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  1. Paladin
    Lots of thoughts in there @Summerabbacat. I don't think it's a spoiler to say that this is the same Nathan who in the future snuck out of this story to work with Joshua and Daniel. There will be more about Ray and Charlie in future chapters, along with Martin and Nathan and unsuccessful marriages. I'm pleased that your references to blue eyes and music avoided 'Ol' Blue Eyes'.
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    Simon, Rick and Martin caught a morning flight so they could be checked into the hotel and organized before lunch time. After eating in the lounge at Sydney airport and again on the plane (to please Rick they had flown business) they didn't need lunch so Simon and Martin headed straight to the South Australian (SA) Equal Opportunity Commission. Rick headed for the restaurant to talk to the staff. The meeting at the commission went well. The officer assigned to their case was impressed that
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    We are heading into a family mystery. What exactly does Carmine mean by I need to set things right and give them their inheritances? It all sounds good but no one trusts Carmine. So what's going on? Hmm.
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    Does that mean there are some things there now that weren't there on April 1! Judicious editing?
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    Yes, it didn't post everywhere on April 1
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    Chapter 4

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 4

    I had the same thought but about both Charlie and Taine. Charlie is about body image and the body he worked hard to develop and loved is now occupied by someone else. He is now working on the body he occupies to make it sexually attractive and who is appreciating that? Yes Ellis is laughing.
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    Chapter 3

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Maybe immortality comes in different forms. Captain jack suffered injuries that should have killed him but within a minute he was fully recovered and whole.
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    Chapter 3

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Yes, immortal means recovery from mortal injuries, including those that cause death and obviously the regeneration of severed limbs
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    Chapter 2

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2

    They are ideal boyfriends, especially with Matt taking care of Simon in ways he doesn't know he needs to be taken care. Simon has more magic than he is aware of. Now how else is he going to use it, wittingly or unwittingly?
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    Chapter 2

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Mum's making shepherd's pie, At lunch Simon says he's vegetarian. That doesn't seem to have registered with Matt and his mother. I assume the maroon meat eating plant is the anti-vegan.
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    Chapter 2

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Matt is wonderful. Even after he finds out the the reform school is not a prison but a day school, he can't drop his belief that Simon needs a cake with a file in it.
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    Dream or parallel universe or other dimension? This world has differences from the world Greg was in before being turned. Also Greg seems to be a stranger in this world. He doesn't know his schedules or having a boyfriend. Have the two Greg's been swapped? If so, I'm dying to find out the other Greg's reaction when he finds himself in Vampire land.
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    Silken is an antonym of yesterday's word coarse. While some people coat their discourse in coarse language.most politicians coat their discourse in silken language.
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    What can I say @Summerabbacat! We already know you don't like her and meeting her won't change that. As to how accurate you are, you'll just have to wait until after Adelaide to find out.
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    Fractured Reality

    Paladin commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Fractured Reality

    Jack stopped for a moment. He did have tiny claws. And his hands weren’t exactly the way he remembered them. They were kind of hairy, and hairy was the exact opposite of what Jack was, aka hairless. Was mountain goat meat known for hallucinogenic properties? He shook his head, and his hands looked normal again. His fingernails had just grown a little, and he was imagining things. Is this Jack hallucinating or is it the magic beyond the veil turning him into a wolf shifter mate for Theo?
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    A lot in there @Philippe. Hold those thoughts. Yes there are a couple of 18th birthdays on the horizon.
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    True, but there could be some more turmoil first.
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    Great thoughts @Davide. Again Martin is backing himself into a corner by not being open. He does have some concerns about Natasha finding out. Justin must begin to wonder why he isn't being asked to pay rent.
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    Martin is backing himself into a corner. The longer he takes to be open, the harder it is going to be. Rick and Simon are part of this family.
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    Yes Natasha will continue to be a thorn. Thanks @chris191070. Yes moving in is good for Justin and will be for Benjamin and Martin.
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    More like Cyclone Natasha.
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    So there you have it. More background on Justin and he's moved into the house. Next Adelaide and the promise that Benjamin will move in next weekend. What could possibly go wrong?
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    When Martin arrived home on Friday the boys were again waiting out the front for him. Again he thought he should give them some keys. They helped him with the groceries he had purchased and put them in the kitchen, however for now, eating was low on the boys' agenda. All they wanted to do was talk about moving in. "We've been talking dad and thinking about why we want to live here. And yes having sex together is one of the reasons but it's not the top one." Martin liked the fact they
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    Years ago i had a friend who taught in a teacher training degree. He always started his first session by asking the students to think of a high school teacher they admired and write down what it was about that teacher that they admired. He collected the responses to collate, graph and use in future lessons. All sounds good, but this particular year one of his students wrote that what they admired about their high school teacher was "his knowledge of the coarse." Of course, they would!
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