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Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Is Natasha as sweet as sour milk or does she sour sweet milk? Hmm 🤔🤔 -
Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
'Measured and kind' or considered use of understatement? Sometimes readers start disliking one of my characters and later warm to them, like with Vanessa. I will admit that I don't expect any to warm to Natasha. 😸😼 -
Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Ah I have many fuzzy memories of keg parties. -
Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
You are right @Daddydavek, Martin needs to reach out to his children more. Martin has taken Simon's advice too much to heart and is reluctant to disclose his changed circumstances. -
Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Natasha is very self centred. -
Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
I'm amazed @Davide,I didn't know you'd met her!- 36 comments
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Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
You're right about leadership @Cane23, but keep in mind Martin's comment on the plane about psychologists, You know we are great at helping people understand their problems and how to use coping strategies but not so good at doing the same for ourselves.- 36 comments
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autonomy - Word of the Day - Sat Mar 21, 2026
Paladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
My daughter installed a new kitchen and sent a family text, "I've got a blue kitchen'. My son responded, "I hope it's better soon." -
Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
All very true @akascrubber, but how is it all going to work out? Lots of turmoil?- 36 comments
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Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Hold that thought about Natasha, @Davide. Benjamin and Justin are good for each other and living with Martin may be good for everyone.- 36 comments
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Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Benjamin actually has good reasons. Wrangling mum is an issue. Yes, Adelaide will be interesting.- 36 comments
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Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
I'm sure this is the first time I've been called 'a fine upstanding gentleman' or for that matter even a 'gentleman'. I may not remember the Liquorland but I do remember that disgusting Passion Pop, commonly referred to as 'leg openers'. Fortunately, I was a beer drinker in those days. -
Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Sorry @Flip-Flop , bush cooking will be of only little help. The lyrics of 'Waltzing Matilda' will be more help. Also some interesting points, especially regarding the boys living with him and the business trip.- 36 comments
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Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
I'm pleased, @Summerabbacat that I have brought back, hopefully, enjoyable memories of your time living nearby Forest Lodge. I, of course , will deny any knowledge of the Liquorland at broardway. -
Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Sorry @Summerabbacat . our first meeting with Natasha is a couple of chapters away. There is other turmoil in Martin's life. Yes, I also like Pavlova made with chick pea brine.- 36 comments
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autonomy - Word of the Day - Sat Mar 21, 2026
Paladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
There are many people who believe they achieve autonomy through sovereign citizenship. -
The next morning Martin was making coffee and preparing breakfast when Rick and Simon entered the kitchen. Rick breathed in deeply and sighed, “Ah, once again one of your fabulous breakfasts,” and then cheekily added, “brings back memories of your flat in London.” Simon and Martin blushed appropriately, as Martin responded, “Help yourself to coffee. You obviously need it. Food coming up shortly.” After a breakfast of scrambled eggs on toast with bacon and grilled tomato, Simon tha
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Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
I think between the drinking, food and swimming the evening was more social than drunken. I'm sure they had a satisfying night. -
Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Ah yes! That demon alcohol who enhances the desire and steals the ability! -
Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
You'll have to wait a few chapters before seeing Natasha and her reaction. Meanwhile more turmoil for Martin. -
Turmoil Chapter 4 – decisions and revelations
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Turmoil Chapter 4 – decisions and revelations
Yes, I've had all of that. -
shamrock - Word of the Day - Tue Mar 17, 2026
Paladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Don’t miss what’s happening People on X are the first to know. . -
Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Justin is very grounded and good for Benjamin, so you will learn more about him soon. -
Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
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Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Bert has told us he is an Earl and suggested Martin assume his subsidiary title of Viscount. Martin is reluctant to use his doctorate title. Don't expect Martin to flaunt his title, but there may be occasions when it could be useful.
