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Lee Wilson

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  1. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 45

    Maybe he can just fall down the stairs and break both hips, and both arms, and both collarbones, and both ankles… OK, maybe that’s a bit much. Nobody needs to hurt him, but Karma can.
  2. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 45

    Not if it’s silent. Threats can’t be detected by video alone.
  3. Thanks for the positive feedback. I’ve gotten more of that than I ever expected.
  4. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 45

    Join us next episode when Bryan’s antics cause Calvin to hit him with dozens of witnesses. Thus sending Calvin to jail. Hey, I can dream. Loved the way Bryan pushed Calvin’s buttons.
  5. Possible, but with the police report so heavily stacked against Mason… well, I guess you’ve found out by now. Also possible, but sometimes the bad guys don’t get any breaks.
  6. Sure sign of a good story; leave ‘em wanting more.
  7. They say revenge is sweet. I wonder if that will be true in this case.
  8. And you’re fortunate enough to be able to find that out without waiting days between chapters!
  9. Thanks much. And to think it was an idea out of the blue. At least putting it all together.
  10. The answer is right around the corner.
  11. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 44

    Damn. Then why do I always keep looking after I find it?
  12. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 44

    Like the Ron White joke about the airplane losing an engine and being delayed. "Hey man, if one of the engines goes out, how far will the other one take us?" I look at him. "All the way to the scene of the crash!"
  13. Lee Wilson

    Prologue

    Hope you like it.
  14. No, you subconsciously understood what I wanted and let me have it. LOL Maybe we both need an extra read through going forward. It might slow it down, but maybe a beta reader would be helpful.
  15. I like this view. That’s why the smile disappeared quickly. That and Chase turned around moments later.
  16. I won’t. I’m more than willing to admit I’m not perfect.
  17. Yeah, I suppose I could have handled that differently, but it made sense for what was coming.
  18. I guess that’s something. I didn’t think it was too obvious, glad it wasn’t Always possible I suppose. Makes sense. I was figuring they were in their rooms doing homework or something. Lost a day? No, saying it was Monday would have given away the twist. You guys knew he looped out Sunday morning and thought he’d gone to bed Saturday night. He just doesn’t know it yet.
  19. How will he handle it? We shall soon see.
  20. I could definitely see how you'd take it that way. Of course, I didn't see that while I was writing it. Perhaps he still was feeling the effects of his first patient's suicide, and it clouded his judgement. More likely, I simply didn't think that scene through well enough.
  21. I felt great, leaving work after that appointment. I started down the path of getting Steve comfortable with who he is, and I also tricked Ed into realizing he wasn't as tolerant as he thought he was. The kids noticed my good cheer when I picked them up from daycare. The conniving little devils decided to take advantage of it. They whispered quietly in the back seat. It didn't take long before I found out what they wanted. I guess Billy lost the virtual coin toss. Or maybe it was Rochambeau
  22. I remember the first step Call it season number one I didn't think it was bad Just something done for fun I was young, she was younger Show me yours, I'll show you mine We had no idea it was wrong But in a flash, it wasn't fine We, interrupted by a mother She, showing a lack of class Spun me 'round to face away and spanked me on the ass It was much later then, and time for season two The boys and I were naked 'Twas not much else to do Perhaps al
  23. A short one telling the story of how someone might discover they’re gay.
  24. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 2

    I would have liked one more chapter too, but ending how it did left us to use our imaginations about their future.
  25. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 2

    Nice story. Although I was a lot like the Adam in chapter 1, he was a lot luckier than I ever was in chapter 2.
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