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  1. Cane23

    Chapter 14

    Oh, excuse me...after so descriptive description my guy applies as any! Wait a sec... Is that word average I see?!? And @Mrsgnomie gave authorisation to use average people?! 😱
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    Chapter 14

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    Chapter 14

    This is so much true! Corbin is still pretty much enigma to us. I imagine him as round head, red cheeks guy, with huge smile that newer expire from the face, even in hard situations. Maybe little childishly naive, doesn't appear as very smart person at first appearance but beneath that baby face you have a genius brain...* *Or, as @kbois says, I'm maybe totally wrong! 😜
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    Chapter 14

    Maybe their deeds will disclose the words we didn't hear... 🤔
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    Chapter 14

    I'm intrigued by this conversation! What were the words from one Alpha to another (thou ex). It is a little bit ambivalent feeling - as humans, Caleb and Giles are great friends but as wolfs, there might be some tension that must be suppressed.
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    Chapter 14

    Out for a cousin's birthday party...and already 80 notifications!!! I must go back, have mercy guys! 😁 Back to you in a few hours! ❤
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    Chapter 13

    It looks to me like this is continuing of transition chapter as @kbois has called it. Rather calm chapter, dangerously calm. Like dynamite is just waiting to explode! Everything goes nicely and smoothly and then...BAM!
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    Settling In

    you would have been surprised! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_companies_involved_in_the_Holocaust
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    Settling In

    seems that it is going to be more than professional, according to summary...😜
  10. @chris191070 has written amazing tale exploring the gothic story genre. I've been intrigued from the start, rooting for the best resolution that author finally deliver at the end of the story. Apart the happy end, @chris191070 leaves enough mystery, making reader wandering about demons in the house?!
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    Chapter 7

    The end came faster than I have expected, nevertheless it fulfilled my expectations! Your writing skills are better with each story you publish. Can't wait to read your next tale!
  12. Out of the blue lacrosse ball hit the Connor at school sport field. Ryan picked him up and took him home. Abused and neglected by his alcoholic mother, bullied in school, Connor find love, acceptance and support in new home, surrounded by Ryan, Toby and their mother. His road is not the easy one, there are many obstacles on it. Connor and his friends have to deal with anxiety, mental illness, sexual self-discovery, homophobia, rape, disease and death. Difficult to express his feelings, Connor uses his talent - singing and piano playing to send the massage to one he loves. Some of the everlasting classics - Elton John, The Beatles, Billy Joel and many others shows through the chapters coloring story with its sentiment. Through the story, Connor changes and turns into mature, self-confident, loving and supporting person. But he is not ideal, he is also making mistakes, faced with all the challenges one teenager could be facing. What makes this amazing story unique is the reality of the plots and characters. Characters fall and rise again, they can be hurt but they can hurt others too. It is complex story which should be on every high school reading list. The story ends with Elton John song Someday Out of the Blue, which is the title of the novel and last chapter. Lyrics summarize Connor’s feelings about Ray, his massage that he is ready to forgive and go on. This is an old tale on GA and I’m not sure that author is still active writer but it’s unique style and message deserved to be read by new members of this fantastic community. I leave this review hoping that new readers will enjoy as much as I did.
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    Chapter 12

    I haven't adressed to you but good to know! @chris191070 submited new chapter! 😜
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    Chapter 12

    You, actually, caught me trying to write a Review to one of @Mrsgnomie short stories (after giving up making a review at JL because it seemed pointless leaving 23459809805th review 😜 )! Ha, funny thing is that notification of @Mrsgnomie comment showed before the notification of @kbois story has been published! 🤪
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    Colin 1

    Great idea, throw a dynamite and enjoy the aftershock silence! At least for a while... 😁 ...and selfish and spoiled by the late husband. Miles is also selfish and self-centered. I know this kind of family dynamics - you are alone, without wife and children, you manage your own working time...so, it's easy for you to be at disposal whenever we need you!
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    Chapter 6

    I thought better of Coop... I've been very sympathetic with his situation, especially after raping! But now, it doesn't look he is too much better than his husband, only not possessed. He used some Machiavelli's principles to get the score which is ethical and moral bottom really! Using Eric and his weakness (let's say disease) is 🤮 He doesn't even seem to be sorry for his doings, he rather enjoys himself. Minor fault
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    Chapter 12

    Are you comming with a chapter today?🙂
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    Chapter 12

    Why not?! What a splendid idea, each healing one chapter! You might change the title: Light in the neverending tunnel!
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    Chapter 12

    THANK YOU! At least somebody understands what I'm talking about!
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    Chapter 12

    @kbois shall we see some more of Logan and Cooper? They had a big role searching for the hybrids in Book 2. At the beginning of Book 3, while I was still thinking that Corbin is coming to Montana too, I believed that Corbin and Logan might be mates.
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    Chapter 12

    Caleb has deserved and has paid a high price for his peace. @kbois is giving us hint about some other lives reaching their ends. I believe that elders are slowly passing over to the other side...
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    Chapter 12

    After few very emotional chapters, you have delivered us one that is by sensibility most alike the Book 1... Briefings, wars, strategies... I have really enjoyed in this reminiscence. But it is also chapter of little retrospective of all that's happening - like a cake: part of meetings, part of emotions, part of Caleb, part of sex, part of healing...just great! I'm wondering about upcoming war. It should be epic war of shifters world, between forces of evil and forces of good. Then, why is Sebestian's pack the only one in danger. I think all packs should send their armies to beat evil lion shifter, something like @kbois' Battle for the Minas Tirith.
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    Chapter 12

    Directly out of your stories... That's what I've been reading, and rereading since wednesday! 😜
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    Chapter 12

    Just to check in, now back to reading! 😁
  25. Now that I have read all @Mrsgnomie stories...and many, many comments (I cannot read them all), I have a question - how did Rob Stone story became Kyan and Perry story. Not that I'm complaining, just feel that I've missed something...
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