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I like the symbolics, one Mikey has been reincarnated in another, and he finds his dad, takes his guitar, heal the wounds. If we believe in Christmas miricles @Mancunianyou have really given us one with this story! Another beautiful chapter, Michael playing the guitar has made me cry!
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I like how serious and mature Brian and Gordon are, Toby included. The way they talk, discuss matters, make decisions is so reasonable and down to earth, without some melodrama and overreacting. It's possible that's because they are both military man with quite analytic way of thinking. They have this cool head approach to all challenges and issues like Toby's custody, business, family, Russ situation... They are great team, looking each other's back as in combat. Even the proposal, although not romantic, has been charming and nice. @Robert Hugill you've created unique and interesting characters in both of your current stories. I'm so happy when I see notification that another chapter has been posted! 🙂
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...and blow me at the first place of 9 🤣
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This fart discussion resulted in a super weapon against Huntington! 😂
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Through their mouth?!? Well, that explains a lot!
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You might as well do that, till the ch 22 I've already forget who he is.
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This reminds me of girl who claimed that she is just a little bit pregnant! 🤣😂 Unless holy mighty Asa starts rising from a death... 😜
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Don't go there, you'll end up like me
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Yes, I've been wrong. You love to annoy readers!
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Ok, now I'm almost sure about my theory! I am not going to relieve it here; I will only say that I've been always thinking that all your deaths (yes, the poor shadow shifter incl.) had to heave some meaning higher than annoying readers. Removing one of the characters, although sad, always brought some positive outcome at the end. There are no pointless sacrifices in your stories.
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I believe that very painful and humiliating public execution awaits this awful cat! Something similar we have seen at the end of Book 1. Hanging on the pillar of shame and surrounded by all his victims, Huntington should die of slow and dreadful death.
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@Mancunian I like that your characters are not colored with prejudices and cliches. Stacy can be both Drag Queen and martial art fighter. Also, brothers. Straight Michail is the artist and gay Charlie is mechanic. The beauty of the world and the people is in their diversity. ❤️
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Now wait a minute...I've read a title! 😜
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Seems that I was not the only one thinking that Huntington is targeting Texas! Especially when airplane landed at airport far away.
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I was reading another story, you narcissist!
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I've seen @Mrsgnomie notification before story again!!! Now, back to story! 😁
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Emotional performance Michael gave was his final farewell to his mother. His tears were heartbreaking but, crying is the start of the healing! And then the Grease, a high school musical, summer love...that's where Michael's and Charlie's boyhood stopped, when they had to grow up overnight. Thanx to Max and Stacy they can be teenagers again and they can ketch up some of this wonderfool period of life. Beautiful chapter indeed!
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Such a great dialogue between Mhairi and Colin. I have not been disappointed by short chapter; I've been disappointed the dialogue ended. In a few words we learned a lot about their family dynamics and characteristics of family members. Family bonding is so nice, I eagerly wait continuation of the story!
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I hope you have planned some extensive epiClogue because, writing this trilogy, you brought so many interesting characters and families that every one of them deserves to have some nice closure and we as readers are eager to have a glance at their future.
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I'm sorry Russ feels this way, but guys had to draw some red lines! Friendship is ok. Friendship with benefits is ok too. But Russ is not a family, he has to make his own life. Hopefully Gordon and Brian can help him with that because surrogate family and surrogate life are not longtime solution for either party.
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I've been asking myself, where the love word came from...but then, it came to my mind - it has been over a year, or more, of flirting. So, in Book 1 it has been Beau who was discovering himself and found HEA. It's time for Chris in Book 2 to find his HEA...hopefully with Andre.
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You've been posting so much messages just to be first on the 6! Admit it!
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If I understand this well... The flame shot straight out and hit directly in the seam between two of the scales protecting its heart. it is more about weak point, as Achilles' heel then type of weapon itself.
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Family Life: Church reconciliation
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Family Life: Church reconciliation
A beautiful chapter. it's wonderful how you have simbolicaly made church and religion as place of forgiveness, reconciliation and acceptance rather than place of judgment and fear of hell and punishment!- 18 comments
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