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One of your chapters that leave me speechless! When I read it last night, I haven't been able to leave a comment. Too much conflicted emotions. So many unspoken words that tells everything. You leave us reading between the lines... First, I've been angry of King for endangering Bishop's life. Then, I've been furious of Bishop for running away and ghosting King. Yes, king is very difficult to handle occasionally, but Bishop was intelligent enough to know it better... You don't play with fire and leave it in the forest without expecting wildfire to burst out...or flame to burn down! And just when I thought that I'll write down comment to express all my anger toward Bishop - Rook did it for me! Maybe harsh, maybe cruel...but it had to be said. Still, your characters are so complex. While still angry of Bishop, I think - can we blame him for wanting to have his own life, his own dreams, his own path... I don't know - did he choose wise or safe?! Considering his illness and loosing of support (Bishop), King's suicide is not surprise. The words he says are so strong: "I'd choose death...a hundred times...if that meant your happiness." He said them to release Bishop, but they sound so accusatory! This guilt is a heavy burden Bishop has to live with. On the other hand, these words make King's suicide act of ultimate love and sacrifice, instead of act of lunacy. It's a samurai way of dying! Finally, Patrick is back with a horse. He might not be King - but he is not Pawn either anymore! Who is he now? So, what's next? Oh, they'll f*ck I'm sure. They'll f*ck senseless, twosomes, foursomes... Maybe even Bishop loses his charry because, well, just to repeat what has already been said - Patrick is not a King! 😉 The question arises - what will the future bring? Is there a future for them? After so much pain, I certainly hope so...

As much as it sounds funny, I have to admit that it is the best and the quickest solution! There would be few days of fuss and then peace! Unfortunately, as Gordy says, this is going to be long, exhausting, unpleasant legal fight with law, police, medias, neighbors...and last but not the least, Jackie herself! It is going to be hell. I hope Arthur and Ludo will at least have some domestic fun, maybe with Gordy too! 😉

So sorry about this news. The curse of human body - healing one thing, we hurt the other! I know that well... But you are a fighter, this is just another battle to win! The friend I was visiting in hospital few weeks ago has been diagnosed with microcellular lung cancer, stage IIIc. He's receiving chemotherapy now. Prognoses are...well, nobody can really tell...or doesn't want to. He's living with his parents now and we speak by the phone every day. The sad thing is that I cannot be by his bed and hold his hand because...well, the things are 'complicated'! Aren't they always...

Bravo @kbois! Btw, does promotion apply to the Krew too?

Till the end of the chapter, I was literary sobbing! So many hurt children, so many ruined lives... Yes, there is hope and there are good people who are going to help, still, I couldn't stay calm to so much pain. I only hope that f*cking criminal Rizzo is not going to hurt any of the good guys. Ok, he doesn't look like very smart mafioso, more like bully who achieved the position somehow but still, angry beast is hard to control. Anyway, there is boss above him too who might find his methods and results unsatisfying and remove him...

First snow! I still haven't change summer tires on my car!!! 😱 At least children are happy!

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Just do your backup!!! 🙏😉

Yes, and roof over head...and bed to share...and has swallowed his own pride and went to speak with his bigoted father for Nolan's sake...and made a contact with Russ...and helped Nolan save his company... Well, Ralph has proven his loyalty, so, some patience from Nolan is at least he can do.

Now, @Robert Hugill...you've spoiled the surprise!!!! 😁 You know that "telenovela's" reactions - shocking faces - Oh Dios mio, Dios mio!!! 😱😂 Nevertheless, good that Ralph got some sense to talk to Nolan and certainly NOT talk to Therese!!! Omg, he really doesn't want to play with her patience!!! Yes, but still...this might come out better than you expect Ralphie boy!!!

AMAZING! If previous chapter was darker, this one is all fireworks!!! Bishop is such a sexual beast! I like your over 10 inches characters 😁, they radiate so strong and powerful masculine energy, that makes me shivers every time I read! 🔥 I've said many times, even wrote in some reviews - @CasualWanderer82 you are incredible smut writer. As @pvtguy has said, I could picture everything - visualize all your words but not only that. I could feel, sense the passion, emotions, sensation... It's so, incredibly exciting! I have my favorite stories, but anticipation for new chapter of this one is impossible to describe! Bravo author! 👏

It is becoming a little bit crowded at crime scene! Good that agent Daniel has it all under control. Rizz is watching from aside, but someone is watching him too... Hm.. I must confess that you've tricked me with Stan, William and twins. I thought they are opposite to children's abusers, good gay guys who wants to save boys and give them a family (well, at least Stan was). Roger was supposed to defend them for being wrongly accused of child kidnapping and trafficking. Well, I was wrong! Unfortunately, one good guy is down. At least, William has not escaped, and twins are safe.

pj and t shirt, no photo, sorry! 😉

When is the next chapter?! 🙏

Laura has some psychiatric diagnosis! She'll end up in some mental institution, I'm sure!

I like them! West Coast was on repeat on my list for a long time!

I've been laughing to this... Football team - all athletes PLUS Ralph! 😁 Poor guy, no wander he was broken! Great chapter Robert!

Ahahhahahahha...and then I was accused of making up Hollywood plots!!! 😂🤣

Finished 'Summer', now reading 'Autumn' with, I ashamedly admit, peeking at later CJ stories! 😇Amazing saga! Makes me sad whenever I would like to ask something in comments, knowing the answer will never come!

So Chief Monroe is not a dirty cop, he is a tired cop! But this was the peak moment of his carrier. It may be uneventful carrier, but when the right moment came, he was at his best! Generally, with lot of action and some tenderness, this chapter has showed a life changing moments for our protagonists! Nothing and nobody will be the same! That's good, no... it's great!

Well, that was...fast! Jakob reminds me of cartoon character Speedy Gonzales -only not Mexican but Norwegian version! 😁

Yes, it sounds paradoxically that discovering being gay, saved his ass! 🤪

OF COURSE he messed up the bitch's "project"! Ludo was supposed to be caught with a woman when he hooked up with a man!!! OH. MY. GOD!!! This woman is morally your ugliest character yet @Robert Hugill. This asks for some juicy punishment out of the @Summerabbacat notebook!

Second read this morning! So many different shades and hidden clues! Anyway, I might be wrong about Mara, she's not the Queen... She's Bishop's dark opposite! 🤓😁 Oh, I'm so hooked...when is the next chapter?! Please!!! 🙏

Marvelous storytelling! @CasualWanderer82, you've given us a chapter that brings some answers about King and Bishop's youth and friendship, but it raises even more questions! Interesting characters. I thought King, as a leader, should be the strongest one. But not in a chess! On a board, king is fragile, protected by everyone else. At the same time, figures naturally gravitate to him. Like a Sun, King illuminated Bishop's life bringing best out of him. He saw Bishop's soul, discovering a pearl in a shell. Bishop is a mastermind! Only person with incredible intelligence can learn to play chess and see the right movements after first lesson. Strong man, stoic, a soldier... He calms King with a touch of his hand, with a beat of his heart and wisdom of his words. There is still a lot to be unrelieved, but, as it looks now - Mara could be a black Queen. She has King in check!