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You did it @JJ Quinn and I'm so proud of you! Fighting MS, administrative obstacles, site rules, erased files, impatient readers (sorry about that) - you've brought this amazing story to its conclusion. During the previous months, I've embraced Sam (or Sem in my interpretation ), Ben and other characters, accepting them not as fictional, but as real friends. Thank you for this masterpiece and thank you for your patience for reading my, occasionally overanalyzing comments! As for Sam and Ben, this is not the end but start of their mutual journey. It is not going to be flowers all the time, but they will be together to face all the obstacles. And family is there to support them...
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The first chapter already promises this is going to be one of @Ronyx classics! The Barn door, as Pandora's box, has been open...a heavy fight is waiting for our protagonist Neil till he closes them!
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I don't remember anticipating new chapter with such a fear! Yes @Ronyx, already in first chapter, you've made me feel like Neil, entering the school scared as hell. The fact he has already thought of suicide speaks a lot!
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Luckily, no experience with STD but very bad experience with anal fissure. It wasn't anything dramatic as rape or assault, just inexperience. Didn't need stitches but still, hurt as hell, lost weight so quickly that I still have wrinkles on my face as 'proud' reminder of my own stupidity! Grayson was 'lucky' Mike went first, otherwise, the wound might be rather serious!
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Carter has made a difficult but right decision. It reminds me of Lt. Col. Slade's speech (played by Al Pacino) at the end of the movie Scent of a Woman: "I have come to the crossroads in my life. I always knew what the right path was. Without exception, I knew. But I never took it. You know why? It was too damn hard." Carter is going to suffer but he is the one who will come out as moral winner and Jeremy is going to apologize a lot! -
It's Jeremy's younger brother who was also killed with their father: Jeff and Carter's conversation in Chapter 17.
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Open Day and Photo Shoot
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Open Day and Photo Shoot
Does it end with Ralph's parents getting a Christmas card with signed picture of Ralph & Nolan? 😉- 24 comments
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Shane is a beast, no doubt about that BUT, for me, Mike is worse. He was supposed to be some friend, or at least colleague and this is betrayal! Grayson might be naive, but Mike is a scum!
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He is. There is something transcendental in the relationship between those men. The same feeling I had while reading the Men Of Honor. Fantastic sex in final chapter which culminates in Jeffrey and his friends' passing and Jackob's embracing the immortality. So deep, almost philosophical dilemma - is eternal life curse or a blessing?! Both MOH and KOM explore the deepest and the most amazing relationships between men. We are never completely sure are sex, lust and passion cause or result of their complex relationships. You write fantasy @CasualWanderer82 but it touches so deep all our senses and emotions that, beside all the feelings, it brings out the melancholy for the days which are gone.
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Chapter 19: Carter digs deeper. Will he be shattered?
Cane23 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 19: Carter digs deeper. Will he be shattered?
Now...I left an angry emotion! Angry of Carter! He didn't learn anything from the way he has treated Simon and regret he felt when he died. He didn't give Leonardo at least a reasonable doubt. He has already come with verdict and nothing Leonardo said was heard. I really do hope that it will not be too late when the truth comes out! -
School Issues & Date Night
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in School Issues & Date Night
There are, but Michael and his parents are not one of those. Reciting memorized verses from Old Testimony is not very clever. Parrot can imitate the words it has heard many times...it doesn't make it genius! Btw, reading stories, mostly by our American authors, I'm always surprised how much their Christian denominations are focused on Old Testimony. In Eastern Orthodoxy, we are more focused on Gospels and stories of Jesus. Not that there is no bigotry - there is, a lot... but still, I've heard quoting St. apostle Paul on that matter but almost never stories from the Bible. The only part of the Old Testimony that is regularly used on Services are Psalms. -
It was fun...till it wasn't anymore! First time shouldn't be like that! It can be insecure, clumsy, too fast...but this is assault and I'm sad Gray had to go through this awful experience.
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LONG LIVE THE PRINCE! Well @CasualWanderer82, when you said Pawn will change the game, I've been thinking of new chess game, not completely NEW game with new figures! Amazing! Prince awakened a beast in Bishop. I wonder, how did Bishop survive suppressing this enormous (sexual) energy for years?! With wife?!? It must have been frustrating! Yet, staying with King was impossible! Bishop was torn apart and now he is whole again. Now come the days of The Prince, may they be blessed!
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Furthermore, what if Laura is involved in her husband's murder? Her unconditional support of Dexter already looks suspicious. By Jeremy's theory, that would mean that 'Jeremy is not clean. He carries her legacy. He and his brother are living reminders of the pain she caused'. 🤪
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Jeremy has proved once again that in pain and anger, he makes rush and irrational conclusions. After all, he is Laura's son. By his own theory, he must be crazy, narrow minded and judgmental as she is... Oops, maybe he's not so wrong about that... This theory additionally complicates their relations. Not only that it puts stigma on Carter, but on Jeremy and Ethan's children as well. If the evil flows in the murderer's son blood, it flows in the blood on his grandson(s) as well! Right?! Finally, I'm not absolutely convinced that Leonardo is murderer - at least not first-degree murderer. Carter confronting his father might bring some answers...or new questions. We'll see...
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Amazing story indeed! But what a journey it was reading the series... I would really like to read a sequel about Leon and his new adventures!
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I'm so glad this story continues. Imperial palace is more dangerous place than dark streets of the capital or wild forests around. I agree with @akascrubber that women are the main marionettists in this game. As in a previous chapter where we saw women taking charge of Sula clan - so, there are white and black queens on this chess table. Seems that Sorel starts to have feelings for her Dio, but the truth is, their power is limited. They need Raithion to protect them, otherwise, they are condemned to doom.
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Oh, your guys are fast @Paladin! No... they are FAST!!! Fate they say...hm, could it be father involved in the flaws of the fate?! 😉
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It's 1992. Not very friendly gay environment. I suppose, as legal Consigliere, he couldn't be much open to both his bosses and colleagues. If we add AIDS stigma at the time and his personal trauma...and 'homosexuals being worse than communists'...we can understand Roger being quiet about this.
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Pictures and Plans, Beer and Bangers
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Pictures and Plans, Beer and Bangers
Interesting, I didn't think about it but...so many lifechanging things happened in their lives and business in a such a short time, that Ralph and Nolan haven't got a time to properly get to know each other. These amazing little moments they spend together are priceless!- 15 comments
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What amazing and stimulating working environment!
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OMG, this story is becoming so BIG, so important!!! I might have some smart comments later, for now, I just have to stop crying!
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Nobody told me there's ongoing wanking competition here! I always miss the fun! 😛
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@Summerabbacat - the Eliot Ness! 😁
