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Nice chapter, Toby continue exploring... He and Noah might be cute couple. Why should Noah be worried about outing to his parents when his older brother is gay also?!

Great start of this new story, so intriguing and captivating. I am really hooked on it and can't wait another chapter. It is interesting to see your writing talent appears in a bit more serious genre than much beloved Brian's story.

Yes it is.

Coop didn't get much information from previous owner, at least he knows it's something about windows. This is not a job for a lawyer, he will have to look for an exorcist...

There are many good and strong shifters to fight baddies, but there is only one light shifter... And there are not only hybrids to heal, the world is sick, it needs a light! But, as I said, not my story to tell. @kbois can make him evil or dad...hell, it wouldn't be her first time, wouldn't it? 😜

I have written in Review that this is the most intimate and the most tender love story @Mrsgnomie has ever written. With Max and Reid I expect something totaly different, something fast and furious! 🙂 They have such energy and so stubborn and strong characters that story will be funny, crazy, with lot of twists and turns and certainly more drama... Oh, and some wild sex too... 😂

Such waste of energy...but ok, your story, your rules!

Asa is a healer, his mission is to repair, not to destroy. He is such a divine creature that I believe it would be sacrilege using him in combat. But it is Kage who is protecting them all the time. At the end of the previous chapter, I've been thinking that it was Kage who helped Sebastian spare Caleb's life in 2nd story. Kage's shadow might fall on the enemies...

Life is so cruel!

I have no words to comment this!

Second reading...of course you gave us signs at the beginning, of course the only way to be cured is to be cured together... Read carefully Cane, read carefully!!!

But it was such a tender and emotional moment... Isn't it wonderful?! I really hope that nobody expected situation like - "Caleb and Vann looked in each other's eyes. In that moment both of them new...they were running spreading arms. Caleb cried - Oh, son of mine...Vann replied - Oh, I knew you are my dad"!!! Caramba, that would be some telenovela! 😂

I'm so overwhelmed by this chapter that I have been sobbing half of it. I have to compose myself before reading all the comments and share my own.

Yea, yea...I know you. We are going to make a million theories about Bahamas holiday, and you are going to start a story like - "Max has been sitting in Caffee, waiting for Kyan and Bahama holiday from two months ago seemed as something happened in the previous life..."! 😜

Now that she finished her story, she can be hyperactive with yours! 🤪

This was beautiful chapter, so emotional...honestly, I didn't expect that...I thought it's all about passion, lust and sexual exploration. But this is different, more serious in a nice way. Well, sometimes a lot of alcohol is needed to open your heart and soul. Story is very hot, but I'm glad that there is more to it than just sex.

craziness is directly proportional to the content of the chapter!

...and you have chapter to publish...or, it might be two if the wedding party went crazy...

There is something childish and innocent in Kyan which is both charming and cute... but not always easy for Perry to handle it... ...stay with us...I mean, really?! 😂🤣

Ah Gracie... 😂 Thank you for this scene @Mrsgnomie, a huge payback for skipping approval moment at the end of the previous chapter! 🙂

Good to know! 😂

Startin from today, I have nowhere else to go!

Somehow, I believe that this is exactly what is going to happen! Maybe with little "help" from Kyan and Perry around reservations! 😜

This is the most intimate and the most tender love story @Mrsgnomie has written. It shows that every life is dramatic enough even without painful betrayals and heartbreaking adulteries. Devastated by the loss of his wife, Kyan is left with four kids. But then he starts learning the real power of love. The support and unconditional love from his in-lows helps him grow and overcome his insecurities. His brother-in-law and best friend Perry, hero of unselfishness, helps him discover love again and find passion deeply buried in himself. There’s been teasing going around the comments when @Mrsgnomie posted pictures of Kyan and Perry. Why are “ordinary” and “average” people not acceptable in something that is, above all, family tale? I asked myself at the end of the story, what kind of people are they if they are not ordinary and average and then it came to me – they are decent people. Decent, loving, caring people. This story is shining with aura of their love. In ugly world we are living, surrounded by mean, aggressive, judgmental people, this family is island of hope, a shiny star, and a flame that doesn’t heat only characters but readers too. That is the reason why we were desperately searching for good looking models, because with their pretty faces we wanted to express inner beauty of character’s souls. Yes, characters are the most captivating thing of this story because everybody needs father as Kyan or Jed, everybody needs a partner as Perry, and everybody needs a friend as Max… As an old Beatles song says All you need is love! This story made me become a member of GA which tells a lot about it. I would like to believe that this story made me at least a little bit better person.