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    Colin 4

    Reading all the comments about Colin's family, I can imagine situation the first time Colin says no... They will probably say those infamous words - What's going on with you Colin, you don't look like yourself?! You've changed!!! ๐Ÿคช Even if they accept him as gay, doesn't mean they are going to give up using him whenever they have some needs because - Oh, but living with a man doesn't mean you have a family of your own! ๐Ÿคฎ
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    Chapter 16

    True, six hundred years old Neuschwanstein in Baden-Wรผrttemberg! ๐Ÿ˜œ
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    Chapter 29

    Well, if we are putting orders now, I would like some epilogue for Stuff People Do. I've always imagined scene where Matt is giving a lecture in California, and together with Trent have unexpected reunion with Ricky and his husband.
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    Chapter 16

    No, no issues except they, somehow, appeared in Bavaria instead of Baden-Wรผrttemberg! ๐Ÿ˜œ
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    Chapter 16

    Nope, this is not a six-hundred year old castle! This is king Ludvig's of Bavaria Fary tail dream.
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    Chapter 16

    Poor boys, there is some poetic justice in fact that orphans are going to be healed first. They might really go back to USA with Corbin or Asa and Caleb if Peter doesn't keep brothers or Marcel in Germany. Those lousy parents might order Marsel coming back when he is cured but I believe he will not go back now he knows what a real parenting love looks like. I think their future is in Texas but via Montana, to be spoiled a little bit by moms. The boys and Vann are going to be great friends, maybe something more but I don't want to speculate and risk being disciplined by @kbois. ๐Ÿ˜
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    Chapter 16

    Faster than a...ah, what was the sentence from Dichotomy...Perry grabbing Kyan's dick...or something similar... ๐Ÿ˜‚ I'm going back to read the chapter...
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    Colin 4

    A short chapter again, but quite informative. So, Colin is happy, and his mother can't even share his happiness, as long as he is not happy slavering for his family! Owain and Colin are so similar, they are great together and Colin can see how their future might look like. Jimmie has been put to his place and Bruno appaired as new, interesting character, maybe gay too. So, waiting for the future development, hope you will reword us with longer chapter next! ๐Ÿ™‚
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    Chapter 29

    A Bridge To Yesterday is the best sequel ever written on GA! I have even put in Review how important this sequel is - because it gives us hope for a second chance! I really enjoy how is @Ronyx playing with his characters, exploring different situations because in one story, the character stays miserable his whole life due to bad choices, while in other (Gene in Bridge) he's got a second chance to repair his life. I'm not sure Seth needs a sequel, more like an epilogue, or sequence of life a few years forward (I would like the same for Bridge).
  10. @Ronyx brings this unique story about Seth, his road through chaos, to happiness, love and acceptance he was looking for. Seth lives with his mother and sister, feeling estranged, neglected and not loved. Although a good student, being a gay increase his insecurities. A horny teenage boy, shaken by hormones and emotions he is in a search for love and sex. Who is going to be the right guy? Sisterโ€™s boyfriend Craig, a muscular football jock; or Blake, boy molested by homophobic parents; or it is Ty, Sethโ€™s best friend?! You might be surprised by the outcomes as @Ronyx has made reading this story a real roller-coaster ride.
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    Chapter 29

    Jeff?! The shy, quiet guy?! I'm shocked! ๐Ÿ˜ฑ Oh son, I've missed you so much...but not dinner for you!!!!???? What happened to that nice, good neighbor, when did he became dictator with bunch of bullshit?! Why did he take him anyway, as revenge to his ex-wife? Well, I really thought father might be solution for Seth's problems. So, he is, but not the way I've been thinking. Seth leaving to his father has made mother think about it, think of losing him so she came to some sense finally! As for the father, I miss the closure here. Seth left quietly his father house with dignity but, there are some things that need to be said. Seth needs to tell him f*ck you, and everything else he keeps in his soul. Finally, a beautiful end to this story. Everything came to the right place, after all the chaos, Seth and boys deserves all the happiness they've got.
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    The Weekend

    This has been my impression too. An example how parenting should be done. I've been enjoying nudity in this story, more as voyeurism than something I would do but, as the story progress, I find it really liberating and good for building self-confidence.
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    Chapter 28

    Waiting for the final chapter, I've crossed this one with comments again... This comment is so true, it reminds me of those preachers who are preaching about suffering on this world to gain eternal happiness in the heaven! My God...really?!? Dear Seth, suffer for two more years and then you can leave the home... Some advice!!!
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    Chapter 11

    Yes, but one of the most beautiful too! I can swear that those are some of the best sentences @kbois has ever written!
  15. I expand my English knowledge with every new chapter you post! ๐Ÿ™‚ I like British English; it reminds me on my summer English course in London sometime in nineties... I've been riding by bus in London. One lady was sitting and asked me at one moment to pull the cord! I've been looking at her confused, not knowing what the cord is. She stood up furiously because she has missed the bus stop, and it was latter on that I've been explained what the cord is! I came to England knowing only for the rope! ๐Ÿ˜
  16. The guys are starting to get to know each other better. They are playing house and it's really cozy. At one point, things will get out and it is not going to be easy for both of them but, until then, their dynamic is quite charming to read. I've been thinking about Colin's family. They might be shocked when they find out about Colin being gay, maybe even outraged, fearing for their reputation as good, traditional suburban family... ๐Ÿคฎ Eventually, they need him, they depend on him...so, once that farce will be finished, they'll come back (probably needing something...).
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    Chapter 1

    So, Bruce Willis is the father of the Claude (Jean Claude Van Damme - not so bad name after all ๐Ÿ˜ )! ๐Ÿ˜‚ Interesting start, who might be the murderer - bodyguard (maybe to obvious), jealous mother, father removing evidence of affair to avoid scandal, or somebody we haven't meet yet?!
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    Colin 3

    Owain has been already prepared to go to Colin's house at the end of the previous chapter, so, I think this is going to be You had me at hello moment!
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    Chapter 15

    Because it's how it usually goes in your stories - you either mate him or kill him!
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    Chapter 15

    Hint of a new story?! ๐Ÿค”
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    Chapter 15

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    Chapter 15

    There is this old wisdom about @kbois stories - Something will happen in next chapter, unless something else happen, or maybe it won't happen at all... ๐Ÿ˜‚
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    Chapter 15

    @kbois how nice of you bringing Luke back! ๐Ÿ™‚ He really helped Caleb in his darkest hour so, he deserved at least guest star appearance. I hope guys will meet Robert in Germany. Robert has met the Sentinels in Spirit W , he was so angry to hear about hybrids and was eager to help Sebastian and Co. He might be helpful to healers too!
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    Chapter 15

    This was sooooo hoooot sex scene, it was worth of waiting!!!
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    Colin 3

    What?! Nooooo my friend, this is not chapter, this is cheating! ๐Ÿ˜œ Ok, but I expect your redemption with next one!!! ๐Ÿ™‚ Back to the "chapter" - are the flowers really going to be enough?! Owen is going to need something more, if not mature guy by his side, than at least not to be offended in his own house by the guys he is paying to do the job!
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