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The story is progressing really well. It's nice to see Neil doing better. Unlike what Neil probably hopes, I don't think Alex is interested in him—more likely in Sammy. Alex's little brother is still a mystery, but I believe we'll learn more about him later.🙂
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I remember you don't like cliffhangers😄😄
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Good questions. The answers... unfortunately, I can't give them just yet.😉 Josel has a lot to process emotionally, and he's not very good at that kind of inner reflection. Also this 'utter chaos' may bring surprises.
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Thank you for your kind feedback. Josel still has some things to sort out in his own mind. Unfortunately, the situation is not easy, especially with Renn around😬
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I thought a cliffhanger would fit well at the end of this chapter. Unfortunately, you'll have to wait two weeks for more details, since next week Rezak will be the narrator😄 There was definitely a good dose of teen angst here. Sometimes it's nice to have a bit of drama too, even though the main focus of the story is adventure. Questions are very welcome ❤️
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Josel The day had been just as hot and muggy as the ones before. Even in the early evening, the heat lingered, promising a sweltering night. It was the perfect moment for a refreshing swim. Josel walked away from the campsite, a clean shirt slung over his shoulders and a bar of soap in hand. After a long day of riding, they had pitched their tents on a slope overgrown with tall grass, which gently descended toward a small grove and the lake beyond. Melgy had advised the teenagers
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Yep! 😄 Heroes who are either too old or too young. How could such a group defeat the rising Darkness? 😬
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Well said. A group of misfits indeed - drunks, tramps, and thieves 😂
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Thank you for your comment🥰 Indeed, Franz is like his father in his restlessness. Franz's role in this story is slowly growing. Like the other boys, he has his own important role to play in the overall plot. I wish I could reveal more about the Sandkan family, but you'll have to wait a bit.🤫
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Josel is the narrator in the next chapter. The atmosphere in that chapter is quite heated.🙃 More of the Sandkan family's secrets are revealed a little later on. 🤠
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Franz "Dad!?" Franz Landez half-asked, half-shouted. "Franz?" the man uttered with a grunt, and then the two of them simply gawked at each other. It was impossible to come up with anything sensible to say - impossible to say anything at all. Masked Thief was a real person, and now standing before Franz was his own father, who was both Masked Thief and the supposedly dead Rummo Landez. None of it made sense. Nothing made sense anymore. But no matter how many times Franz blinke
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I'm just happy that you're excited🥰 I've been thinking that for my next book, I could publish two chapters a week, so there wouldn't be such a long gap between updates.
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I understand your point very well.🙂 The plots of these secondary characters and villains build the story as a whole, which is why they have to be included. Franz is the POV character in the next chapter.
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Mocvann Vendum, Grand Duchy of Malkania Only with great effort did she manage to suppress the rage swelling inside her. She wanted to break something - or hurt someone. Having come agonizingly close, she had failed yet again. Despite all she had sacrificed, the only damage she had inflicted was a shallow scratch on Zal. Would that be enough to kill the old man? Mocvann dared not hope too much, for Zaltarim Fizol had wriggled out of dire straits before. The events at Castle Cache had
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@RainbowPhoenixWI Thank you for your kind words. I think that as the story progresses, there will be new reasons to put me in the dog house😬😁 In a few more chapters, we'll be about halfway through this third book, so the plot will start to pick up speed.🙉 Renn really deserves to be punished. Let's see if I can fulfill the readers' wishes in that regard.👻👹
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@drsawzall Renn and Jolanda – what a lovely romantic couple😄😅Unfortunately, Renn isn't interested in women, so he continues to pursue Zdain. Josel has matured during the journey. He still reacts impulsively to events, but he knows how to make the right choice when he has a little time to think things over. @VBlew Josel certainly didn't expect this from Zdain. Not many people can take it lightly when they find out that their best friend is in love with them. Now he has a lot to think about.💭🤔
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@akascrubber Thanks for your comment. Let's see how it goes🙂
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@Seraph28 True. Josel reacted impulsively to the news, as he often does. But he now has time to think about it calmly. When we meet the boys next time, we will definitely return to the subject.😺 It's also certain that Renn won't give up easily.😨
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Josel Life on the trail had its perks, sure - but Josel was starting to feel the drawbacks piled up far higher. One of the worst? Laundry. Melgy had made it perfectly clear: the boys were responsible for their own clothing. Just as firmly, she had pointed out that their clothes reeked. So now, Josel crouched by a small, sparkling stream, grumbling under his breath as he scrubbed his underwear against a rock, hoping to get them even remotely clean. No wonder the clothes stank. They had
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It's very likely. Still, I try to surprise my readers.😁
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Really good points. I agree with that. 😄
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Yes, dual-POV chapters are coming in the future as well. If a chapter would otherwise be short, I often combine two POVs. That said, we still don't know the scarred man's motives. He did, however, help Zal against Mocvann and the dreaders.
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Vargan has big goals, but is he really prepared for all the risks involved? Only time will tell. The boys are currently facing many threats from various sources. Let's wish them luck!😬
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@Seraph28 Thanks for your comment! 🥰 Berron Rigailon is an example of how even good people can sometimes stray onto the wrong path. He is now paying for his mistake. Vargan has a high opinion of himself and believes that he can control everything around him. Speaking of Josel and Zdain, in the next chapter Josel returns to POW.🙂
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Isendar Dimalos, Andiol Empire Everything had gone well so far - not brilliantly, but well enough for Isendar Vargan. And everything would continue that way, as long as Morth Lefretz stayed obediently in line. So far, there were no signs of trouble. Isendar Vargan stood beside Lefretz in the grand hall of the Shadow Cross headquarters, watching the man's pudgy fingers glide across a sheet of parchment. The leader of the Shadow Cross received an enormous number of letters from al
