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  1. Lee Wilson
    Must be.
  2. Lee Wilson
    Storms are mostly mild from here on. I think, at least I’m not remembering anything too bad. Getting caught is over too. Art’s dads are great. Seth? Yes, we’ll see.
  3. Lee Wilson
    The boys go back to school, and another school-week passes without much excitement. But the weekend arrives with Sam having a sleepover at Virgil's Friday night. We turn into voyeurs once again to watch the goings on. Sam/Virgil "I'm glad your mom let me come over for a sleepover tonight. It's been a while since we did this." "Yeah, not since the last sleepout of the summer did we sleep together. Plenty of other times we 'got together' though, hee hee." "Yeah. So, Virge, do y
  4. Lee Wilson
    Definitely dumb laws everywhere. But comment away, even almost 3 years later, I appreciate them.
  5. Lee Wilson
    No traditions now, but growing up, mom always made ham and an egg-based cheese she’d call cidec, but googling, it seems to really be called Hrudka. Earworms? Too many to mention.
  6. Lee Wilson
    Thanks. I can be surprising. More of that is coming. It’s all new for Stephen, so he doesn’t want to commit too strongly just yet. That won’t last long.
  7. Lee Wilson
    Wow, what an asshat Alex is. Peru might be a big mistake, for both Alex and Cody. Alex mouths off to the wrong person surrounded by Peruvians, he may come home in a box. Methinks Cody will eventually regret not staying with Oliver.
  8. Lee Wilson
    All good comments. Aside from counseling, I don’t dwell on Bobby’s feelings. Peter? I don’t go there much more either. My thinking is maybe the parents know but keep it quiet. Obviously Scott doesn’t based on his reactions in chapter 2. Loose ends? Not Willie and Davey; but a couple is involved.
  9. Lee Wilson
    Definitely ideal candidates.
  10. Lee Wilson
    Quite right, even, bloody well right.
  11. Lee Wilson
    Got it. No unexpected breakups. Bobby will be fine. I think.
  12. Lee Wilson
    Teens I usually just send off to jail and kill them off later, often in an epilogue. Yeah, the tanker truck crashing the cult’s admin building was sweet. It was however a variation of a bad guy’s end requested by @Summerabbacat.
  13. Lee Wilson
    Yeah, there’s a lot of that going around. Oh, wait, mine told me to leave.
  14. Lee Wilson
    Had to put a little scare into you all. Yeah, Bobby will need time to recover, but a full recovery looks promising. I initially wrote this before I started getting nasty to my characters. I’ll have to make sure they get a mention in the epilogue.
  15. Lee Wilson
    Thanks. But don't quit your day job.
  16. Lee Wilson
    Art - With Dad #2 - Winston Stevenson "Hi dad. How was work?" "Stressful. I had to deal with assault charges on two kids today." "Was this about Bobby Lassiter?" "Oh, right. I forgot you know his brother. Yes." "Davey Aranson and Willie LeDeuce?" "Right again." "They going to jail for a long time?" "Well, unfortunately at 14 and 15 they're too young for traditional jail. But they are going away to juvenile hall for a while. At least until they're 18. At th
  17. Lee Wilson
    Thanks. Jeff runs hot and cold for a bit. Sometimes it only takes once.
  18. Lee Wilson
    Congrats, @Jeff Burton!
  19. Lee Wilson
    She may have given me a few story ideas, but the nastiness and demented characters are all me.
  20. Lee Wilson
    That is left up to the reader's imagination in this story. Once incarcerated, Willie and Davey are forgotten. Unfortunately, too true. I took Italian as my language elective in high school, 2 years IIRC, but most of it is gone. Any Italian here was provided by Dr. Google. And yes, the real person behind Lee Wilson is 3/4 Italian, although not according to ancestry dot com. I like to say I have a quart of Scotch in me as well, even though I won't drink the corresponding liquor.
  21. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 41 S3

    Lee Wilson commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 41 S3

    I’m surprised any of them can still stand up after all that. Even younger, I’d have been wiped out way before the Double Shoshone. Fun chapter though!
  22. Lee Wilson
    Yes, Pete and Alex would have been good even without Michael’s heads up. Leon is indeed very protective of Stephen, we’ll see a couple more examples of that in future chapters.
  23. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 21

    Lee Wilson commented on Justin4Fun's story chapter in Chapter 21

    Excellent way to bring them together. Now some unsolicited advice. I would mark this story as complete because it ends one journey. Book 2, when you can get to it, will be another journey the four boys take together. I’m including Danny and Naiche if it wasn’t obvious. This accomplishes at least two things. Your readers who are so inclined can provide reviews, all 5 star I would venture to guess. Secondly, it breaks you free from the pressures of completing a story. Starting a new one is always a rush for me. I’ve done a few “book 2s,” ( not to mention a 3, 4, and 5). It being ”new” can provide a breath of fresh air, so to speak, and make its writing easier. Ignore my rudeness or overstepping if you desire, I won’t be hurt.
  24. Lee Wilson
    Since it isn’t @weinerdog doing the hoping, your wish is my command! Heehee
  25. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 20

    Lee Wilson commented on Justin4Fun's story chapter in Chapter 20

    Ok, so a flashback before the re-meet. You really know how to prolong the pins and needles “agony.”
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