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Part One: Son, You Stink
Cane23 commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Son, You Stink
LOL 🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂 You are killing me with your anecdotes! I don't know which one is more hilarious - this one ore the one with "sexless gay cruising"!!!!- 50 comments
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CET the same! Btw, it's much easier since we have smart phones and time is automatically changed. It was hell in the past when we had to do it manually! 🤪
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Part One: Son, You Stink
Cane23 commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Son, You Stink
I've just wanted to strip Brandon of and ... no, not that...but, put him in the shower and brush him with some strong detergent for an hour! And then to make full disinfection of his place!!! 🤪 Is it for Brandon some sort of rebellion, stinky rebellion? Btw, even stinky and sloppy, he is no less likable character! The legal banter in Tayler's home is amazing! These people are so inconvenient but great parents nevertheless! Maybe too much effort, stinky Tayler could just poison them with his smell!- 50 comments
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Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Cane23 commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
I know who is witty!- 36 comments
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Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Cane23 commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Oh, I like Brandon, highly intelligent artistic guy, witty, self-confident, a bit slutty but not in a bad way...with attitude "I'm the King of the World"!- 36 comments
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@Andr0gene writes amazing story about handwritten letters exchange: Return to Sender - Fiction - Gay Authors! Hope he comes back from a hiatus asap! 🤞
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I knew @Summerabbacat was going to be thrilled with Vince as a "cat person"! Does it mean Gray is a "dog person" or not "animal person" at all? His 'disease' comment made me think he might have some sort of OCD! Ha, Mett on the spectrum and Gray with OCD - match from a heaven! Whereas with 15-year-old Freddie, the look suited him, Vince gave off the aura of having forgotten to get dressed. @Robert Hugill, your descriptions are so uniquely realistic that I had to leave "laughing" emoticon!
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LOL 😂🤣😂 Just a fact that school has approached to a bulling problem seriously and have a plan for it, sounds promising. Nevertheless, Lucas' situation is far more serious, and it is not going to be resolved on school level! Boy is desperate and dangerous, for himself as much as for others!
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Give him a chance, there's a lot hidden beneath the surface!
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I'm not sure yet, is Matt just shy and insecure or he is somewhere on the spectrum ... lightly... Anyway, I find him rather likable! 🙂
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LOL, it looks like they are speaking different languages! Btw, how is Ryder so sure that Thomas Pembroke is his mate?
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I agree with @CincyKris - funniest chapter yet indeed! "Dick airport"!!!! 😂🤣🤣 And this: He knew the moment he saw them! How?!? These guys are incredible perceptive and intelligent! Btw, does the end of this chapter indicates that smut scene is coming, with guys having sex while Tara watching TV in next door room?!?
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Am I allowed to compliment myself for being brave enough to became GA member?! 🤔
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OMG! I had to use online converter to check am I seeing right!!! -37C!?!?!?1? Are you at the North Pole?! 🥶
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“Who can be wise, amazed, temperate and furious, / Loyal and neutral, in a moment? No man.” — William Shakespeare @CasualWanderer82 in his new masterpiece brings the story of (Un)holy trinity – Father, Son and Stepbrother! Connected by love and loyalty, anger and frustration, future and past… these three men start dangerous journey of no return! At the end of this journey, each one of them will not be the same man. Magnificently hiding motives and feelings of the protagonists at the beginning of the story, author slowly, chapter by chapter reveals who they really are and what is the purpose of Men Up game. As in many of @CasualWanderer82's stories, his characters are strongly sexual beings. They express their feelings – love, anger, sadness, confusion, resignation…with sexual intercourse. Therefore, sex can be passionate, sensual, tender, wild, kinky … both physical and metaphysical. With elements of erotic fantasy, psychological thriller, darkness and criminal; coming of age and self-search; love and even family story with relations which might be twisted in real life, but in @CasualWanderer82's story they have perfect sense – we can say that author build his own, unique genre. If you are looking for romantic love story, you are at the wrong place but, if you are ready to be shaken from head to toes, to analyze every move or word, to enjoy something you wouldn't in your real life, extremely exciting forbidden fruit – than don’t miss this masterpiece!
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In a way, that lullaby symbolize the full circle - from father to lover, from lover to brother, from brother to lover again and from lover to father finally! Wonderful! 🙂
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He's total wuss, but I agree, being wuss is not a crime!
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Casting bread on the waters
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Casting bread on the waters
From his grandpa, of course ... With much better personality and human qualities than dirty old Philpott! -
The Lust Supper! Except, you are not Leonardo @CasualWanderer82 - you are Michelangelo! 😉
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It was never running to escape; it was running to buy some time! Running on Empty! The slow motion of the beginning of the chapter, dissect the scene frame by frame, showing the tension and revelation in a way that only @CasualWanderer82 can write it. What a table turning in hotel room. Many times, during the story, I’ve seen parallel between Caleb and Pawn. Pawn started a new game in ‘Kingdom of Man’ while Caleb, in all his glory and transformation brings Man Up game to a 3rd and final level, becoming ‘a temple’ of love for his brothers. He is teasing Nate with love, not cruelty, inviting him slowly to the boys’ embrace. The whole scene is mirroring reflection of the first chapter scene, with reversed roles and changed dynamics (yes, you did it again our dear @CasualWanderer82). If Man Up game had to start with wake-up call, in form of cruel and raw sexual explosion, it ends with firework of love. In one of the strongest and most passionate scenes, you’ve found the answer to the ultimate equation of their relationship – fission and fusion together in double penetration of the boy who finally becomes the family! The scene that took my breath away! When Ryan brought Caleb’s book on a road trip that was the most beautiful expression of love. In this chapter Nate makes such expression with words: "No matter what happens...." He paused briefly as if searching for the right words or perhaps gathering the courage to say them aloud. "You're my family. You always have been." The one who started this game, made his final move. Loyalty means sacrifice. There was never future for Nate and boys, it was all about preparing boys for the time without him. In epilogue, we see a new Caleb. OMG, he would have been such a badass mafia boss…wait a minute, it doesn’t mean he isn’t! In his magnificent endings, @CasualWanderer82 always leaves a space for readers to make their own scenarios of the future. This new Caleb, in my scenario, couldn’t leave Nate’s death unrevenged…could he?!
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It's 1 AM (CET)! Too late (early) to calm my emotions and collect my thoughts... I'm leaving my comment and Review later...now... MY DEEPEST RESPECT DEAR @CasualWanderer82! ANOTHER MASTERPIECE!
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I always hoped for some redemption for John but after this chapter, I don't care anymore. He has made his own bed and all he did was out of his cowardness or selfishness. I cannot believe I'll write this, but that's how I feel - it is sad that Daniel is dead, and John is alive! Luckily for John, there is so much love in his children (not thanx to him and his wife) that he might get the embrace and comfort he is desperately needing! Dr Robert Fenton?! 🤔 "Learn to be honest with yourself and the world around you,” I hope he will because this might be his last chance.
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February CSR Discussion Day: Just Keep Swimming by JJ Quinn
Cane23 commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Btw, I've found this hilarious!!! 😂🤣🤣 It has never occurred to me to listen 'smut audio'!!! I can only imagine monotone, boring woman voice telling all those naughtiness of two man f*cking... -
February CSR Discussion Day: Just Keep Swimming by JJ Quinn
Cane23 commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Amazing interview @JJQuinn, I'm so glad you've found your place as GA author. This community is something special! So many ideas and plans ... that's the spirit girl, bravo! 'Swimming' is charming story but @JJQuinn's real gem and masterpiece is Finding Home: Halos and Heroes, Bk 1 - Fiction - Gay Authors I recommend it wholeheartedly!!! -
Chapter 5: Amanda lets Gael have a taste of her venom
Cane23 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Amanda lets Gael have a taste of her venom
Bravo Gael, one sparkling moment with Alex was enough to raise your self-confidence. You should love and respect yourself more! As for the Carlos ... “You’re acting like I’m the villain here,”! No honey, you are the Saint Carlos the Wonderworker! 😜
