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If they didn't...there's no better moment to invent it... because it is AWESOME..., isn't it... 😁
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To quote Darien - It's not like that! 😂
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Someone at the bank might be making a secret deal with Yoders...🤔
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I'll miss this series...
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Rather sterile. AI deliberately avoids words like "cock" and "fuck" - I suppose it has policies about using explicit language. As someone else mentioned, AI is a useful tool and can certainly be helpful, but authors should remain human.
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Epic chapter. The ending is heartbreaking -politically realistic and probably in the best interests of Vixen and Frankia. Still, it leaves so many young hearts broken. Casimir, Atreus, and Cecily will likely have to make a similar choice to the one Loyd, Julian, and Libbet made. Hopefully, Cecily is wise enough to do it without the older generation having to intervene. As for Tomas... yes, he looked rather pathetic in that scene, but I think it sealed his destiny. Stripped of his illusions, like all the Vineguard boys before him, he can finally find his true...chosen family.
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I'll quote my 85-year-old relative: "There are no old people here, dear!" 😁
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You're amazing! I apologize if anything from my side made you feel pressured or caused you stress!
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Amazing writing. It seems that the more information we get, the more things are revealed - and the less we actually know. Even Taggert and Bert speak in puzzles. They eventually understand each other perfectly, while we're still left wondering what lies beneath their conversation. It's as if ranch owners share their own universal language.
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When did this happen? 👆 First was this moment: Then Tomas went to Atreus - Atreus is astonished...Cas is suffocating...Wylan hides in church-find the blade-the spell is over, rebellion started, Atreus wakes up and refuses Tomas' offer...Tomas devastated...Val shakes him... Did Tomas speak with Lothar again somewhere in between?! Or he just assumes that, since he didn't accomplish his father's task, he is banished?
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Hakon & Bram? I had to go back to Book 3 to check their names! 😁
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I was a bit confused by the timeline because of how the previous chapter ended. At first, I thought this chapter was set before Ateus' fight. I also didn't quite understand. Casimir's jealousy after the way the last scene in the previous chapter played out. And Tomas seemed so defeated here - I assume he met with his father in his tent afterward?
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Oh...OH...a big mama Val... 😲
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Friends' support is important, but I think Tomas also needs to talk to someone older - a father figure. The other boys each had that kind of conversation at some point with Wylan and/or Darien. Tomas desperately needs a positive, healthy male role model and someone he can see as a trusted authority.
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24. Friends, Family & Fun
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in 24. Friends, Family & Fun
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Beutifuly said...and beautifully written...both 'mature content' and 'learning. Their connection is so natural - love, passion and lust all build slowly until the fireworks.
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Atreus the Magnificent...too bad Ashot...or even Ishan couldn't see it. As for the Tomas, I'm looking forward to seeing who will heal his broken heart. Nevertheless, he should be aware of one thing... no matter his feelings, he didn't "do it" for Atreus - ultimately, he "did it" for himself.
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24. Friends, Family & Fun
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in 24. Friends, Family & Fun
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It seems to me they're all destined to be the power behind the throne - or the power hidden in the shadows. They're so easy for their enemies to underestimate. Cas, a weak boy, is actually a mage. Cecilly, the woman behind the throne, is the one truly pulling the strings. With the alliances they'll forge with Atreus, Tomas, and Richard, they're going to be unbeatable!
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But I'd love to see the smirk on Darien's face after this - and hear him say, "That's my boy," right in front of Lothar himself.
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He can be whatever he wants... but does he realize he lost his son? Lothar failed as a parent, and that's unforgivable.
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Darien was never truly a father to a little boy. By the time he returned from the Crusades, Atreus was already a teenager. With Rico, Darien is making up for the time he lost and embracing the chance to be the father he never got to be for Atreus.
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I thought it was
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Beautiful way to introduce Rico and make him member of the family. I don't think anyone has ever melted Darien's heart so fast...Wylan included! 😁
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So...should we read it...or wait?! 😜
