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  1. Without my glasses everything is out of focus. Sometimes things are out of focus because of too many glasses.
  2. Paladin

    Chapter 5

    Quote: Then, below the map, he started a list in his tight, blocky script. LYDIA. Resources. Intel. Ruthlessness. OLIVER. Access. Ledgers. Motive. EVIDENCE. (What? Where?) TIMELINE. Founder’s Day Gala. Pressure point. EXIT STRATEGY. For Orel. I would prefer" Lydia, Orel, Eliminate, Tarquin, Excruciatingly
  3. Paladin

    Chapter 2

    Phoenix and Billy are certainly an awesome fated couple. So Billy is adding additional fetish ideas to Randy's porno script. I hope Phoenix and Billy rest over the weekend. Monday could be very exhausting.
  4. Paladin

    Chapter 1

    What is Randy scripting for our two ticklish fetish porn stars? Now, searches online for . . . . no, not for that 😊
  5. Paladin

    Chapter 5

    I love the frozen leg of lamb murder. It was first published by Roald Dahl but I remember the Alfred Hitchcock adaption for his TV series.
  6. Paladin

    Chapter 4

    Maybe enhanced recycled water
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    Chapter 4

    5'9" that's nearly enough to bury a problem.
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    Chapter 4

    You left out Brian and Alex. Poor Alex. He'd hardly tasted Merrickville water before - poof Somehow Lydia can wade through water.
  9. Paladin

    Chapter 4

    All those gay guys in Merrickville. I knew it! It's in the water!
  10. Paladin

    Chapter 4

    There's an old saying: The first generation establishes the business; the second generation builds the empire; and the third generation squander it all.
  11. Paladin

    Chapter3

    A line has been drawn and Lydia and Finn are ready to fight. Allies are being gathered. We are about to see the start of Operation Overlorded Orel. Rescuing Orel is the mission. Collateral? Tarquin.
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    Chapter 2

    I was thinking of it as the highlight of the parade float. Something colourful and dramatic for his exit.
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    Chapter 2

    I would prefer to see him fired from the cannon with the gilt edged confetti and into the sinkhole he wouldn't repair.
  14. Paladin

    Chapter 1

    I already love this story and the crumbs that are left for us to find along the trail. F+O in a heart. In the past that O was Orel, in the present (car's future) it will be Oliver. The restoration will be a result of the love Oliver and Finn have for the car. What could symbolize that better than their initials inside a heart scratched into the stainless steel door sill. It's like a proud concreter who subtly leaves his initials in a quiet corner.
  15. When I don't correct typos like that, I'm even more intent on being more me tomorrow. (I blame the red wine)
  16. It was my intent to comment on today's 'word of the day' but maybe I'll be more intent on doing it tomorrow.
  17. Paladin

    Chapter 21

  18. Paladin

    Chapter 21

    Well said @pvtguy
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    Chapter 21

    I agree @Flip-Flop, will the calm last? Adam was important in the lives of Jordan, Josh and Dan and they all needed their time to remember and farewell him.
  20. Paladin

    Chapter 21

    Yes @Daddydavek the boys are responding to the love and support they are receiving from their caregivers. More might be needed.
  21. Paladin

    Chapter 21

    Thank you @Lynx003 The two young couples still have a way to go but they are well on the way. There are still some things to be resolved.
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    Chapter 21

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    Chapter 1

    and a ticklish librarian
  24. Paladin

    Chapter 21

    So do I!
  25. Paladin

    Chapter 21

    Thanks @Davide. Yes they are all looking hopefully to the future. Yes Daniel and Kevin are working out how to be sexually comfortable with each other. Kevin's love is really good for Daniel.
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