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Lee Wilson

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  1. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    I know you've read at least one of each, violent and abusive, because I wrote them. No, not this one.
  2. Why aren't there more stars? I won't say too much to not give away any plot points. But this one definitely pulled at my heart strings. You'll see what I mean after you finish it and read my comments. A truly heartwarming story. Finish the reviews quickly and get to reading. You won't be disappointed.
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  3. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    I have a new leader for my favorite story. It resonated with me because I'm adopted. A couple points hit me hard: I know that the agency was sponsored by Catholic Charities - Yep I didn’t want you to think I didn’t love you, so I searched for my birth parents without your knowledge - Been there, done that My birth mother was 21 when I was born, but unmarried. Jamie never met his birth mother. For me it was the opposite, I never met my birth father. I knew who he was because birth mom told me, and knowing my birth siblings' last name. Now, my two moms never had a relationship, but they did meet, and they thanked each other for what the other did for me. By then, my adoptive dad was dead, like Jamie's adoptive mom. SA, to quote Bill & Ted - "Excellent!"
  4. Definitely worth a read. I disagree with the other reviewers, however @Thirdly’s comment about interpreting it differently is spot on.
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  5. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    I’m conflicted. I see the wrong everyone else has mentioned, but I don’t see the creepy. Sure, taking the photos may cross a line, but I didn’t get the feeling of any malicious intent. I saw Morris as a Robert Mapplethorpe or Sally Mann. Dozens of Renaissance artists painted nude children. It’s not always evil. Perhaps if the story continued taking the masturbation topic further, i.e. videotaping, my thoughts may differ. However, we are left to complete the story for ourselves. Morris has eased the concerns of a child he perhaps saw the conflict in. My ending? Lucas gets dressed, leaves, and is more confident of himself.
  6. I don't know much about girls from Lesbos either, but this was funny!
  7. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    And not a single wooden stake used.
  8. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    That was certainly a twist. Good job SA. I only have one question. Will Kyle like what Bubba’s going to do with him?
  9. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Nice. Communication is key. Would have been nice to know if they survived. Chapter 2 maybe?
  10. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Like @Thirdly, I read the description but knew Liam would die. I expected more like a clone, not Liam, but a replacement. Nice job. If I was Neil, though, Liam would be sooooo incomplete. My memory sucks.
  11. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Nice job, but I knew all along Bobby was a Queen. Now he's THE Queen!
  12. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 15 S3

    Clint finally took the hint. Will he remember it by Christmas, though? I guess we'll see. Preston let the "animal magnetism" comment go. It's probably safe to think he suspects something, but can't figure out what.
  13. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Serves the ingrates right. Although in 2069, will a million dollars be enough to even buy food for a month? Interesting story, SA.
  14. Another one that deserves a WOW! I'm far from emotional, but I think sadness/sensitivity is the one emotion I can't keep inside. Go ahead and read, but make sure your tissue box is handy.
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  15. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    OK, who the F stole my tissues? Awesome job SA. Can't wait for the unveiling so I can follow you if I don't already.
  16. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Dang. Another one I need that confused emoji for. What was the beach? Transported to another planet? But no, they found "3 bodies in the backyard of the house." Doesn't sound like a beach to me. Oh well.
  17. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    I need to petition for a confused emoji. I've never been good at handling time shifts. And then, the section that begins with this: Ends with this: Weren't they already in the trailer? I mean, Henry was given coffee after waking up on the couch. Which in itself was weird since he'd just walked into the trailer. Sorry SA, this one went by me at 10,000 feet.
  18. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Well, that was... shocking. The old man ain't getting his 30 days of service, that's for sure.
  19. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 3

    Psychiatric examination at a minimum.
  20. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Fast moving. I agree. More, more!
  21. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 3

    Warren to the rescue. Cal, you CAN turn the phone off. It won’t buzz at you anymore.
  22. Can’t really say anything more. So, JUST READ IT ALREADY!
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  23. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Wow. What a twist.
  24. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    That made a quick turn. Like Cassie said, not where I expected it to go.
  25. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Interesting. I’m alive. Who’d have thunk it?
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