
akascrubber commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Halloween and Travis’s Horror
Selling stocks that have grown substantially grown requires a strategy and discipline. Along the way as the stock appreciates will should be looking for the merits of the stock and the political climate. Is it a long term hold like Meta/Facebook that will make him a billionaire many times over or should he sell it/giveit away in segments ? Will could avoid capital gains taxes on highly appreciated stock by giving it to a normal charity or his own foundation Tesla asumes it will receive government required credits for producing EV's. It exist because of favorable government actions. Before this time, Will would have noticed shifts from the top financial firms away from ESG investing and the rise of populist political sentiment. I assume he has sold part of his Tesla stock and may keep some for a long term hold or gifts, He may want to retain Meta/Facebook. -
Part One: My First Trip To Mars
akascrubber commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: My First Trip To Mars
Wishes were fullfilled for the,--I have wanted to loss you since I was eleven said Brandon Tyler was fucked and loved it. Brandon gave him permission to experiment and said he was open to much and would let him try anything and would tell him when he crissed a line. I expect Tyler's mind will run wild with possibilities.I bet Tyler will want lots more sex with Brandon How will they act towards each other in school? It is a test for them. Will Brandon give Tyler some advice? -
Chapter 5 The Pale Blue Dot
akascrubber commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 5 The Pale Blue Dot
There is so much in this chapter. Luther was a three time offender loser and was forced to join theNavy. He became Admiral Richter's orderly and was not a good one who tested Richter, But at one point he approcged the Adniral and found new sresses and pressures while the admiral was listening to music and ignoring him. The battle of wills revealed to both Luther was a very powerful psychic. Richter and the ship captain began an intensive brutal training for Luther Luther overheard Richter speaking to someone on the phone. He found out he was identified and purposely selected to be with Richter. Richter understood Luther would be his replacement. Luther was puzzled.He learned much later what his destinty was Two final surprises?Luther and Richter had developed very close , fullfilling sexual relationship. Richter mentioned that humans lived on Gaia about 2,000 years ago--this was news to Luther. -
Act I - Live And Let Die
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - Live And Let Die
So this is a romantic comedy ! I am intrigued and really want to see how this story plays out. -
Act I - Live And Let Die
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - Live And Let Die
So many mysteries-Gabe fought to save Ray and then seemingly lost him to a vampire . When the vampire became close enough, Ray surprised him. His smell, his blood captivated the vampire. Near death, the vampire asked for some drops of Ray's blood and Ray gave him some. The snowmobiler , Ray and Gabe drove away not seeing that after a while the vampire seemed to return to life. Who or what is Ray? Will the vampire search after him if he revives? Will Ray and Gabe reconnect and understand each other and become a couple strong enough to handle a vampire? -
Pembroke smelled Ryder as a wolf. He used the burning fragrance on purpose to mask his scent and hide who he really was--a city wolf who was likely an alpha and maybe the head of his own pack. But, he wanted to kill Ryder, not learn more about him. Ryder was a fool to him and a threat to him, not a mate. Even Pembrooke's secretary did not know he was a wolf and he did not want to disclose his wolf nature. Ryder seems to always luck out and not fall flat or be sent to a mental insitution. The fortune teller likely operates a fun scam, not threatening at all with probably the aim of making claims that needed payment to be fully revealed. Ryder's story to the guy is so outlandish that he could spot a deluded guy who is a mark for fleecing. Ryder is so trusting. He could be bilked out of all his money and be given very bad advice that would drive him back to Pembroke who will keep trying to kill him. If I were Pembroke. I would have the guy at the desk tell Ryder to meet him at a place out of sight where he would kill him and then dispose of his body.
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Halloween and Travis’s Horror
akascrubber commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Halloween and Travis’s Horror
methodwriter85 I think your reasoning about Jeremy is very sound. I expect Belonna has new respect for him, too. It looks like the replacement artist venue will be built with additional support. -
A well planned and executed start of their honeymoon--to a place where they can swim. They only are taking a mini-fleet to accompany their yacht! The love making will be extensive. I hope things remain calm and they have a warm, restful trip that will create lasting happy memories
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I am confused. Are Richter and Jack London two separate beings? Storm Wolf was spoken of as being dead. Jack London is a scholar on Lunar with no clear psychic qualities. Jack at the end wakes up with a deer in bed next to him. I hope things become clearer soon.
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Halloween and Travis’s Horror
akascrubber commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Halloween and Travis’s Horror
BTW, George Granger fucked Beau Bremmell and helped him learn how glorious a great bath was The winners of the costume contest in this present day probably had great sex afterwards to celebrate- 32 comments
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Halloween and Travis’s Horror
akascrubber commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Halloween and Travis’s Horror
Travis opened up and revealed his deepest, dark secret. His dad fucked him weekly till he moved on to his daughter, Taylor. Will was floored`and had no idea of the trauma that Travis experienced. His rape by the director opened up his repressed memory, Travis knew he needed Will and directed his plane to Cambridge. They had an honest, open discussion. Will requested that Travis get professionl help to work through his issues. Travis begged off and wants to be with Will and his comforting nature, Will agreed that Tavis can stay with him till he is due on the show set. Will could be the right person at the right time to helpmTravis adapt. Seeing the director could really upset Travis. I hope Will Is able to connect with his family elders and come up with a plan to destroy the diirector in time to save Travis from being fired or blackballed as the director promised.- 32 comments
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Marc acted carefully and wisely to address Adam and his insecurities. He thoughtfully over and over explaimed he loved Adam for eternity Adam finally got it. Plus the glorious ceremony sealed the deal in public.
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The downtrodden carnovores are collared and sujucated by the herbervores . But one leading psychic antelope located a psychic carnovore and helps him and his partner live. The both find their way to Lunar and will be asked to fight for the Federation. Richter is known to fight for the Empire.
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Hearst is pisssed at his brother. At least the pic he took did not reveal he was in the bunnny suit. If his brother figures out his role, then all hell will break loose.It appears the campus and TV showill know that Jamie is into furries. Melinda told Jamie he was getting into something with the show he cannot leave no matter what happens. His fate is tied into what the show dpes to him,.She is more perceptive than Jamie. Did she plant a seed of doubt in him? Who else can he trust for advice?
