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Lee Wilson

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  1. All possibilities. Further details forthcoming on some of this. Not so far along that I can’t address others that I haven’t yet. Agreed about returning them ‘home.’ It’ll be a fresh start for all them.
  2. That is my hope as well.
  3. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    A sad story, but life is often sad. Another song I think describes Carver:
  4. Nope. Again, reasons will be provided at a later date. Hey, I had something to do with that too, you know! 😁 As it should.
  5. I can imagine there are CPS horror stories from all over the place. I only made them a little bad. They're not the true villains of this story. And I already mentioned Steve's mouth getting taped when he stuttered too much. I guess I wasn't subtle enough about Jill's treatment. But so far, it's just speculation. As I said above, there's more on that in a few chapters. I'm happy you think it's excellent. Maybe I'll keep doing this for a while. I'm already inside the top 100 authors by total word count. Onward and upward!!
  6. And a perfectly valid worry it is.
  7. Damn, another one that's been peeking at my manuscript. Horrors, yes, bailing out, hmmmm. Although, I suppose what sooner might be, definitely not the next few chapters, anyway.
  8. I've even included a horror story about CPS. I'm not hitting them hard this time, aside from being understaffed and taking shortcuts, that actually benefit our main characters.
  9. We're taking an old military position on that one, Don't Ask, Don't Tell. But I will say there will be a twist later with respect to that situation.
  10. You'll hear a little more about Nick and Steven's stories in the next chapter. Like @weinerdog's school question, Jill's story is a bit of a longer wait.
  11. In this case, I made it go fast due to the excuse they're understaffed. I honestly don't know exactly how it may or may not work. A little research, a lot of imagination. I think you can already tell things get moving quickly by the next chapter title.
  12. I kind of pictured all the kids with dark hair. I don't think I've given them any specific physical attributes.
  13. It was Steve's stuttering. Nope, it isn't that, but you'll have to wait a couple chapters for the answer. Probably legal, but I don't think it's going to go that way.
  14. You're welcome. I think it slows down a little for the next couple chapters. Still lots happening though.
  15. Brendan and Greg went into his office to do some more detailed house searches, and a little making out. No matter what search he did, Brendan couldn't find anything close to what he could afford. At least in the same general area as he lived. Even expanding the search by five, ten, or twenty miles, nothing looked like a possibility. If he could put twice as much down, he could swing it, but where was he going to find another forty thousand dollars? Greg decided to leave and let Brendan continue
  16. Only way to find these answers is keep reading. 😁
  17. Lee Wilson

    Take Me Chapter 1

    Um, OK. I’m not sure “The End” is quite accurate, not to mention the action/adventure genre. I found it to be a little slow. I was always waiting for something substantial to happen, and just when it did, it’s over.
  18. My parents had a dachshund when I was little.
  19. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 67

    Diego and Steve’s wedding, aka, a night at the improv. Sorry to see it end. But… next summer? Something wrong with next week? Hehe.
  20. That would be typical of me, wouldn’t it?
  21. It is, or was. I’m a weekend night owl.
  22. Thanks much. I might be getting better as I go.
  23. I gotta be me.
  24. Am I predictable?
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