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  1. Paladin
    Nathan and Martin are definitely cute together but they still have a lot to work through. Rick and Simon are there to help. Benjamin's twin is Maria, Noah is their younger brother. They do come into the story later. You will meet Natasha in the next chapter @Summerabbacat. I'm sure you will have more observations then.
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    I thought people on the Mediterranean weren't allowed to complain about the weather. I thought it was always like the Queensland promotional campaign, "Beautiful one day, perfect the next." Natasha does appear in the next chapter.
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    Lucky you. On holiday. In a bar with your phone open waiting for notifications. OK full holiday disclosure, what apps were you monitoring?
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    Yes @chris191070 life is like that. It has its ups and downs, Tumultuous. Don't worry, Martin and Nathan will get more but not immediately. More about Ben next chapter.
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    The unsure lovers exchanged text messages as Nathan was on his way to work where he had difficulty concentrating on his clients as his mind kept slipping back to Martin and last night. During a break he went out for a coffee and tried to rationalize what was happening to him. He looked around the café and through the window onto the street. No, he didn't see himself as attracted to men. Even those in the café and walking past that he could appreciate as "cute" or "attractive" did zero for h
  6. Paladin
    I admire the courage of the few elite sportsmen who have been prepared to come out publicly as gay, at great risk to their careers.
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    Chapter 11

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11

    My impression was that Pip is a demon when pumping Charlie.
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    Simon is well paid. Also his lover, Rick, is an important member of the family business. He's doing OK
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    Chapter 11

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11

    Did Pip get promoted in all the chaos?
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    Chapter 8

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8

    That's a good line!
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    Chapter 8

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8

    The Ley lines at the church are important. Does the squad have a way of interfering with their power?
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    Chapter 8

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Or Demons in the 1970's
  13. Paladin
    Worse than being unapologetic is being insincerely apologetic or using the non apology wording favoured by PR companies and lawyers.
  14. Paladin
    Martin agrees with you @VBlew, which is why he has referred Ray to Nathan. I'm sure Simon hopes so. Time will tell where this goes.
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    I love it!
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    Chapter 7

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Pip has burst on the scene and is making his presence known. He is very challenging.
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    Chapter 7

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 7

    So organised Simon has been developing his magic skills by reading Michael's journal and colour coding it. (Red for fire spells)
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    Yes @Summerabbacat, @Daddydavek and @Flip-Flop, Nathan will continue as an important character in this story.
  19. Paladin
    As I've already indicated, more on the Ray and Charlie situation in some future chapters. Martin and Nathan are both going slowly because this is new territory for them. If they continue they will both face the turmoil of accepting their sexuality and coming out.
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    They really didn't know what they were doing. Thanks to his experiences with Simon and Rick, Martin had a few ideas and that was about all.
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    I think all males would cringe at the thought of genitals being painfully damaged as in the barbed wire fence incident. However, as @drsawzall has recounted such things do happen.
  22. Paladin
    Thanks @chris191070.
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    @Ticklishboy30. They are not names that are easy to ship. Marthan and Nattin don't work either. Maybe they'll work something out if their relationship develops.
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    It will be a few more chapters before you learn more about Ray and the dynamics of the issue.
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    You are right @Cane23 there is another dynamic at play here,not a lovers' quarrel, but something else.
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