Like the Ron White joke about the airplane losing an engine and being delayed. "Hey man, if one of the engines goes out, how far will the other one take us?" I look at him. "All the way to the scene of the crash!"
No, you subconsciously understood what I wanted and let me have it.
LOL
Maybe we both need an extra read through going forward. It might slow it down, but maybe a beta reader would be helpful.
I guess that’s something. I didn’t think it was too obvious, glad it wasn’t
Always possible I suppose.
Makes sense.
I was figuring they were in their rooms doing homework or something.
Lost a day? No, saying it was Monday would have given away the twist. You guys knew he looped out Sunday morning and thought he’d gone to bed Saturday night. He just doesn’t know it yet.
I could definitely see how you'd take it that way. Of course, I didn't see that while I was writing it. Perhaps he still was feeling the effects of his first patient's suicide, and it clouded his judgement. More likely, I simply didn't think that scene through well enough.
I felt great, leaving work after that appointment. I started down the path of getting Steve comfortable with who he is, and I also tricked Ed into realizing he wasn't as tolerant as he thought he was. The kids noticed my good cheer when I picked them up from daycare. The conniving little devils decided to take advantage of it. They whispered quietly in the back seat. It didn't take long before I found out what they wanted.
I guess Billy lost the virtual coin toss. Or maybe it was Rochambeau
I remember the first step
Call it season number one
I didn't think it was bad
Just something done for fun
I was young, she was younger
Show me yours, I'll show you mine
We had no idea it was wrong
But in a flash, it wasn't fine
We, interrupted by a mother
She, showing a lack of class
Spun me 'round to face away
and spanked me on the ass
It was much later then,
and time for season two
The boys and I were naked
'Twas not much else to do
Perhaps al
I'll have to look for a place to have them donate a dollar or two. 🤑
I see myself in a lot of them. I'm not as nice as it appears.
No argument here. Prejudice is prejudice. Unless it's simple stupidity, I have no tolerance for it whatsoever.
Well, they're all doctors, so they need to spend their money on something if they don't do drugs.
This story will likely be very light on sex. Gotta "stick it in" somewhere.
The world is full of hypocrites.
I said most people don't hate ...
He had the impresion, obviously false, that he would remain with his son, so the gayness factor didn't worry him.
Short and sweet. I think the comment I left says enough:
A touching story of a friendship that hit some bumps, but ended up with love. It deserves all 5 stars it got.
Even later to the party. I’d have added an epilogue that gave Brett exactly what he deserved. I won’t go into any details, but suffice to say, what he did to Josh would be nothing compared to what I’d give him.
Regardless, a touching story of a friendship that hit some bumps, but ended up with love. It deserves all 5 stars it got.
I considered the sad emoji, but decided on love. Even though the story so far had its sad points, the end of the chapter is looking up. Off to read chapter 2 now.