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Cane23

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  1. Cane23

    Chapter 7

    It would be devastating but not unthinkable with @kbois 🙄
  2. Cane23

    Chapter 7

    Yea, I know...
  3. Cane23

    Chapter 7

    Pay attention guys! 😁
  4. Cane23

    Chapter 7

    Aww, cute! 🙂
  5. Yea, I've heard the legend, a tale as old as time...
  6. Engines not working, phones not working...it must have been Mercury retrograde! 😂
  7. Now I have Vertigo!
  8. Cane23

    Chapter 6

  9. I'm still confused by the deepness of their relationship. Instead of some crying chapter or two before, I haven't seen real emotions by Derek (ok, Jeremy has two years gap). How strong is his feelings, is it love? And why was it secret relationship, at least to Mrs. Perch if she was like mother to them?!
  10. Why did Derek leave Jeremy in such condition. It was obvious that Jeremy is totally confused and disoriented, he should not be left alone, no matter what he said!
  11. She killed her in first chapter and made her hateable enough in others! So, kill your victims at the beginning!
  12. I don't want to think about that!
  13. At least we know her characters are going to survive! 🤪
  14. Cane23

    Chapter 6

    Once a killer, always a killer!
  15. Cane23

    Ares

  16. Cane23

    Ares

    Wow, so many naked butts, what can I say..."Rule, Britannia! rule the waves"! 😂
  17. Cane23

    Chapter 6

    Like a Nero who burnt a Rome to write a sonnet! 
  18. Cane23

    Chapter 6

    A horrible thought went through my mind!!! I hope Asa will not going to die healing so many hybrids...something like ultimate sacrifice! Shadow and Light shifters both dead - that would be too much!!! Be careful what you are doing!!!
  19. Cane23

    Chapter 6

    In one moment, I was thinking it was Caleb waking up Asa although I'm aware it is not realistic. But I enjoyed romantic thought of Caleb taking Asa in his arms and carried him to bed. And then nursing him through the night...
  20. Cane23

    Chapter 6

    I can see that healing part has brought the most attention. It is exciting but, I have really enjoyed the first, bonding part with playing cards, sleeping together... It seems to me that healing started at that moment, when trust reaches such a high level that Caleb willingly put his life in the hands of his mate. It is so beautifully written, so emotional and heartwarming.
  21. Cane23

    Chapter 6

    A final confrontation between forces of evil and forces of good!
  22. I'm so happy to hear from you, almost as hearing from a close family member! Take all the time you need and bring us lovely chapter! 😘
  23. Cane23

    Chapter 24

    You have almost written a story of your own here! 😁
  24. Cane23

    Starting Over?

    Dealing with amnesia must have been really difficult. Derek's experiance might help but it's hard to decide how much to say not to confuse patient. Luckily, emotions are still there behind the dark.
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