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A truly wonderful finale to a wonderful story! I'm not so much interested in lousy parent's doom, whatever happened to them is well deserved. I've been more interested in psychology of such people. What is their way of thinking, are they just evil? There are some people who consider their children to be assets. So, you can do with your property whatever you want. Loe has been destined to be traded for the money, but Lars hasn't been treated especially good too! Also, I would like to know how Loe decided to have kids of his own! In JL it was really a red line for him. So, it would be nice to see how this transition happened, because I'm sure it was Loe, not Jay who initiated it.

Seems that Toby is not so healthy food obsessed when it comes to sugar! 😂

Dear @Mrsgnomie before I start reading epiClogue and give the Review of the story, I would like to share my general impression. It's absolutely clear to me why the JL has been the best rated and most loved of your stories. It has been written as a real series, so your readers and fans had full enjoyment travelling through chapters, leaving comments, predicting plots, turns and twists... This story is a real gift you gave to your readers! On the other hand, binge this story is a big bite, it not only consumes time but also asks effort to remember all that's happening. Publishing this story as complete novel would ask for reduction of few chapters to make plot flows easier and make it more compact in total. Unfortunately, in that case, new readers would be denied for all those beautiful writing details you are so good at, so, I'm lucky to read integral version. I enjoyed this ride. Although The Knotts stays my favorite story, I appreciate suggestions to give JL a chance, it was worth of it.

No, he can't...did Loe miss this reference to Joe (not) having his own children?

Such a wonderful ending...

He doesn't want it; he is doing this for you... And finally, Loe conquers my heart too! ❤️

I suppose that rebuilding the house is moment when Colin appears at the stage?! 🤔

This is so absurd...and stupid...and childish...and soooo Jay! It's not likely that you can "revirgin" and take virginity again!?! I mean, Jay has already done this tactic at the beginning of their relationship. At this stage of their mutual life, it's pointless...and very frustrating for Loe!

Was this Seamus returning favor? A big favor for Loe's surrogacy supervising?

I haven't analyzed their relationships; I was thinking about conversation with father. That reminded me on quiz, like: Who is behind door nr. one - Oh, it's my boyfriend. Who is behind door nr. two - Ups, my boyfriend too. Who is behind door nr. three - Surprise, my boyfriend! 😂

Well, it was about time. After all, this is not anymore about love or not love, it is about respect!

This conversation between Seth and his dad reminds me of @Ronyx story https://gayauthors.org/story/ronyx/doornumberthree/ Only difference is that in Seth's story, there is a boyfriend behind each door! 😂

So, everyone is under pressure trying to maintain the picture of the "perfect" family. Well, it's time to be less perfect and start breathing (read living) normally.

Great chapter, we see that "perfect family" is an illusion. Jay is under pressure to keep this wonderful, framed picture of his family, and to put Loe in this frame so everyone would be happy because, how could you possibly not be happy in such a perfect family?! He is so tensed and annoying about this "perfection" that Loe must feel suffocated. On the other hand, Loe is fighting his insecurities with irony which, luckily, keeps for himself. Jay is oblivious to the feeling of his brothers so, it might be Loe, to open Jay's and his parents' eyes and shake that family a little bit. They are not missing love, they just have to show it and spread attention fairly.

As a substitute, maybe it will be easier for you to know I'm on ch 20 JL 😂

Kage might be dead, but you have made such a huge testimony to his character. The impact he has made on this story, as well as on readers is amazing. Some mating you have written about has been hot and sexy, some have been fast and passionate but this, this has been beautiful...in your own words:

As I have said, Jay is master communicator! Where did he learn to think and speak like that?! Like some life coach or something... I can imagine him as congressman or senator one day... On the other hand, this was the first time I could really understand Loe's POV. Jay influenced him a lot, made him change and most of the changes were good but, there is a line where we have to accept someone we love. Totally accept his personality, good and bad sides. Loe newer pretended to be someone he is not and always has been 100% honest regarding his way of living. If you like me, you have to accept everything about me, isn't it so? Jay is often too good to be truth and it's so hard for Loe to achieve those high standards (even if Jay doesn't ask him to).

Ok, I understand where this Loe's insecurity is coming from, and I understand that Joe didn't put this invitation in a best way, but...! As Jay pointed out in some of previous chapters, Loe has a huge communication issue!!! Any time he finds himself offended of something, he turns his back on Jay, ghosting him, making the complete situation too much melodramatic! He said it himself in a babysitting chapter. I wrote in some comment that Jay needs a medal for his patience. I was wrong, he needs a golden cup!!!

This was the most ridicules trip in history! I thought idea was bonding, not going around playing some gurus for fans... Not romantic at all, not exciting even. And all that fuss around climbing. I was reading that part for a few times to see what I was missing. Ok, Jay was scared for Loe, even overprotective, but to be angry three days because of that instead of speaking about it the same night?! What's the drama? I think Jay has to get medal for his patience!

OH.MY.GOD!!! @Mrsgnomie you beat me!!! Did I get this right, Loe's parents took the other twin and escaped the hurricane leaving Loe to his destiny?! People save a cat or a dog if they can, let alone child... Are these parents somehow related to Kyan's?! I mean, pattern is the same only this situation is a real hardcore!!!

Jay is fast climbing to the top of my favorites. He is so smart, with great integrity...he is fighting all the prejudices regarding the football players! I'm impatiently waiting him to open Loren's shell because, till now, Loren is still annoying character as he is in Boss Nanny.

Started reading JL, wish me luck... 🙂 And at the very start, @Mrsgnomie at her best - 99 jersey joke!!! 😂

Oh Coop, no that way, you're going to make a mess even messier!!! Desperate situations sometimes lead to desperate actions!