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Really nice start, you hooked me immediately with amazing characters you introduced us. Boys are already getting much needed help and attention, but it is going to be interesting to explore all the circumstances that leaded to their homelessness. Specially because story is situated in Britain - as I am learning from these stories, it is much easier to be left on the streets in USA than Europe.

Good start, I'm interested in development of the story. I'm wondering, how did Beau know that he will not get punched when asking for a bj? It was not clear that guy showed that he is interested in Beau more than to solve car repair. Btw, goood advice, Beau might have multiple benefits out of this friendship! 😜 *What is the name of the protagonist? It's difficult to address him that guy all the time. 🙂

There's been fast transition from professional to nonprofessional! 😁 I would like to read more dialogs between those two, but ok, it's up to author... Not sure unexpected visit would go well. Colin is still very much in closet, it is going to need some time to accept being in relationship at first, and then to share it with family and world. It is going to be difficult hiding around workers, especially Jimmie. This guy likes to stick his nose in other people's business, if he finds out it will be like telling on BBC News!

Stay healthy! I've been sick last week with flu and fever. I felt worse than with corona, still not 100% in shape! 🤧

Seth is in desperate need of LOVE! How is it possible that these parents are so blind to see, so oblivious to the feelings of their son?! He so desperately needs to hear word love from his parents, to be embraced by them...just hugged. Now I understand why the one boyfriend is not enough! He needs them all to show him that he is loved, needed, wanted; but also, to selflessly share and respond to affection with whole his heart! Poor Seth! 💔

14?!?

Although things are coming slowly to its place, seams that biggest chaos is still in Seth's head. He is missing a solid rock to rely on as both of his parents are quite unreliable. Craig pointed out that even Seth hasn't been good in communication, didn't give any hint to his mother that he feels neglected. But aren't the parents those who have to take care of their children, monitor their behavior, ask questions even if everything looks fine at the surface?! Both mother and father failed in their parenting role, mother feeling guilty regarding Stacy, and father who has started a new life with new family and not much taking care of his other two children. No wonder Seth is feeling lost... But even in this situation, Seth shows exceptional maturity refusing to go to live with aunt, aware that living with Blake would not be appropriate. Right now, the brightest point of Seth's life is his relationship with other boys. Although unusual, their connection is strong, full of passion, love and support. He feels it and it helps him overcome the chaos he is in.

That was a hot meeting! Hope that Brian and Gordon will be able to have this entertainment and business combination balanced as good as possible. Fun and sex are great but I'm not so sure about Russ's motives! He seems like manipulative and potentially dangerous man. He might want to involve them in something which might jeopardize their relationship and even endanger Brian's custody over Toby.

Yea, that feeling - when you expect nothing, then you get...something! 🤪

I've put your exact words in that image creator @raven1 has recommended. Results are above... So, @kbois has this AI got it?

And first at 6

Thanx mom! 👶😂

What I miss is a real interaction between the guys! They've become rather close till now, considering they both know they are gay, and some personal family issues. But all we know is from their thoughts, nothing from personal encounter so the relationship seems developing faster than maybe expected.

Obviously, it's not only cliff that hangs! 😂

Oh, excuse me...after so descriptive description my guy applies as any! Wait a sec... Is that word average I see?!? And @Mrsgnomie gave authorisation to use average people?! 😱

This is so much true! Corbin is still pretty much enigma to us. I imagine him as round head, red cheeks guy, with huge smile that newer expire from the face, even in hard situations. Maybe little childishly naive, doesn't appear as very smart person at first appearance but beneath that baby face you have a genius brain...* *Or, as @kbois says, I'm maybe totally wrong! 😜

Maybe their deeds will disclose the words we didn't hear... 🤔

I'm intrigued by this conversation! What were the words from one Alpha to another (thou ex). It is a little bit ambivalent feeling - as humans, Caleb and Giles are great friends but as wolfs, there might be some tension that must be suppressed.

Out for a cousin's birthday party...and already 80 notifications!!! I must go back, have mercy guys! 😁 Back to you in a few hours! ❤

It looks to me like this is continuing of transition chapter as @kbois has called it. Rather calm chapter, dangerously calm. Like dynamite is just waiting to explode! Everything goes nicely and smoothly and then...BAM!

you would have been surprised! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_companies_involved_in_the_Holocaust

seems that it is going to be more than professional, according to summary...😜

@chris191070 has written amazing tale exploring the gothic story genre. I've been intrigued from the start, rooting for the best resolution that author finally deliver at the end of the story. Apart the happy end, @chris191070 leaves enough mystery, making reader wandering about demons in the house?!

The end came faster than I have expected, nevertheless it fulfilled my expectations! Your writing skills are better with each story you publish. Can't wait to read your next tale!