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  1. Paladin

    Chapter 4

    Now there's form 666.65 (rounded) to be used to requisition those?
  2. Paladin

    Chapter 4

    And he's concerned about the effect on his election campaign. After all, he has to look good.
  3. Paladin

    Chapter 4

    Ah yes the Ministry would be involved. I can't imagine the paperwork. Cecil would be 100 before it could be completed.
  4. Paladin

    Chapter 4

    A Question: If they failed the inspection what would happen to Cecil? There are only two parties in this case (*Nightshade v. Hartley et al.*) so would failing the inspection mean Cecil would go back to his mother? I don't think so!
  5. Paladin

    Chapter 4

    More Gargoyle-Binkie-esque. Now if it can direct fire quenching water in Cecil's direction it would be useful.
  6. Even after many millennia the Occult hasn't learnt to how the control Its Bureaucracy. Following Parkinson's Law the Occult Bureaucracy has continued to grow and has now become a prisoner to its own paperwork. Charlie, who really isn't a charlie, has to cope with the Ministry while discovering himself and saving humanity from a power hungry Edgar. In Charlie's squad's world of demons, cherubs, angels, pyromancers, immortals and wrestlers, anything can happen, and because it can, usually does. A totally out of this world, romping, hilarious and compelling read. Don't miss it.
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  7. Paladin

    Chapter 3

    Grandmother, Gam-Gam, would oppose Cecil's return to his mother, at least while she still has firefighting equipment.
  8. Paladin

    Chapter 3

    What the Dickens is this all about? Charlie, Help!
  9. Paladin

    Chapter 3

    The Devil Wears Prada ?????
  10. Paladin

    Chapter 2

    Could be worse. He could have been named Sue.
  11. Oh your amazing imagination @Summerabbacat but you are right, definitely no camp persona.
  12. But, if she's on a leash of her own making!
  13. Thank you noticing and especially for commenting. I'm pleased that readers appreciate some of the little things I plant in my stories.
  14. That could all still be one man! The barman asked him what he wanted. "I'll have an entendre, no make it a double." So the barman gave him one.
  15. Paladin

    Chapter 2

    Will Simon find a loophole in the Ministry's bureaucracy? Misplaced paperwork? No birth certificate or maybe an incorrectly completed or lodged birth certificate? Cecil seems to be warming to this dads along with smoke, flame and Latin.
  16. Paladin

    Chapter 1

    Tyler is confident about his relationship with Taine. He may be relying on love and lust, or his status in the Ministry database as a Class-A Metaphysical Dependent to an Immortal Entity (Taine). I love that he is tempting Taine to attempt a relationship with Charlie.
  17. Paladin

    Chapter 11

    #TeamCherub not #TeamCharub ??
  18. Not long now before you meet her @Summerabbacat.
  19. Thank you @Lynx003. I'm still working on the sequel to 'What Brings Us Together' told from Daniel and Kevin's perspective. Hmm only the future will tell if the stories dovetail. 🤞
  20. Thanks @Flip-Flop. Keep reading Natasha next chapter and later, more on Martin and Nathan.
  21. Yes @Daddydavek, a few more bumps. I agree it would make sense for Nathan to move and live with Martin. They would have the support of two same sex couples. Yes adulthood is only a few months away for the twins.
  22. A sad situation @Gary L. Australia is also facing the grim results of climate change. The Great Barrier Reef is suffering.
  23. Yes @Davide Nathan and Martin need to come to understand their sexuality. While they don't need to label themselves they have to deal with how other people label them. Natasha features in the next chapter. Noah's age hasn't been mentioned, but he is 16 (Year 10 at school). He's straight.
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