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Those kids are too smart to give wrong answer!

The complete chapter is wonderful, but this line brought tears to my eyes...

It's maybe not 100% medical accurate, but it is interesting plot to explore. Prity original if I may say. There are many people sexually confused, now, we have confusion caused by amnesia. Oh my...can you imagine happy lousy parents believing the prodigal son has been cured (when actually wounded), fighting against medical therapy (even risking their own son's life) and fighting against Derek who is trying to save his boyfriend's life!

This character could be drawn in animation by good artist. 🧑‍🎨

I wonder, who is the seducer and who is going to be seduced?! It's hot and it becomes hotter with every new sentence!

He was not wrong, it has been 00:05 Friday CET 🤓

Robert did a stupid mistake as a teenager. He admitted his mistake, even tried to apologize. I believe he really failed as big brother. With better communication this gay issue might be overcome or maybe not, but there is possibility. After parents died, he escaped, pursuing carrier. To be clear - not. one. call. in. six. years!!! No mail, no pictures, no communication, nothing - silence! And now, he is lamenting on the grave of young brother he was supposed to protect. This is not the classical situation - life went on...people separated, no, Jamie was abandoned. That's why Robert is feeling like shit! Sorry, but that's the word, he has guilty conscience. On the other hand, Jamie could not make first move. He was gay, he had fiancé, and, as long as he knew, his brother was homophobe. It was easier to live with memory of successful, hero big brother who is too busy to call than homophobic brother who disowned him. We don't know Jamie, he is dead, but he is the hero of this story!

you are talking to ginger, with million freckles on the face...no such hot, sexy, muscular characters!

Another Reilly?! 😮

Whatever, @raven1 is a genius!!! I mean, this IS Asa!

Yes, thanx...I forgot Bryson was his name. For a moment I thought it's his 3rd identity! Too much...I know! 😂

What a mess, Derek must have been devastated! He is going to need a lot of patience and love! Btw, who is Bryson? Actually, what is Jeremy remembering now actually?!

For somebody, but for me

Now that I left a review, I can make a comment here. This story made me really sad. Whenever some story finishes with separation, some sort of hope for reunion stays, at least in my imagination. But death is ultimate end. As Shakespeare says the rest is silence. There is no possibility for reconciliation, for kind words of love, for support and understanding. There is just endless emptiness. And what now? Robert has been so selfish and self-centered all his life. Jamie is gone and the scar will stay in Robert's heart. There is no worse executor than time. There is no possibility to change the wheels of time backwards. How to make peace with himself? If there is some redemption for Robert, it is written in those last lines of the story. The past cannot be changed, but the future is for us to determine. Robert is going to reunite with his family and embrace Ed as part of his late brother.

The message this wonderful short story is giving is that life is too short to spend it estranged from friends and family. We never know when someone's doomed day is, so, spend every day, every hour, every moment...sharing love and support with your dearest. And say it, say how you feel, say you love them because, if you think they already know - they don't! Don't be afraid to say, "I love you", don't be afraid to say, "I'm sorry", find some free time for your family, cherish your little traditions, family gatherings during holidays, phone calls, emails... Stay in touch. Don't let everyday life make you strangers. Memories stays in our hearts forever but regrets also. Thank you for this beautiful story @Parker Owens I am deeply touched.

I like it! My first thought has been Brad Pitt from Seven Years in Tibet, but I like your choice better! 🙂

Considering how exhausting must have been reading all those comments, I'm sending you refreshment. Scott Eastwood in scene "Caleb and Eclipse"! 🙂

We, readers, are just poor unfortunate souls...

Oh, ok, the museum scene is new one. I like it! 🙂

Torn between faith, believing, church canons on one side, and sexual identity and love on the other side, catholic priest has to choose path to his future. Is it possible to make a wise decision, a decision that can reconcile those two different worlds? Author explores the deepness of human mind, confronted emotions, fears, passion, love, faith… Chemistry between two main characters is incredible, they influence each other on so many levels. Andy, the priest, finds the way to accept himself the way God has made him, and Marcus, artist and sort of a playboy, finds the way to true love. Their relationship has been beautifully developed, with some of the best described, sensual and realistic love making scenes. I have discovered this author on other site, and, as I can see, she is not active for a long time. I would like to leave this review as support if @Hudson Bartholomew decides to share some more of her remarkable talent with us.

Ahahahahaha, I'm sorry, but this topis has been transfered to other languages by @kbois and @Danilo Syrtis. English version is not availableany more! 🤣