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I always hoped for some redemption for John but after this chapter, I don't care anymore. He has made his own bed and all he did was out of his cowardness or selfishness. I cannot believe I'll write this, but that's how I feel - it is sad that Daniel is dead, and John is alive! Luckily for John, there is so much love in his children (not thanx to him and his wife) that he might get the embrace and comfort he is desperately needing! Dr Robert Fenton?! π€ "Learn to be honest with yourself and the world around you,β I hope he will because this might be his last chance.
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February CSR Discussion Day: Just Keep Swimming by JJ Quinn
Cane23 commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Btw, I've found this hilarious!!! ππ€£π€£ It has never occurred to me to listen 'smut audio'!!! I can only imagine monotone, boring woman voice telling all those naughtiness of two man f*cking... -
February CSR Discussion Day: Just Keep Swimming by JJ Quinn
Cane23 commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Amazing interview @JJQuinn, I'm so glad you've found your place as GA author. This community is something special! So many ideas and plans ... that's the spirit girl, bravo! 'Swimming' is charming story but @JJQuinn's real gem and masterpiece is Finding Home: Halos and Heroes, Bk 1 - Fiction - Gay Authors I recommend it wholeheartedly!!! -
Chapter 5: Amanda lets Gael have a taste of her venom
Cane23 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Amanda lets Gael have a taste of her venom
Bravo Gael, one sparkling moment with Alex was enough to raise your self-confidence. You should love and respect yourself more! As for the Carlos ... βYouβre acting like Iβm the villain here,β! No honey, you are the Saint Carlos the Wonderworker! π -
Horny HOUDINI...LOL π€£ππ Oh Maxy... who's Runaway Bride now?! Our Max is afraid...so, it's not just 'Measure for Measure' thing, it's runaway thing. But Sam is right - Roman is not Sam, he'll wait! He'll be pissed and wait! π (although situation with 'money for uber' reminds me of Lucas and Noah's 'situation' in Studs, Spurs, and Stephanotis). I love the idea of Ben - the matchmaker (educated by telenovela watching) ... it is going to be interesting when complete family involves in Cupid's business! Max working as a good doctor for poor is amazing. I thought the friend officer coming to help would be officer Whelan, instead, you've introduced us to new characters! Now, let's see how will organic pancake mix work tomorrow morning...
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You are so right @drsawzall. It hasn't crossed my mind until I saw your comment but - knowing Jonah's legal status in N. Carolina might be dangerous weapon in Victor's hands!
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Yes, you're right ... it's not that they are organizing Bacchanalia!
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@CassieQ, I just LOVE your short stories! Well, I could understand Patric's dilemma, insecurity ... even selfishness and youth recklessness. Even hiding the truth and trying to be manipulative ... What I cannot understand is lack of any empathy, not for his lover, but for his best friend at the end. He was immensely cruel with all what he said, which indicates not just selfishness or stupidity, but some serious symptoms of narcissism. Eventually, the worst thing for me was that Patrick didn't apologize... he didn't say "I'm sorry".
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Would You Sleep with Me?
Cane23 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Would You Sleep with Me?
New shifters story! Wolf out of his pack and natural surrounding... well, this will be interesting! -
So much alcohol that I'm surprised this story takes place in USA. It looks like it is happening here in Europe! π Well, it's maybe part of rich children decadency lifestyle ... Jonah is naive if he thinks addictions can just go away. It's a lifelong process and Will might have crises on that road. I hope Jonah will be a good friend and support when (if) it happens. I like the banter between siblings. Jonah has really become integral part of his new family. Sometimes, our memories of the past can be seen through the pink glasses. His mother might have been supportive but, idea that he would go to prom with James in N. Carolina is not realistic! Prom has been a wining night for Kildare's! They win it all! Btw, Jonah should stop crying in public! Never show your emotions, enemies are watching!
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Chapter 4: It's all piling up for Gael. Will he take it all?
Cane23 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: It's all piling up for Gael. Will he take it all?
This might not be what Gael wanted to hear, but Mia sounds as the most reasonable and down to earth person in this story yet! She knew what was going on between Gael and Carlos, she didn't make a scandal over it, she didn't report them to her husband. All she asks now is everyone to take their own responsibility! Are they going to be responsible...or Gael will run away with Carlos on motorbike minutes before the ceremony... Let's see. -
What a table-turning for Lucas and Neil since the beginning of the story. Once at the edge of suicide, Neil is getting family support he couldn't even imagine before. Lucas is, on the other hand, condemned to be locked with predator. As life is full of irony, I wouldn't be surprised that Nail takes some role in saving Lucas!
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Chapter 3: Things spiral out of control for Gael.
Cane23 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 3: Things spiral out of control for Gael.
Sure, there is but, as many other @vanalas' characters, he has to mature, grow up (both in his head and 'down there') and apologize a lot... -
A closeted good guy might be a closeted monogamous guy too!
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A single phone call from Prosecutor, makes Roger Cicero, a famous mafia defender, involve in a case of murder. Case of murder becomes a case of self-defense... evolving into case of domestic violence and child abuse! After that, nothing was ever the same for Roger and his friends. A global network of pedophilia and boys trafficking is reveled and the war against the evil starts. @empath is building his own world of superheroes. Unlike the Marvel universe, Lincoln universe superheroes are real people, good people ready to fight the evil. They are military man, police, prosecutors, lawyers, judges, FBA, local militia, border control, even mafia members...all united to save enslaved and tortured boys. And boys of course - the unwanted children as author call them in the story, survivors and little heroes that have captured readers' heart forever! Emotional scenes are followed by the scenes of action...and all over again. Suspense and tension in one moment are replaced with tears of joy and hope in another. Unique characters, each with his own life story, each the potential protagonist of a new @empath's tale! This epic story is a magnificent gift to the GA site. It is a must read, although, to all emotional readers, I have to put a 'clinex' warning!
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Naked, or not naked, that is the question! Yes, it always comes back to master Shakespeare! I'm wandering, their need to discuss this issue around with friends - is it some sort of therapy for them?! π
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Difficult decisions - carrier building, continuing the fight as the commander of the new unit... or staying together with the one they love and newfound family, with the limited time they have together? Wonderful ending to amazing story! Now I have to think of nice Review! Bravo @empathπππ
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I've been mesmerized by Gone with the Wind scene. And all the f*ck, sorry dear, but how can a guy think clearly after that recliner sex?!? Blood is not in the bigger head! π
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My first impression...well, after the obvious one I've commented with gif above ... is that Roman didn't say so many "I'm sorry" and "Perdoname" for his entire life. In Roman's language it means more than 'I love you' word! π Love ... maybe too early to speak about that but feelings are there, it's obvious! (well, maybe just for author and readers for now ). For the second time Max has a Scarlett O'Hara scene, while Roman is taking him in his arms (ok, first time he was drunk and singing that funny song). Well, in all that lust and passion, isn't it magnificent for a southern gentleman to have his Gone with the wind moment. Funny thing, every time they draw lines of kinkiness with water sports, my naughty mind thinks that golden showers might be exactly what Roman needs to treat his OCD! π @JJQuinn, I'm sooo impatient to see 'wake up'! Why do I feel Tara might have the pleasure of running into...
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Magnificent finale of the chapter in The Shawshank Redemption closing scene style! This chapter brings two opposite emotions. First is about boys and Nate. The optimism and joy of reunion, witty banter between boys -That's like the incest triathlon! Nate is alive and that is something I wasn't sure about till the end of the chapter. You left their future open to many speculations and I'm impatiently waiting the final chapter. @349bdr might even get his wish about threesome fulfilled! The second is Enzo's story! If Nate is the (anti)hero, Enzo is the tragic hero. I know I'm repeating myself, but this is not the first time @CasualWanderer82 you write characters worth of the Antient Greek tragedy. His suicide didn't bring tears to my eyes, it has brought a shock of some deep sadness! I don't want it to sound as blasphemy, but there is something rooted in religion, we could see in Enzo's sacrifice, like he was taking off Nate's and his own debit with his own life. And not just their own pain, but the pain of all 'not good enough' sons and all unrequited loves of the world. "There's only one thing in this entire fucking world that could make Nate go against my father." The same was for Enzo! "My loyalty is with him," What a writing my friend!
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Oh, I want to see Joshua's confrontation with his parents!
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Chapter 3: Things spiral out of control for Gael.
Cane23 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 3: Things spiral out of control for Gael.
Who's Amanda? Carlos' older sister maybe?! What a bitch! Really?! Carlos are you moron or what?! What did he think, marry Natalie and have Gael for a dirty little secret?! This wedding planning is really humiliating... What's next, cooling them with a fen during the first wedding night?! π€ͺ- 7 comments
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LOL, Ben has a powerful crew! If we don't count the Almighty himself, you can add Roman and officer Whelan to the list! π€£π
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But Sam doesn't want his dog tags back, he wants Ben back! Sometimes "I'm sorry" is not enough... Sam has to prove that he'll not run away every time it gets hard. He has to deal with PTSD and show Ben they are together for better or worse. They'll come around... just keep reading! π
