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13 will be published in 35 minutes, the next four, I’m targeting every second day.
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Some Surprising Turns of Events
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Some Surprising Turns of Events
Well, we don't know exactly what he put in his cover letter, nor exactly what the job post included. That, and I guess he figured being on the inside for a while changes one's perspective. And, hey, it's fiction. 😀 There really aren't too many of them anymore. The 70's are over. That was experience. The practice came before. 😁 No, I would guess as a real estate attorney he probably made somewhere between a third and half of the new offer. Firing a guy because he lost a case to an important client's son, yeah, that's client loyalty. We'll find out more about SIlas in the coming chapters. There will be one comment later on that would be open to a wide range of interpretation. Yep. Book smart, not street smart, nor overly endowed with common sense. -
When is a boy/girlfriend ever not troublesome? I believe that chance will come. Maybe not exactly as expected. Not really. The news is thrust upon him and he's just reacting. If you recall, he'd previously said that everybody in there would be better companionship than Watson. Oops. Although, I did indicate the Warden was anal, so maybe he thinks he has to say it. He's out, and essentially told the lawyer to fuck off. That would make me assume my job was done. I know I wouldn't want my resume in the cloud. There's probably already more information on the net about me than I'd be comfortable with. I'm not putting more there on purpose. Fred is the real estate lawyer. Stepane, he never told me what he did, he died too soon. 😁 Yeah, like I mentioned in the previous chapter's comments; emotions not my strong suit. Not sure if you mixed them up here. Granted Watson's expertise may not be murder, but as a PD he would have to know something about it. Again, Fred was the real estate lawyer. Exactly. Brains + Brawn will rule for sure. Lawyers are just so easy to pick on.
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Formal Meetings With the Warden
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Formal Meetings With the Warden
Yeah. Never thought about that. Nah, I tried to make him awfully stupid. Love is blind, apparently. 10 after this one, yes. Patience, this will be addressed soon. Stockholm Syndrome - I've heard the term, but didn't really know what it is. After looking it up, yeah, it may have started out that way. -
More Time or More Waiting?
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Time or More Waiting?
True, but something clicked in Mo right away. I would say that is accurate. Perhaps Sean didn't make a great first impression, so Mo didn't make any kind of protection offer. Not really. I just thought it was a nice touch. Yeah, that's definitely on me. I've mentioned it before, but I'm not very good at sharing my emotions. I has shown up in my characters numerous times. Yes. Reputation is everything. -
There are actual federal guidelines for wrongful imprisonments. Not all states follow them. Texas does. Hopefully for Fred’s sake it isn’t all of them. But then not everyone is gay. It’s hard to distinguish intent from incompetence.
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Well, like Fred said when accepting Kyle’s invite, he didn’t have any friends in the area. Yeah, I showed my age there with old Dino.
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Silas seems to have opened Pandora’s box. Will there be more impacts?
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You sir, are a carpenter. You hit the nail right on the head.
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It sure is possible.
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Thanks True Very possible 29 hours, 12 minutes.
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It took another two weeks, but Fred got an email from the appellate court, requesting, oddly enough, only legal representation presence on Monday December eighteenth to review both cases, in two weeks. As expected, Sebastian and Karter were copied. He was reading the email for about the twentieth time when they walked in. Karter obviously saw the email, he was very cheery, "Good morning Fred." "Good morning Karter, Sebastian." Sebastian simply nodded a greeting. He let his boss dr
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This is a very interesting story. The characters feel real. There are twists and turns all along the way. There is plenty of interaction and action between the characters. The only thing that prevented a fifth star from my perspective was the constant change of character focus from chapter to chapter. Maybe it's just me, but I tended to lose track of which characters previously did what three or four chapters back. Regardless of that fact, it is still a good read. If your reading comprehension is better than mine, and I know mine is bad, so yours probably is, that won't be a roadblock for you. Perhaps a binge read would have worked better for me. Read it!!
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Chapter 34 The Lighthouse
Lee Wilson commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 34 The Lighthouse
No worries. My reading comprehension is for shit, so it may not have been an issue for anybody else. One positive about shitty comprehension, I can read stories/books multiple times and not remember what's going to happen. Needless to say, it's a negative in my writing; I have to re-read multiple times before it sinks in enough to not screw something up later. 😊 -
Both of the last two points are right on. I suppose it was possible the guard, Dennison, noticed the interaction between the two men and offered a suggestion. Could have gone either way. Perhaps I could have delved deeper into Stephane's character. That would also be a possibility. If they had been married, it would have been different.
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Chapter 34 The Lighthouse
Lee Wilson commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 34 The Lighthouse
Mixed emotions. I'm kind of sad to see it end, but also was getting lost among the multitude of characters as the story went on. I set some recommendations, but really wish there was one for "Confusing." Also, don't forget to mark it Complete so it can be reviewed. -
@Zuri, lots to respond to there Grudgingly, perhaps. But not necessarily willingly. Yeah, probably closer to three, but obviously Mark isn't the best lawyer. Yeah, I never really addressed this. Let's just assume his family is either dead or far away. Yeah, I guess in a way. True, but this particular guard isn't the most useful tool in the shed.
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The Verdict, Sentence, and Off to Rosharon
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Verdict, Sentence, and Off to Rosharon
I would say not. This interaction was between Bully and Mark Watson, and quietly at that, I would imagine. The murder one charge would normally come with a death sentence. There was enough doubt among the jury that it would never have been unanimous. For Bully, we must wait and see. That's been one of my faults for a long time. I try to do better, but yeah, the courtroom is generally a back and forth between two people. I would say vers, based on activities in later chapters. True, but what happens if that asset is freed? Even serving his maximum, Fred would be out five years before Mo. Yeah, nothing's always as it seems anymore. Like I said, completely conclusive is the only time I would see it used. This gives me a thought for story #2 I have in the queue. Live long and prosper, Mr. Spock. -
On target once again. We shall see how your guesses fare soon.
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The oversight committee will be looking this over for the next few chapters. We’ll let you know.
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All true. Justice is nit only blind, but sometimes moves at a snail’s pace.
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That may not be completely true. Stay tuned. It is possible, although perhaps Dante didn't torpedo his own cases. For whatever reason, the powers that be assigned Fred to shadow Dante, essentially naming him as his mentor. As far as Dante's actual input, so far, it's only a couple comments on Fred's appeals. If Dante was aware of what Silas was doing on the initial casework, pretrial, perhaps, he either agreed with it, or let it slide. Sebastian and Karter were copied on Fred's appeals. Dante probably didn't want to raise any flags.
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An excellent question. I wonder when we'll find out. In chapter 12? Maybe. By chapter 13? Almost certainly. What about chapter 14? Okay, I give in, you'll know by then for sure. I'm thinking Thursday, Saturday, and Monday for posting the aforementioned chapters. I may get impatient myself, so there's still hope for faster answers.
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Friday came, and Fred went out for dinner and drinks with Dante and Kirsten. There was a little talk about work, but for the most part, the topics were more personal. Dante was thirty, graduated with law degree from Texas A&M. It took him three attempts before he passed the bar. He was single but engaged to a long-time girlfriend named Stacy. Kirsten was twenty-three, had a bachelor's degree in paralegal studies, also from Texas A&M, and was trying to save money to begin law school
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Another good one. Of course that usually raises questions or observations. If a skinwalker was evil, they could transition into someone else and cause all sorts of havoc; committing crimes and the like. Maybe that would be a way to get rid of Louella, commit a crime as her. That would be quite nasty. In the unfortunate instance where one was killed while transitioned, it seems all the science fiction I’ve seen, they would transition to their original forms. In Pops and Gramps cases, they’re hundreds of years old. Would they quickly become skeletons, or dust?
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