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Revisiting the Visit, and Back Home
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Revisiting the Visit, and Back Home
Thanks. Sorry you had a father like that. I know if one of my kids was gay, they’d get all the emotional support they needed. -
As usual, great job. It may be covered in one of the other stories in this world, but I suspect Max has a history of flying off at the handle. His apology to Stacy led me to believe this. Post when you can, don’t let our whining and crying about it deter you from doing what you need to do. We’ll wait. To everyone, Happy Holidays, I’ll keep it generic in case others celebrate something else. Safe and happy new year.
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Another Psycho Visit and Finally a Breakthrough
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Another Psycho Visit and Finally a Breakthrough
we are the champions or keep yourself alive? -
Another Psycho Visit and Finally a Breakthrough
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Another Psycho Visit and Finally a Breakthrough
Good for you. I want to see lots of hearts on this comment from my readers!!! I mean JJ’s post. -
Monday Evening September 18 It's a little too noisy to have a quiet conversation on a plane. Jeremy waited until we got home, and Adam was in bed to share details about his visit with the asshole. His word, not mine. Although after hearing what happened, I could hardly disagree. "You were happy the whole way home. How did the visit go?" "Oh, it was glorious. On the way there, I stopped at a drugstore to pick up some gauze and tape to cover my right hand. I wrapped two fingers and
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I vote for whatever works best for you @Mancunian - You're the boss here. Oh, and your assistant boss @raven1
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I can’t use the quote feature, so I’ll just copy and paste. There are no tears in this chapter so I hope you have saved money by not having to buy tissues, lol There is such a thing as happy tears. But I didn’t need any tissues. It’s the first day of my Christmas vacation so I read the chapter while lying in bed. The sheet worked just fine, thank you very much. Chapter 12 will follow very soon, when do you think it should be posted? The site allows a new chapter every 24 hours. Why is this even a question. 😃 Great job once again. Happy holidays everyone. 🎄🎉
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Getting Closer, and Football
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Getting Closer, and Football
Indeed. Glad you saw the intended humor in it. -
Another Psycho Visit and Finally a Breakthrough
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Another Psycho Visit and Finally a Breakthrough
Missed this one. Thanks centexhairysub. Agreed about the accommodating part. Minimal spoiler, next chapter we'll find out Andy's still in the same class. Therapy will continue. How much of it I include is a question. Perhaps there will be a relapse of sorts. -
No. I said her stories was the influence for the plot. There's actually no linkage between the two/three. Yeah, it does get bad - just read on, Hehe.
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Getting Closer, and Football
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Getting Closer, and Football
Yep. As I explained in a previous comment, it was just Roy's perception that they'd take it badly. Yes, it's set in, this is really the town's name, Cumming, GA. Roy's picture is at the bottom of the prologue. I was able to upload it there, so I didn't use a link, but here it is: Facebook Hmm, you're right. I didn't mention it earlier. That's what I get for editing from my laptop sometimes, and sometimes my phone using Dropbox. Must have lost that sentence in a transfer. Once again, you're reading ahead. What do you think might "a few airheads" implies? Maybe what you thought, maybe not. -
Getting Closer, and Football
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Getting Closer, and Football
Yes. That would be helpful, but because Roy didn't recognize it, it may not be completely controllable. Cool. Thanks. -
Thursday I went over to Cory's house Tuesday, and he came over here yesterday. We're spending a lot of time together. That's OK for both him and me. Neither of us has any other friends. Cory initially said not too many friends, but since then, he's come clean and said he didn't have any. That made me pretty sad. I mean, it's kind of expected for me. Moving late in the summer, no-one else living close by that I'd found yet. We're both happy we found the other. Well, happy I found him. But he
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Law, Finances, Real Estate, and More Bonding
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Law, Finances, Real Estate, and More Bonding
True on awkward, but I'm not going to nail Dylan very hard, at least no anytime soon. -
Law, Finances, Real Estate, and More Bonding
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Law, Finances, Real Estate, and More Bonding
I'm trying to expand my vo-cab-u-la-ry with four syllable words. Oooh. I just type a fiver. -
Agree that things are going well. I'm just worried they're going too well and something bad is about to happen. I love the interaction among the characters, it makes the story feel real. Good job, once again. Is it Friday yet?
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Law, Finances, Real Estate, and More Bonding
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Law, Finances, Real Estate, and More Bonding
I did, but dezgo.com really did all the work. -
Law, Finances, Real Estate, and More Bonding
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Law, Finances, Real Estate, and More Bonding
I tried to get him uglier, but after a number of attempts, I just went with what I thought was the best image. Zach reappearing did enter my mind. We shall see where I go with it. No. Rocked occurs in Davie, Florida, where this one takes place in a fictional town, Brumfeld, in Pennsylvania, midway between Pittsburgh and Erie. I used it in two of my stories on nifty and decided to revisit it. But I used "is" when mentioning Bill, and was for the other two: "Bill Gates is the co-founder of Microsoft. Steve Jobs was the co-founder of Apple. I'm sure you've heard of both those companies." "Yep. Mom's company was bought by Microsoft. She got a lot of money from that. And the Hawk guy?" "Stephen Hawking was a physicist and probably one of the smartest men to have ever lived. He was also disabled but didn't let that stop him." -
Law, Finances, Real Estate, and More Bonding
Lee Wilson posted new chapter in Before And After the Divorce
Friday I got a call from Lacy's lawyer. It was time to discuss the will. She set up an appointment for that evening after finding out I was going back to work Monday. Dad went home for the weekend, but was coming back on Monday, so I'd be unable to leave Dominic with him for the meeting. She said it wouldn't be a problem bringing Dominic along. Since I'd scanned through the will myself, I pretty much knew what was going to happen, but I'd be able to ask her questions about how some of the t- 21 comments
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Another Psycho Visit and Finally a Breakthrough
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Another Psycho Visit and Finally a Breakthrough
Life is never perfect. Asshats do, unfortunately, exist. I have an idea about that topic. We’ll maybe see it next chapter. Big guy, strong, I figured it’d be funny to give him aerophobia. Whatever happens, it’ll be better than the first way I wrote that section. I’d killed his parents. -
Normalcy Moves Aside for Anger, or, Fuck Suspensions
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Normalcy Moves Aside for Anger, or, Fuck Suspensions
Thanks for reading and commenting. I try to make it happily ever after for at least some of the main characters. Like you said, it often doesn’t in real life, so I also add a touch of tragedy as well. -
Another Psycho Visit and Finally a Breakthrough
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Another Psycho Visit and Finally a Breakthrough
Have you been reading ahead again? Good line. I think I'll use it. -
Another Psycho Visit and Finally a Breakthrough
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Another Psycho Visit and Finally a Breakthrough
Could be. I haven't really thought out Andy's role. It's not going to be a friendly visit. If you remember, some chapters ago Jeremy said something to the effect that it would annoy his father to know his money paid for their condo. An annoying visit would be kind. -
Another Psycho Visit and Finally a Breakthrough
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Another Psycho Visit and Finally a Breakthrough
Yeah, I needed to add a little drama. But nothing too terrible. Yet. -
Friday August 25 Fortunately, Dr. Wayne was able to squeeze us in. So, at 9:30, we're walking into Dr. Wayne's office. We sat down right away. "Hello Adam. This must be Jeremy. Hello to you and Derek too. Your uncle told me the dreams were getting worse?" "Yes. Last night my two uncles were in it too." "Can you tell me what happened in the last dream?" Adam told her about all of us dying by falling into a frozen lake, and him being left alone. "Did you see Rosa yest
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