Um, OK. I’m not sure “The End” is quite accurate, not to mention the action/adventure genre. I found it to be a little slow. I was always waiting for something substantial to happen, and just when it did, it’s over.
Complicit. Nice word. Not nearly strong enough.
What? The coincidences already seen aren’t enough? OK, at least one more.
Payback. A very tame word in the world of my villains.
Whether true or not geographically, it is very true inside my head. Precedent already set in at least 2 previous stories, so I don’t think it’s much of a spoiler.
Big changes are coming indeed. Glad you’re loving it.
I’ll get to today’s comments a little at a time on yard work breaks. I think your red will tone down some. Again, as I said about the religious aspect, more to come on the abuse, but you will be waiting a bit for both.
Well played. You had me fooled. So fooled that even after the disclosure of the nightmare, I was expecting them to be somewhere in Mexico, having taken the kidnapping route themselves that was mentioned a couple chapters ago.
But you made it turn out right. And this passage was awesome:
It took a little while to get into the story, but it finally hooked me. Very enjoyable.
I do have one nit-picky item. It’s Counselor Troi, not Troy. You never want to tick off a Trekker. We’ll sic the Klingons on you. 😄