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Lee Wilson

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  1. Hmm, I like both of these.
  2. Somehow I missed this. Perhaps my gay flea falling in love with a spider will fit both.
  3. It definitely doesn’t have to be horror. I’ve been considering a comedy about a gay flea that gets kicked off his dog, runs away to a flea circus, and falls in love with a spider. Heads up, it won’t be a happy ending for one of the main characters.
  4. Lee Wilson

    Hello Strangers

    Definitely of Italian descent. My favorite too.
  5. I'm not sure if Jake is hesitating to fight back laughter or because of simple disbelief. As I was to find out, it was pretty rare that an almost fourteen-year-old boy wouldn't know about jerking off. "Sorry. I got caught off-guard with that question. Um, it's hard to believe a fourteen-year-old doesn't know what that is. I guess that's why you prefaced it with it potentially being silly. It's actually more sad than silly." "Well, if it makes it any better, I won't be fourteen for abou
  6. Lee Wilson

    Hello Strangers

    I suspect as you get further along, more will be familiar.
  7. Thanks. I don’t think I felt skewered, just concerned because I disappointed my readers. Yeah, some prefer the original ending, and some hated it, especially pertaining to ‘Rocked to the Core.’ Hence the heads up in this one that there were two disparate endings.
  8. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 6

    I had a suspicion that maybe Lucas forced Owen to hand over his phone to send the message himself, but re-reading that piece, it doesn't sound like that's the case. How far away does dad live? If he's in another town, maybe Neil can go live with him and change schools. Yeah, he'll miss Sammy, but they can keep in contact outside of Lucas' purview.
  9. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 6

    So, mom knows for sure. Dad has been called in for the rescue, just in time it appears. Two weeks away from Lucas and his minions could make a huge difference in Neil's life. Not likely, but hopefully Lucas got a longer suspension, or better yet, expelled. I'm afraid for his grandmother, with his temper, Lucas could do just about anything if she tries to discipline him. Although a simple assault with no real damage sending Lucas to juvie might be the best solution.
  10. Lee Wilson

    Hello Strangers

    Yet is correct. He will learn and use much better cuss words over the course of the story. Thanks for the kudos on the name. Ancestry.com may not agree (8% Italian my ass), but I like using Italian names being 3/4 Italian myself. Others that I've used in the past, is Arturo Lamonica, and his father Luigi (Louis) Lamonica. Carlo Marini, I suppose the list goes on.
  11. Lee Wilson

    Hello Strangers

    I still have emails of your comments on other stories on that site, so it is very possible you read this one as well. I'm the same way, I can read books multiple times and things may seem familiar during a subsequent reading, but overall, a lot of details seem new. The Italian spelling police may very well be on to you though. The proper spelling is capice.
  12. Lee Wilson

    Finders Keepers

    Thanks. And thanks for the assistance.
  13. You're welcome. Strange was intentional, glad you liked it.
  14. Lee Wilson

    Hello Strangers

    They make 1x3's? I've heard of 1x6's, and I suppose that would hurt more, if not permanently damage. Yes, resist. I hope to move reasonably quickly. Even my standard every 3 days will make it 9 weeks to the end.
  15. Lee Wilson

    Hello Strangers

    All true, but I have no plans to allow Uncle Boob much latitude. He's pretty much a non-person from here on.
  16. Lee Wilson

    Hello Strangers

    Objection! Asked and answered. Like right above your comment.
  17. Lee Wilson

    Hello Strangers

    Neither did I, that's why I put Carmela only in charge of it. Besides, it was her brother that left the trust. It goes a long way. Not as long as some, but it will end up somewhere around 75,000 words away from where it started.
  18. Lee Wilson

    Hello Strangers

    Thanks. I got a lot of positive comments about the story when I posted it on n---y. Since the changes aren't too drastic, I hope folks will like this version too.
  19. I hate the 4th of July. This past fourth, the world turned upside-down. Almost 7 weeks later it turned inside-out. I see my life in three phases. 1) Before July 4th, 2) The 6 weeks and 6 days between that and August 21st, and 3) August 21st to now, just after Thanksgiving after my 14th birthday. Oh, I guess I should tell you who I am: I'm Domenico Martini, and I've been at the Stephen Walsh School for Boys since that August day. That's where I'll start the story, but you'll find out more about p
  20. Domenico Martini is entering high school at a boarding school, necessary due to circumstances from earlier that summer. He learns a lot about school subjects, life, himself, and a whole lot more. He'd always liked boys more than girls, but never had a chance to do anything about it - maybe not totally gay, and he wouldn't be sure if you asked him about it, until arriving at the school, that is. This story originally appeared elsewhere. It has been updated to make the characters meet GA's guidelines. Additional enhancements may appear as I go through revamping it.
  21. Lee Wilson

    Finders Keepers

    I remember something from my younger days where to 86 something was to make it go away. Similar idea.
  22. Lee Wilson

    Finders Keepers

    Thanks. Glad you, and others, enjoyed it.
  23. Lee Wilson

    Finders Keepers

    Um. OK.
  24. Lee Wilson

    Finders Keepers

    Or at least to drag Devlin away from the microwave.
  25. Lee Wilson

    Finders Keepers

    What makes you think I can't write it from the dog's perspective? Plenty of other characters appeared in the subsequent sections...
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